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YukikoUID: 3170692

08.08.23

Do you agree or disagree that a teacher who is serious and strict is more efficient than a teacher who uses humors and easygoing.

Of two possibilities, I choose the second, that is, a teacher who uses humors and easy going, because I enjoy the courses with cozy atmosphere, which may make me show more interest in such kind of subject he or she teaches.

There may be some people claiming that a teacher who is serious and strict certainly benefits our study by always demanding highly on the correctness of the answers in our homework and the scores on our test paper. Additionally, everyone in class are forced to pay attention even they show no interest in such a boring and tedious lesson. However, I don’t agree with them. We come to school to gain knowledge and the first step to expand our viewpoint is to find the attractions and fascination of the subjects we have to learn. A teacher with a sense of humor must make the students absorbed in the course, they will not only listen carefully about the importance which mentioned by the teachers as well as better mastering the subject, but also show great interest in it simultaneously. I have seen many classmates working harder than anyone else for their special feeling of the subject.

Moreover, most of the students are in early adolescence, criticisms of the teacher who is serious and strict will have bad effect on their study. Take my physics teacher as an example. She is such a strict teacher that everyone is afraid of her, especially the students who study poor in our class. Most of us work hard after school, but the nerve and stress causes low marks unavoidably. The teacher regards these students as bad students by always devastating their confidence. How can they make progress? On contrary, the physics teacher of our next-door class is easygoing, she never feels tired of encouraging the students fail in the exams. I think there must be more benefit on the students’ study with such a lovely teacher.

In conclusion, if all factors are considered, it is apparent that the efficiency of a teacher who uses humors and easygoing overweighs that of a teacher who is serious and strict. Students may show the same feeling on the subject they learn as which on their teachers teaching this subject. A teacher with a sense of humor and good temper will allow the students to enjoy studying more possibly. Therefore, with the relaxation and joy , students are more likely to win success.

YukikoUID: 3170692

欢迎大家批改啊啊！！

zhouycloudUID: 2772040

1# Yukiko
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Of two possibilities, I choose the second, that is, a teacher who uses humors and easy going, [size=13.8889px]which may make me show more interests in this kind of subject he or she teaches，[size=13.8889px]because I enjoy the courses with cozy atmosphere.

There may be some people claiming that a teacher who is serious and strict certainly benefits our study by always demanding highly(strict) on the correctness of the answers in our homework and the scores on our test(examination) papers. Additionally, everyone in class are forced to pay attention even they show no interest in such a tedious lesson. However, I don’t agree with them. We come to school to gain knowledge and the first step to expand our viewpoint(ken) is to find the attractions and fascination of the subjects we have(wish) to learn. A teacher with a sense of humor must make the students absorbed in the course, they will not only listen carefully about the importance which mentioned by the teachers as well as better mastering the subject, but also show great interest in it simultaneously. I have seen many classmates working harder than anyone else for their special feeling of the subject.

Moreover, most of the students are in early adolescence, criticisms of the teacher who is serious and strict will have bad effect on their study. Take my physics teacher as an example. She is such a strict teacher that everyone is afraid of her, especially the students who study poor in our class. Most of us work hard after school, but the nerve and stress causes low marks unavoidably. The teacher regards these students as bad students by always devastating their confidence. How can they make progress? On the contrary, the physics teacher of our next-door class is easygoing, she never feels tired of encouraging the students fail in the exams. I think there must be more benefit on the students’ study with such a lovely teacher.

In conclusion, if all factors are considered, it is apparent that the efficiency of a teacher who uses humors and easygoing overweighs that of a teacher who is serious and strict. Students may show the same feeling on the subject they learn as which on their teachers teaching this subject. A teacher with a sense of humor and good temper will allow the students to enjoy studying more possibly. Therefore, with the relaxation and joy , students are more likely to win success.

byebyehakuUID: 3124349

那个  作文我改完了传上来哈~
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1292096-4-1.html
这是我的作文，欢迎批改~！

byebyehakuUID: 3124349

改好了~

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3# zhouycloud
非常感谢啊！改得特别用心~

venusbloomUID: 2511701

Of two possibilities, I choose the second one, that is, a teacher who uses(is) humors and easy going, because I enjoy the courses with cozy atmosphere, which may make me show more interest in such kind of subject he or she teaches.

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There may be some people claiming that a teacher who is serious and strict certainly benefits our study by always demanding highly on the correctness of the answers in our homework and the scores on our test paper. Additionally, everyone in class are(is) forced to pay attention even they show no interest in such a boring and tedious lesson. However, I don’t agree with them. We come to school to gain knowledge and the first step to expand our viewpoint is to find the attractions and fascination of the subjects we have to learn. A teacher with a sense of humor must make the students absorbed in the course, they will not only listen carefully about the importance(important points) which mentioned by the teachers as well as better mastering the subject, but also show great interest in it simultaneously. I have seen many classmates working harder than anyone else for their special feeling of the subject.

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Moreover, most of the students are in early adolescence, criticisms of the teacher who is serious and strict will have bad effect on their study. Take(Taking) my physics teacher as an example. She is such a strict teacher that everyone is afraid of her, especially the students who study poor in our class. Most of us work hard after school, but the nerve and stress causes(cause) low marks unavoidably. The teacher regards these students as bad students by always devastating their confidence. How can they make progress? On the contrary, the physics teacher of our next-door class is easygoing, she never feels tired of encouraging the students fail in the exams. I think there must be more benefit on the students’ study with such a lovely teacher.

In conclusion, if all factors are considered, it is apparent that the efficiency of a teacher who uses(is) humors and easygoing overweighs that of a teacher who is serious and strict. Students may show the same feeling on the subject they learn as which on their teachers teaching this subject. A teacher with a sense of humor and good temper will allow the students to enjoy studying more possibly. Therefore, with the relaxation and joy , students are more likely to win success.

论真例子叙述不具体。

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机经09.09.10

It is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life, agree or disagree?

One of the most popular pastimes today is movie-going. I’m fascinated with nearly all kinds of movies, from romantic ones to the fantastic, from the comedies to tragedies. When there’re some people claiming that it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life. I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that the movies which can’t teach us lessons should also have consideration.

Commonly, people tend to choose the films which are closely bond to their life. When I go astray or feel frustrated, the movie called A Little Princess companying with me when I was in childhood would remind me of trusting myself and the people around me. The film seems realistic by telling a story about a girl living in tiny old attics and dressing in rags with firm belief that the world is full of love. I always make myself be patient in tribulations by replaying the movie saved in my lap-top.

However, reasons people watch films are not constricted to get encouragement. Movies are the most fascinating and easiest escape means from increasing pressure, which comes from family, school, working place and society. Combined with acoustic and visual effect, movies are definitely more appealing to the audience who has exhausted themselves in the real world. Why do children like Harry Potter? There’s no magic in real life at all. Through watching the vivid picture on the screen which let us immerse ourselves in fiction, we can approach the magic world only appears in our imagination and feel it clearly.

Moreover, the movie called Titanic had been shown in 1997, why are most of us eagerly looking forward the 3-D one which will be on several months later? I guess that the 3-D effect attracts us. The movie producers add more high-tech to films, making them become more wonderful. I have seen such kind of movies like Harry Potter 7 a month ago and really enjoy the magic effects which add more charm to the films.

In conclusion, movies with realistic themes do teach us something, but we don’t watch films only for this. The worthwhile means differently from people to people. There’re variety of reasons why movies are so popular, we can’t just form our opinions hastily that it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life. The movies which are directed delicately are all worth appreciating.

YukikoUID: 3170692

TPO6
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Do you agree or disagree?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.

A question discussed keenly is that if life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. There may be someone complaining that the competitive society makes most of us feel stressful. The ever-increasing population of the world will also decrease our opportunities to realize the beautiful dreams such as getting high-paying jobs. However, in my opinion, the advantages of our life can’t be replaced by that when our grandparents were children. If we compare with these two types of life carefully and thoroughly, we may firmly believe that life today is certainly easier and more comfortable.
Firstly, since the rapid development of science and technology, our life today is getting much more convenient than it was when our grandparents were children. As we all know, there was no televisions or computers at that time, the food couldn’t be kept fresh in the refrigerators, and it was inconvenient for them to go to the remote places without cars. How could that happen? I guess that the children had not ever thought about the lifestyle like what it is today. We’re now living a dreamful world of them, aren’t we? How could the children get more fun than us? The poor educational institution would make it less possible for them to enrich their knowledge and expand their horizon. In the modern life, we can try almost everything to improve our innovation, but they could never do this.
On the other hand, have you just ignored of the fact that there were so many wars at that time? The aggressive countries such as Germany and Japan had invaded so many countries in the world when our grandparents were only children. Lots of innocent people were dead. How can we imagine that? Maybe we were keeping running away from the soldiers of the aggressive countries here and there, worrying about the life of our family, friends and us. What a tragedy when we heard of the death of our love? Now the peaceful life will make us much more relaxing, although there may be so many tasks for us to finish, maybe we’re always wondering how to make a better life, maybe we are always complaining about the busy lifestyle which makes us even unable to breathe. We must admit that the advantages of the wars at that time overweighed which brought by the competitive society today.

In conclusion, as far as I’m concerned, I also support the opinion that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. We shouldn’t keep an eye on the stress of our life, but the convenience and peace which could never be gained more than 60 years ago.

byebyehakuUID: 3124349

Yukiko说的是TPO6这篇么？
我改好了发上来哈~~

YukikoUID: 3170692

11# byebyehaku
恩，上面的机经也帮忙看看吧~~谢谢啊！

byebyehakuUID: 3124349

改好了~~！！欢迎讨论！！

奔跑蜗牛UID: 2579189

A question discussed keenly is that if(whether) life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. There may be someone complaining that the competitive society makes most of us feel stressful. The ever-increasing population of the world will also decrease our opportunities to realize the beautiful dreams such as getting high-paying jobs. However, in my opinion, the advantages of our life can’t be replaced by that when our grandparents were children.是不是想说不能被缺点取代 If we compare with these two types of life carefully and thoroughly, we may firmly believe that life today is certainly easier and more comfortable.



Firstly, since the rapid development of science and technology, our life today is getting much more convenient than it was when our grandparents were children. As we all know, there was no televisions or computers at that time, the food couldn’t be kept fresh in the refrigerators, and it was inconvenient for them to go to the remote places without cars. （car很早就有了，是不是要写不如现在方便，比如有了地铁更迅速了）How could that happen? I guess that the children had not ever thought about the lifestyle like what it is today. We’re now living a dreamful world of them, aren’t we? How could the children get more fun than us? The poor educational institution would make it less possible for them to enrich their knowledge and expand their horizon. In the modern life, we can try almost everything to improve our innovation, but they could never do this. 这段开头说得是 life 如何变得 convenient   结尾应该更好的呼应下吧

On the other hand, have you just ignored of the fact that there were so many wars at that time? The aggressive countries such as Germany and Japan had invaded so many countries in the world when our grandparents were only children. Lots of innocent people were dead. How can we imagine that? Maybe we were keeping running away from the soldiers of the aggressive countries here and there, worrying about the life of our family, friends and us. What a tragedy when we heard of the death of our love? Now the peaceful life will make us much more relaxing, although there may be so many tasks for us to finish, maybe we’re always wondering how to make a better life, maybe we are always complaining about the busy lifestyle which makes us even unable to breathe. We must admit that the advantages of the wars at that time overweighed which brought by the competitive society today.
俺觉得可以举更具体的例子，比如grandparents 讲他们那个时候每天能吃半饱就如何幸福，看见地主的孩子有新衣服穿就很幸福，现在能每顿都吃上热乎乎的饭菜啊。。。。

In conclusion, as far as I’m concerned, I also support the opinion that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. We shouldn’t keep an eye on the stress of our life, but the convenience and peace which could never be gained more than 60 years ago.

byebyehakuUID: 3124349

啊啊~~上次那个机经我忘记改了……改完了补上~