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Nowadays, advertising is around us, which is not only on the newspaper we read, but also on the TV, the screens of the public areas, internet and even the front pages of our major books(what's major book?). Among various advertisements, the food advertisements always look so attractive that our stomach is conquered by the delicious food. But many of them are well-looking but just junk food which causes some unhealthy eating habits of people in life. So some people prefer to confirm that they can attribute (blame,attribute有归功于的意思)their unhealthy eating habits to advertising mostly. While I don’t agree with this statement with several reasons followed.+ E
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First of all, I admit that attractive advertising may be reasons of unhealthy eating habits, but never(not) the leading cause. And if the advertising is the most important cause, in a world nearly full of advertisements, why only a few portions of people have unbalanced diet, not everyone? In my opinion, the main reason may be the ability of self-discipline. For example, a well self-disciplined man can resist the unhealthy food and control his desire to eat junk food advertised everywhere. + v& A9 b9 E9
很喜欢那句反问句,学习了。
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In addition, the construction of people’s diet also plays an important role in the formation of a balanced diet. The unbalanced diet owners like to eat the food advertised because the junk food meets their appetites. So the construction of their diet will be diagonal to concentrate to the unhealthy food. Taking the American children as an example, many children are fatter than the criterion because they are fond of fast food, such as KFC, which usually lack the necessary nutrition for their bodies. It’s appetite that influents their eating habits, not the results of the advertisements.& D& e3 ^$ }0 g% f3 B1 W
这个论证感觉不是很有说服力,建议楼主修改一下
Furthermore, unhealthy eating habits can be caused by many other important factors besides what have been discussed above. For instant, an abnormal working time schedule, like working until the morning while eating at midnight to avoid starving, can lead to more than an unhealthy eating habit, which can cause a terrible stomach cancer. In this situation, the role of advertising disappears at all. So the advertising is the most important cause, which seems a little absurd.
这里面提到的,不规律饮食,我个人觉得,也是不健康饮食习惯的一种,而不是它的诱因
Consequently, advertising can’t be the most important cause of unbalanced diet.
结尾太简练了,呵呵,最好再丰富一点。 |
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