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"In any realm of life-whether academic, social, business, or political-the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."
I agree with the speaker that a practical, pragmatic approach can help us achieve success. However, idealism is as crucial as pragmatism, no matter it being in academic, social, business, or political arena.

When it comes to the academics, students who just pursue a high mark never regard the gain in their interest as success, which meets the educational purpose. Instead, they prefer the pragmatic facts rather than the relevant ideas, concepts, and trends. Admittedly, it is achievable in some respects toward their practical exercise rather than the zeal of interest and lasting study. Nevertheless, some academics such as art and philosophy in which the ultimate success depends on the creative appliance and reinventing development deem the idealistic and insightful prospect as rooted in the true success, part and parcel of the development. Thus, although the idealist students might be exceeded in grades, the academic ability, the solid theoretical foundation and the intuition thinking they gain will push them along the path of human excellence.

In considering the social field it might be rational to agree with the speaker that political approach is the only way to succeed rather than an idealistic, point of view, and pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options. However, what sustains the people in it when taking social dynamics into consideration is fighting for their targets-which just is idealistic. This is true to speak of American Dream which is idealistic belief. Roosevelt is a representative of this kind.

Finally, when it comes to the business and political areas it might seems that pragmatic is only and the best; after all, is there anything realistic in the areas of fundamental interest? Emphatically, no. Admittedly, the conflict of interest drives them to a pragmatic and mundane world. Yet underpinning these activities is the idealistic faith: “Staff achievements dream enterprises realize the ideal" is the ultimate business development to unite staff; ideal world beyond namely realistic world and history world to guarantee peaceful coexistence. Without strong idealistic, a firm can easily be wash out without monolithic solidarity and a country may bog down in mob rule and anarchy.

In the final analysis, practical, pragmatic way and idealism complements one another indispensably no matter it being in academic, social, business, or political arena. Without strong idealistic, a student hard to achieve the true essence, a firm can easily be wash out without monolithic solidarity and a country may bog down in mob rule and anarchy.

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"In any realm of life-whether academic, social, business, or political-the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."



I agree with the speaker that a practical, pragmatic approach can help us achieve success. However, idealism is as crucial as pragmatism, no matter it being in academic, social, business, or political arena.

When it comes to the academics, students who just pursue a high mark never regard the gain in their interest as success, which meets the educational purpose. Instead, they prefer the pragmatic facts rather than the relevant ideas, concepts, and trends. Admittedly, it is achievable in some respects toward their practical exercise rather than the zeal of interest and lasting study. Nevertheless, some academics such as(there are some fields like) art and philosophy in which the ultimate success depends on the creative appliance and reinventing development deem(这个词的主语是什么？用法正确吗？) the idealistic and insightful prospect as rooted in the true success, part and parcel of the development. Thus, although the idealist（你确定你知道这个词的意思？） students might be exceeded in grades, the academic ability, the solid theoretical foundation and the intuition thinking they gain will push them along the path of human excellence（这两个词是怎么凑到一起的？）.

In considering the social field it might be rational to agree with the speaker that political approach is the only way to succeed rather than an idealistic, point of view, and pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options. However, what sustains the people in it when taking social dynamics into consideration is fighting for their targets-which just is idealistic. This is true to speak of American Dream which is （an）idealistic belief. Roosevelt is a representative of this kind(你用kind？指代american dream?).

Finally, when it comes to the business and political areas it might seems that pragmatic(what?) is only and the best; after all, is there anything realistic in the areas of fundamental interest? Emphatically, no. Admittedly, the conflict of interest drives them to a pragmatic and mundane world. Yet underpinning these activities is the idealistic faith: “Staff achievements dream enterprises realize the ideal" is the ultimate business development to unite staff; ideal world beyond namely realistic world and history world to guarantee peaceful coexistence. Without strong idealistic, a firm can easily be wash out without monolithic solidarity and a country may bog down in mob rule and anarchy.

In the final analysis, practical, pragmatic way and idealism complements one another indispensably no matter it being in academic, social, business, or political arena. Without strong idealistic, a student hard to achieve the true essence, a firm can easily be wash out without monolithic solidarity and a country may bog down in mob rule and anarchy.
希望你在句子结构方面多多注意。至少我读起来觉得有点费劲，native and fluency sentences never make me feel like that.