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wyl_stevenUID: 2728535

3.31

the twenty first century withness a worldwide transformation,television,an important invention,plays a essential role in our lives. This is where the problem arises,As time flying,some people hold the opinion that it is passive for young people when they made a survy over a period of several years.As every coin has two sides,I think televison has negative impact on u,indeed.But we cannot deny the
benefits it brings to us.

The first reason that I want put forward is that we acquired more information through the TV programme.With news,we know what has happened in the ohter countries.With live show,we can share the experience of
a successful people.With
fashion channel,we keep the peace of the world.This is the time we called information exoplosion,Obviously,television has a great effect on the way we get the information,especially for young people
.

Another reason cannot be ignored is
television can release the preesuer of study in young people,especially for students.Take my experience for example.After work and study in the daytime,I usually watch TV in the evening.Humor and happy talk show,a programme I like most,brings a lot of enjoyment to me.I relax myself and ease my mind, TV help me have a good rest.In the weekends,I play with TV games with my friends,not only we have a lot of fun,but we have a better understanding to each other as well.For me, television is a integral part of my life.
However,when young people addict to the TV shows,it accutally has negative effects on them.Too much time waste on TV has made them cut their study time or even rest time.The reslut is they forget their unfinished homework or feel sleepy in the class.Another problem is some TV maker are not responsilbe for young,for they make movie or shows containing violent or criminal information.which lead to the problem that young people are more easily to be anger.

Television,likes a double edge sword,has positive and neagtive effects on young people.We can make a better use of a tevelvision as long as we change the way we used to use it.As a immature person,a youg people also has to
learn self control so that he or she can get away from of the neagtive effects.

wyl_stevenUID: 2728535

the twenty first century witnessed a worldwide transformation,which brings  to us a new concept of teaching in the university.The concept,supported by some people and expert,is all the students in the colledge must have to learn the  basic science.From my perspective,I totally agree with this opinion,for it has the following reasons.
The first reason I want put forward is  that basic science can enhance our horizon,improve our ability to solve the problem we meet,enrich our experience.As I student major in computer science,what I have learned in the college is most about math,physics,and programme.However,some people hold the opinion, which I donnot agree,that is not essential for me to learn the basic science such as physics and chemestry.As for me,basic science teach me how to walk in the world of science and give me inspiration in my computer study.Most of all,with basic science learning,I have made myself  think more logic.
Another reason can not be ignored is that learning basic science made us known our life better and live  more comfortable conditions. Some of my friends,who donot have learned the basic science,often complained that the problem in their life such as tax calculation in their work,which is easy for a person who has learned math.For my sister,she works in company as a editor,every months she gives her bills to me for checking.After half a year,I feel tired of such easy work,so I teach the basic laws of math and make her known every part in her bills and the relationship in the equations which relate to tax calculation.Soon she gets it and she never ask someone else for help on calculation.Sometimes,I mean,Basic science make us has more easier life.

However,for some people,basic science may be applied to their life few times.It is better for them,who major in laws or history and some other courses,to acquire more about their own specific knowledge.It not pays to them to use much time to the basic science and nature. But they should all learn the laws of nature.because they are the the objective descriptions of the world.

As far as I conclude,I think the basic science for us are all necessary.However, for some student s,at least,they may need know the basic laws of science and common phenomena,for they have to know the nature and science.

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

The twenty first century withness(withness?什么意思呀？) a worldwide transformation, television, an important invention ,plays a essential role in our lives. This is where the problem arises. As time flying, some people hold the opinion that it is passive for young people when they made a survy(survy?) over a period of several years(a period of several years是不是有点啰嗦). As every coin has two sides, I think television has negative impact on us, indeed. But we cannot deny the benefits it brings to us.

The first reason that I want put forward(want your forward好像也不合适吧，用pay attention to之类的合适点) is that we acquired more information through the TV program. With news, we know what has happened in the other countries. With live show, we can share the experience of; a successful people. With' fashion channel, we keep the peace(pace) of the world. This is the time we called information explosion, Obviously, television has a great effect on the way we get the information, especially for young people.

Another reason cannot be ignored is television can release the pressure of study in(in介词不对，还是of吧) young people, especially for students. Take my experience for example. After work and study in the daytime, I usually watch TV in the evening. Humor and happy talk show, a program I like most, brings a lot of enjoyment to me. I relax myself and ease my mind, TV help me have a good rest. In the weekends, I play with(with不要吧) TV games with my friends, not only we have a lot of fun, but we have a better understanding to each other as well .For me, television is a integral part of my life

However,when young people addict to the TV shows, it accutially(accuracy?) has negative effects on them. Too much time waste on TV has made them cut their study time or even rest time. The result is they forget their unfinished homework or feel sleepy in the class. Another problem is some TV maker are not responsible for young(young people), for they make movie or shows containing violent or criminal information, which lead to the problem that young people are more easily to be anger.

Television likes a double edge sword, has positive and negative effects on young people. We can make a better use of a television as long as we change the way we used to use it. As a(an) immature person, a young people also has to.learn self control so that he or she can get away from of the negative effects.
个人觉得LZ最大的缺点就是词汇拼写错误太多，这个应该会比较吃亏吧~呵呵，之后注意哦

babydesignUID: 2784974

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.

While some people advocate that they prefer to make friends with intelligent people, I, personally prefer to have a friend with a good sense of humor, because a humor friend could bring us much more tremendous happiness to our tedious life than the intelligent one.

First and foremost, in the increasingly pressure modern society, having a friend who has a good sense of humor could significantly help us to release the stress. Because the humor is remarkable effective in managing stress and maintain mental health. For example, when we feel depression and tired, a humor friend bring us laugh which could help us resulting in lower bloods pressure and lower pulsing rate, eventually bringing out the relaxation response and calmness. In contrast, if we have a friend who is intelligent and lack humor, stress will not be released, instead, surely will be aggravated. Since when people had an intelligent or capacity person around them, competition consciousness could inevitably be stimulated, which led the mental pressure arouses. Therefore, indeed, it is better to make friends with the humorousness, due to people deserve their life filling with laugh, happiness rather than stress.  

In addition, a friend who has a good sense of humor is much easier to communicate with than the intelligent one. It is true that people may feel free when they face to a humor person. Why does this happen? First of all, since we know humor is like the lubricant of any communication, especially when people have a conflict, it could help people take off “alert statues”, calm their central nervous and minimize the misunderstanding. Secondly, when people talk a humor friend, his humorous feedback may encourage them overcome some communication problems such as poor voice production and nervousness. Finally, as people’s timidity is deceasing, self-confidence will be gradually achieved which eventually brings out the successful interaction. In contrary, some intelligent friends may be used to be proud of themselves on account of their talent, thus they may always overlook others’ opinion and trigger other’s timidity as much as antipathy. In conclusion, making a humor friend is much better than having an intelligent friend.

However, the advantage of making friends with an intelligent person could not be left out, although getting a humor one gives people considerable benefits. For example, if people have accidental problems, they would like to have the intelligent friends who can provide the advisable suggestions to solve trouble which barely the one only having humor can do.

In sum, it is undoubtedly that making friends with the humorous people is much better than the intelligent ones, when the relaxation and easier communication are taken into consideration. Nevertheless, needless to say, we always want to own a humorous friend who is also intelligent, kind and helpful.

wyl_stevenUID: 2728535

the twenty first century witnessed a worldwide transformation, which on culture, politics, economy. Now we keep the world pace with many means. This is where the debate arises,some people point out that we should keep the way ,read newspaper to know the world better. However, from my perspective, I totally stand on the other side that watch TV is better,f or it is more realistic and immediately and economical.
First of all,with the technology development ,we have made live shows for several decades .We already have a more mature technology on live shows, which tells us what has happened  in the world .and what should we do is sit in front of a television instead of buying a newspaper. What is more important is the word in the newspaper is always abstract and confusing, for we often meet the case that we can describe in a word.While TV is more clear and realistic. Recently, I  read an article about a new republic present house in new Africa. The article begins with ' hundred steps leads to a  great high wall of the house', I get confused about the house is that a palace or other  edifices. I have not a picture in my mind. But in the evening news I see the same house in TV.
Not only dose it satisfy my curiosity, but makes me know the house is really magnificent that it beyond my imagination .

Secondly, we have admitted that newspaper  publish, at fast speed,is count on days. Every day we have to read the news about yesterday, what may make us miss the opportunity. Such is frequently in the stock market, once we miss the business news, we are more easily to miss the chance and even lose our money. However, TV has provides a much faster way, we see the news program in TV several times in a day. what is more important, the news are keep updating. We live in the time  
called information time, they are essential for our life,and the latest news is more valuable for us.

Last but not last ,we can save a lot of money by watching TV, for as TV makers always make money by advertisement. For  customers like us, we are free of money to see the  program such as news and live show. That is may never happened to newspaper.

As far as I conclude, it is not sensible to say that read newspaper is better than watch TV, for what I have mentioned above, I think watch TV is a more wise
choice to understand the truly  world.

443582555UID: 2762368

the twenty first century witnessed a worldwide transformation, which on culture, politics, economy）这句话蛮好 但是后面要跟个 电视 并且和后面不大通.） Now we keep the world pace with many means. This is where the debate arises,some people point out that we should keep the way ,read newspaper to know the world better. However, from my perspective, I totally stand on the other side that watch TV is better,f or it is more realistic （and） immediately and economical. 1 o: R. G/ M/ b
First of all, with the technology development ,we have made live shows for several decades .We already have a more mature technology on live shows, which tells us what has happened  in the world .（live show 是现场表演。。）and what should we do is sit in front of a television instead of buying a newspaper. What is more important is the word  in the newspaper is always abstract and confusing, for we often meet the case that we can describe in a word.没看懂啊  for 这样表原因吧。要不把形容word 的放word 后面）.  While TV is more clear and realistic（这句话. wtnwin 有一个更好的表达 可以借鉴一下）Recently, I  read an article about a new republic present house in new Africa. The article begins with ' hundred steps leads to a  great high wall of the house', I get confused about the house is that（weather） a palace or other  edifices. I have not a picture in my mind.（I have no idea）) But in the evening news I see(saw) the same house in TV.
Not only dose it satisfy my curiosity, but makes me know the house is really magnificent that it beyond my imagination .

Secondly, we have admitted that newspaper publish, at(the most) fast speed,is count on days. Every day we have to read the news about yesterday, what(定语从句吧 which) may make us miss the opportunity. Such is frequently in the stock market, once we miss the business news, we are more easily to miss the chance and even lose our money. However, TV has provides a much faster way, we see the news program in TV several times (in) a day. what is more important, the news are keep updating. We live in the time  
called information time(好像没这个英语说法的), they are essential for our life,and the latest news is more valuable for us./ `- B2 y1 P) Q- L
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Last but not last ,we can save a lot of money by watching TV, for as TV makers always make money by advertisement. For  customers like us, we are free of money to see the  program such as news and live show. That is may never happened to newspaper.( ~5 h6 V" d, k5 I( \, C
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As far as I conclude, it is not sensible to say that read newspaper is better than watch TV, for what I have mentioned above, I think watch TV is a more wise
choice to understand the truly  world.

题目问的是了解事件  扯到省钱额。。前面论证两个蛮好的但后面没东西谢了吧哈
加油吧   有些东西 我也不大清楚   

wyl_stevenUID: 2728535

As a telephone becomes an essential part of our lives,we may get uncomfortable when we turn off our phones during a trip by public transportation,for a great many people complain about that  they are always worry about we have missed the  message from ohters.However,from my perspective,I think we should turn off the phones in certain cases, for it has the following reasons.


First and foremost,it has not been allowed to use mobile phone when we take most airplanes,at least in most airlines in China.For the transmissions of phones will disturb the electronical system in the plane which leads to the plane in a dangerous condition.Compared with the reslut  of a catastrophe with hundreds lives lost,the trouble of turning off the phone is so tiny,indeed.As far as I thought,we should turn off the mobiles and tell our friends that we have to turn off the phone for some time before we aboard the plane.

Another negative effect when we use moblie is it will disturb others.Take my experience for example,I used to have a rest when I on a bus or train.The most disgust thing I feel is when I enjoy the quite atmosphere and it suddenly broken by a loudly and noisely mobile ring.That is a common thing in my life.However,on the other hand,when take a long journey,like a ten hours train trip,we always has something to deal with and phone is the only choice to keep a connection with others.That is why we always in the delimma.From my point,I think when we have to use our phones,we could take the vibration function on of our mobile and take a consideration of others' feelings.

In a word,my view on the claim is when the mobile is exempt from using,we should not use it,and in the other condition,we could use and keep quiet without disturbing others.

wyl_stevenUID: 2728535

4.4

The twenty century witnessed a worldwide transfomation,which coves the cars and airplanes.Cars,the most common vehicle in the world,play an important role in our life.Not only do they make our life more comfortable,but also promote the development of industry.However,from my perspective,I think it is not sensible to the claims that cars make a greater influence than airplanes,for it has the following reasons.

The cars can not compete with airplanes when the time taken into consideration.When we take a long journey,especially go to abroad,airplane has provided us with a more comfortable and faster service.Not only  has a plane with   a great faster speed than cars,but it will not has a traffic jam as well. The fact is a two hour trip in airplane may cost twenty hours and more  in cars.What is important,when we has an emergency  to go to another city hundreds miles away,of course ,airplane is our first choice.

Another positive effect that airplane brings about is it makes  impossibles  which was not realistic before possible.For example, when earthquake has happened,with a terrible desruction of roads and railways and other foundamental buildings.No one can deny that the important role of a plane plays.Food,water,and other valuable commodities were transported by airplanes.And with the digital camera in the planes,people could know the condition in the disaster area,and make a more effective rescue plan. Airplanes have approved its great meaning of existence.

However, before we draw a conclusion,we should have to see the other side of the claims.Not only do the car make our life easier by taking us go to the workplace or other place far from our home,but also release the pressure of population in the urban.With a car,we can live in the suburb and go to work on time as well.What is more, we enjoy the fresh air and beautiful scenery indeed.

In a word,I agree with the opinion that cars have a great influence on our life.However,when in some certain cases,I mentioned above,I think an airplane has a greater impact than a car

wyl_stevenUID: 2728535

4.5 好难写啊
The twenty first century witnessed a worldwide transformation, which covers culture, politics, and economy. With the society development, advertisement has become a integral part of our life, for we can see them in the television, on the street, in the magazines and etc This is where the problem arises, more and more people complain about that the product  they is not as good as it in the advertisement. I totally agree with this opinion, for it has the following reasons.

The first reason why I agree with the claim is that the purpose of the advertisement in our life is to sell more products, by which the producer will make more money. So the advertisement has been decorated by the producer to attract more customers to buy. Take the food advertisement for example, The food in the advertisement  always has a fresh color and   a big size. Which makes us has a illusion  that the food must be very delicious.

Another reason cannot be neglect is that celebrity always in the advertisements which make us thought that the product has a special function to help us with good appearance. Such is always happen in clothes advertisements ,a very famous superstar, with a gorgeous looking, wears the certain clothes. No one can deny that she or he dose not look good with the clothes.because he or she is a famous star, for they are more fascinate  or handsom than other people,and not for the clothes, because no matter what they wear,they always look good.That is why we feel the clothes in the advertisements are more beautiful.

However,with the technolgy development, products with new function which is beyond our imagination often come into our eyes. We may believe that product was not good,at the first glance, but it  really is. When the advertisement of Iphone shows in the television, many people don’t believe that such a think phone will have so many functions. and since they have use this new production, not only do they find it is true that the advertisement shows ,but also they enjoy this production.

As far as I thougt, most of the advertisements are more better than they real are, for they play as roles to improve the distribution.

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

10# wyl_steven
不好意思，昨天有事情木有改作文，今天一定补上哦~lz加油，呵呵

老王家的小猫UID: 2781258

The twenty century witnessed a worldwide transfomation (transformation), which coves (covers) the cars and airplanes. Cars, the most common vehicle in the world, play an important role in our life. Not only do they make our life more comfortable, but also promote the development of industry. However, from my perspective, I think it is not sensible to the claims that cars make a greater influence than airplanes, for it has the following reasons.

The cars cannot compete with airplanes when the time taken into consideration. When we take a long journey, especially go to abroad, airplane has provided us with a more comfortable and faster service. Not only  has（has放在这里没必要吧？有点不清楚） a plane with a great faster speed than cars, but it will not has a traffic jam as well. The fact is a two hour trip in airplane may cost twenty hours and more in cars. What is important, when we has an emergency  to go to another city hundreds of miles away, of course ,airplane is our first choice.

Another positive effect that airplane brings about is it makes  impossible(impossibility)  which was not realistic before possible. For example, when earthquake has happened, with a terrible desruction(destruction) of roads and railways and other foundamental(fundamental) buildings. No one can deny that the important role of a plane plays. Food, water, and other valuable commodities were transported by airplanes. And with the digital camera in the planes, people could know the condition in the disaster area, and make a more effective rescue plan. Airplanes have approved its great meaning of existence.

However, before we draw a conclusion, we should have to see the other side of the claims. Not only do the car make our life easier by taking us go to the workplace or other place far from our home, but also release the pressure of population in the urban. With a car, we can live in the suburb and go to work on time as well. What is more, we enjoy the fresh air and beautiful scenery indeed.

In a word, I agree with the opinion that cars have a great influence on our life. However, when in some certain cases, I mentioned above, I think an airplane has a greater impact than a car.(我觉得最后一句这样改下会不会更好，However, taking those certain cases I have mentioned above into account, I think an airplane has a greater impact than a car.)
感觉LZ的文章简练并且清晰，呵呵，不由有个别单词错误哦~

lain0119UID: 2695504

The twenty first century witnessed(用一般现在时就可以了) a worldwide transformation, which covers culture, politics, and economy(这个定语从句没得必要,把形容词整到主句可能更清爽). With the society development, advertisement has become a(n) integral part of our life, for we can see them(it) in the television, on the street, in the magazines and etc This is where the problem arises, more and more people complain about that the product  they is not as good as it in the advertisement(到处打广告推不出产品和广告不符吧= =). I totally agree with this opinion, for it has the following reasons. 第一段的背景引入是要注意逻辑滴~

The first reason why I agree with the claim is that the purpose of the advertisement in our life is to sell more products, by which(这个by which指代成了广告的目的了= =,应该就是广告啦,这里的定语从句没用好) the producer will make more money. So the advertisement has been decorated by the producer to attract more customers to buy. Take the food advertisement for example, The food in the advertisement  always has a fresh color and   a big size. Which makes us has a(n) illusion  that the food must be very delicious. 还没论证完,最好要具体说实际不是那么样的.
`Another reason cannot be neglect(ed) is that celebrity always in the advertisements which make us thought(think) that the product has a special function to help us with good appearance(要点题啊,要说明星打广告扭曲了我们的判断力). Such is always happen in clothes advertisements ,a very famous superstar, with a gorgeous looking, wears the certain(?) clothes. No one can deny that she or he dose not look good with the clothes(这句话太扭曲了...).because he or she is a famous star, for they are more fascinate  or handsom than other people,and not for the clothes, because no matter what they wear,they always look good.That is why we feel the clothes in the advertisements are more beautiful.

However,with the technolgy development, products with new function which is(are) beyond our imagination often come into our eyes(主题句没有点题啊). We may believe that (the) product was(is) not good,at the first glance, but it  really is. When the advertisement of Iphone shows in the television, many people don’t believe that such a think phone will have so many functions. and since they have use this new production, not only do they find it is true that the advertisement shows ,but also they enjoy this production.(这段完全跑题了,题目说的是广告里的东东是不是比实物更好,lz变成了广告的东东是不是与实物相符)
As far as I thougt, most of the advertisements are more better than they real are, for they play as roles to improve the distribution(这个词虽然比sales高级,但用在这里有点不合适也).

在上面罗罗嗦嗦了一堆以后我承认我比较挑剔吧= =
下面还要罗嗦几句~
1.不要用太多定语从句,冗长又容易出错.换点同位语,非谓语或者形容词之类的
2.注意句子中的时态主谓一致
3.每段主题句要简洁切题,看清题目,别跑题咯~
4.注意段内逻辑的承接发展
5.允许lz在意念中打我这个到处找碴的=w=

shouwang1UID: 2787309

10# wyl_steven


The twenty first century witnessed a worldwide transformation, which covers culture, politics, and economy. With the society development, advertisement has become a(an) integral part of our life, for we can see them in the television, on the street, in the magazines and etc(最好用and so on 书面一点) This is where the problem arises, more and more people complain about that the product  they（？） is not as good as it in the advertisement. I totally agree with this opinion, for it has the following reasons. $ P! R0 R  C) y7 g;



The first reason why I agree with the claim is that the purpose of the advertisement in our life is to sell more products, by which the producer will make more money. So the advertisement has been decorated by the producer to attract more customers to buy. Take the food advertisement for example, The food in the advertisement  always has a fresh color and   a big size. Which makes us has a（an） illusion  that the food must be very delicious.   A" h7 J( B0 r) Y

Another reason cannot be neglect(neglected) is that celebrity always in the advertisements which make us thought(think) that the product has a special function to help us with good appearance（这句话结构有点问题，造成表意不清，最好把always 和which去掉吧，本来就不是定语从句）。
Such is always happen in clothes advertisements ,a very famous superstar, with a gorgeous looking, wears the certain clothes. No one can deny that she or he dose not look good with the clothes.because he or she is a famous star, for they are more fascinate  or handsom（handsome） than other people,and not for the clothes, because no matter what they wear,they always look good.That is why we feel the clothes in the advertisements are more beautiful.% a- z# O' @0 }: V7 ]! ]4 }; F) \

However,with the technolgy development, products with new function which is beyond our imagination often come into our eyes. We may believe that product was not good,at the first glance, but it  really is. When the advertisement of Iphone shows in the television, many people don’t believe that such a think phone will have so many functions. and since they have use this new production, not only do they find it is true that the advertisement shows ,but also they enjoy this production.6 t) [: f, f
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As far as I thougt, most of the advertisements are more better than they real are, for they play as roles to improve the distribution(最后这句话没看懂)

层次还蛮清楚的，不过最好在句子结构上斟酌一下，不要为了追求长难句导致很多句子混乱··.

wyl_stevenUID: 2728535

4.6

Generally speaking, I do not agree with the claim that it is in vain or waste money that a company advertises its product. For the advertisement in our life is increasing tremendously. If the advertisements do not have an effect on promoting their product, how could this phenomenon be happened? Though, the consumers have been more sensible and wiser, I still hold the opinion that advertisement plays an integral role in the business market, for it has the following reasons.
First of all, Since industry revolution, industry development is remarkable, not only leads to  great social properties, but also numerous surplus products. Thus, companies have to face the fierce competition. When a company is not willing to spend money on advertisement, its customers will be lost easily, for the consumers have seen and heard the same functional product of other companies' advertisements. When all consumers has been lost, how could a company survive in the market? So, it is crucial for companies to spend money on advertisement.
Another reason cannot be ignored is that when a new product has been invented , the fast way to let the public know is advertisement. By advertise the new invention in the television, outside the door, and internet, the product would be famous in a short of time.Such is often happened in our life, when  Apple, a famous personal computer company, prepares to display their new product iphone ,they invest a lot money on the advertisement. However, the fact proves it pays to spend much money on the advertisement, for thousands of people wait in line out of the store on the day of the iphone going to the market. So, there is no wonder that it is worth to spend money on advertisement.

Admittedly, consumer have become more sensible than before, because they really know what they need and what they want. When a people want to buy a new car,it is make no sense that you show him some advertisements of television and other things. But when he or she sees the advertisement which is relate to the car, such as an advertisement of car cushions, he or she maybe have a thought to decide whether he or she should to buy one. This is the point that the advertisement may not have the ability to persuade the consumer to buy the product, but it can remind the consumers who have forgot to buy.

As far as I thought, advertisement have positive effects both on the company and consumer, for what I have mentioned above. Thus,I safely make the conclusion that it is valuable and efficient to spend money on the advertisement.