Issue120,12,酒香,nofeelings

nofeelings811UID: 2388638

TOPIC: ISSUE120
"So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."

There are some relations between today and yesterdays, as the information and emotion going to today like a stream, we are facing an important problem: how to deal with yesterday? My view is mainly on looking back and looking forward, both.
   
There are so much emotions and wisdoms in the past. As a person, we love our homeland not only because we used to or our fathers used to live their, but also because the history of the country has some fundamental relationship with us, just like the root. Further speaking, all of our loves, have the deep roots, when we look back on things that we or our fathers do, we feel a thing that is love: parents will spare no efforts to let their children live better, for the love of the parents; heroes will fight heavenly to let the country exist better, for the love of the people; experts will devote themselves into the areas of their research, for the love of the knowledge. When we learn about the history, we feel love, and the love will let us spare no effort to let our children live better, to let our country exist better, to devote ourselves into the searching of the knowledge. The guidance of love is then in our heart. And so the wisdoms come after the past, as long as we look back carefully. Evolution theory is groundbreaking, discovered by Darwin. He interested in the history of the natural, wondering where we come from, where do we go? A lot of work on the many many histories of the beings, he discovered this regulation. Emotions and wisdoms are what we gained from past for present.

However, today is today, which is fresh new and more and more complex, the respective that always contacts with the past is not a valuable thing. Suppose the society as a system, this system has been run for thousands years. Firstly, people have become more and more complex, what they want not just hunting things, making fire or finding some caves, they want to go to college, live in finer house, eating the more delicious food, and so on. What they believe is separated: Jesus, Buddhism, Muslin, and so on. All in all they want the better life and believe in the better life, which make them compete with each other and then probably hate each other somehow. For example, Pakistan and Afghan fight each other for the religions reason. Researching on how people living in the past can not solve the present living problem. According to this, looking back only make us want to go back to our fathers' time, having no contributions to the now. Something more about evolution will illustrate it more clearly: if we only think on the aspect of the Darwin's aspect, this will do no good any more, so some one think it over, most concentrate on the present science. He looks forward and designs an algorithm which has the same process as the evolution:
born, select, mutation, survive. This can illuminate us: not only look back, especially now and later, because the information is exploring, but also look forward.


We should conclude something, and think over things happened, but selected, not too much, and look to tomorrow and today’s problem and new ways.

ice_ykUID: 2909502

TOPIC: ISSUE120
"So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."

There are some relations between today and yesterdays, as the information and emotion [这个词用在这里好奇怪，我思维跟不上你的。] going to today like a stream, we are facing an important problem: how to deal with yesterday? [第一段应该是一个总述，我还没看后面，但是如果全文讲的都是这个怎么对待过去的问题，那很明显偏了，题目是过去和现在的类型；如果全文没有偏题，那么最好在首段也体现出来。]
My view is mainly on looking back and looking forward,
[既然自问自答，回答怎么对待过去这个问题，你的观点中又出现look forward, 有点迷糊，其实这个观点对于题目来讲是全面的，建议把前面那个问句改一下。How can people live in the present with the help of yesterdays and tomorrows? 就这意思，我句子不漂亮]both.
   
There are so much emotions [又是emotion“情感”？不解] and wisdoms in the past. As a person, we love our homeland not only because we used to or our fathers used to[used to是说”过去有规律地做某事”,这儿你想说的是我们或父辈“习惯于”居住在这儿，加个are吧，are used to] live their[there], but also because the history of the country has some fundamental relationship with us, just like the root[我理解你的比喻老外不一定懂]. [url=]Further speaking, all of our loves, have the deep roots, when we look back on things that we or our fathers do, we feel a thing that is love: parents will spare no efforts to let their children live better, for the love of the parents; heroes will fight heavenly to let the country exist better, for the love of the people; experts will devote themselves into the areas of their research, for the love of the knowledge.[/url][91]
When we learn about the history, we feel love, and the love will let us spare no effort to let our children live better, to let our country exist better, to devote ourselves into the searching of the knowledge. The guidance of love is then in our heart.
[这一句终于把the past和the present联系起来了，赞]==[分割线！在这之前说的是emotions中的love，回望过去所见是love；在这之后说的是wisdoms，紧接着举了个进化论例子]==And so the wisdoms come after the past, as long as we look back carefully. Evolution theory is groundbreaking, discovered by Darwin. He interested in the history of the natural, wondering where we come from, where do we go? A lot of work on the many many histories of the beings, he discovered this regulation. Emotions and wisdoms are what we gained from past for present. [例子讲完段落就完，不好吧，你也没说这个对现在的guidance啊]
[显然，你提炼出the past可提供的guidance是2方面：emtions & wisdoms.这样未免狭隘了吧。而且不客气的说，该段前半部分关于love那个过于冗长]
However, today is today, which is fresh new and more and more complex[不地道的表达], the respective[译为”各自的，分别的” 你想说哪个？] that always contacts with the past is not a valuable thing. Suppose the society as a system, this system has been run for thousands years. Firstly, people have become more and more complex, what they want not just hunting things, making fire or finding some caves, [and]they want to go to college, live in finer house, eating[eat] the more delicious food, and so on. What they believe is separated: Jesus, Buddhism, Muslin, and so on. All in all they want the better life and believe in the better life, which make them compete with each other and then probably hate each other somehow. For example, Pakistan and Afghan fight each other for the religions reason. Researching on how people living in the past[质问：为什么要把探索过去的范围限定在”人们过去怎样生活”呢？去看”宗教起源和发展”岂不是更好理解他们之间的冲突，对解决现在的问题也是有帮助的] can not solve the present living problem. According to this, looking back only make us want to go back to our fathers' time, having no contributions to the now.[虽然不赞同你举的例子，但是这一句也是把the past和the present联系在一起说的，很好] Something more about evolution will illustrate it more clearly: if we only think on the aspect of the Darwin's aspect, this will do no good any more, so some one think it over, most concentrate on the present science. He looks forward and designs an algorithm which has the same process as the evolution: born, select, mutation, survive. This can illuminate us: not only look back, especially now and later, because the information is exploring, but also look forward.

We should conclude something, and think over things happened, but selected, not too much, and look to tomorrow and today’s problem and new ways. [结尾怎么写的问题我最近也在考虑，等我看看那本写作书再跟你交流吧]



[91]注意断句，强悍的人一口气写这么长，却忘了语法。您激动了










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