issue103 历史问题第一篇 火热互拍中

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The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives。

In an atmosphere of advanced technology, the pace of daily life became faster and faster. Should we learn history? What is the function of history? In my point it is necessary to study history, not only because it is directly relevant with our daily lives but also because it immediately relates to most sectors of our society such as culture, politics, arts, military, science and so on.

Learning history could inspire us to meet the difficulties in our lives without the limitation of space and time. There are numerous difficulties which we confront now and then. In difficulties, we often puzzle in whether we should give up chasing our own goal or not. Through the study of history, we can find out that every significant individual’s success was from their great endeavors and never give up spirits. Beethoven lost his hearing at twenty nine, but the lost of hearing did not hurdle him becoming the most famous musician in the world. When Madam Curie lost her husband in one accident, what she did was to continue teaching her husband's students, while standing the twinge in her heart. Some great spirits of human being can ever exist and function to inspire their descents along the time’s going. Through learning those stories we can get courage to conquer those difficulties in our daily lives.

The study of history can help a nation to know much about itself. The essence of one nation is its cultures. Through learning history, we could know where our ancestors came from, what our cultures about, and how those cultures came into being. Just as our Chinese people, when we learn Three Character Primer we get to know that our ancestors care about Golden mean, filial piety, Confucianism, etc. Those cultures not only existed in the past, but also can still exist in today’s human behavior in China. With the understanding of our cultures, we can know better and behavior better in our society.

Except knowing one nation's culture, the study of history can guide us in politics, military, science and so on. A famous book named The art of war written by Suncui has been studied by both oriental people and western people and has been used to military, politics, commerce, social science and so on. In politicians’ eyes the book told them how to treat with their opponents. In merchants’ eyes that book told them how to use their capitals in most efficient way. In social scientists' eyes the book told them how to deal with conflicts happened or maybe happen in society. All those great functions they got are through learning history.

In sum, history is a mysterious mirror. Through it, not only can we know the past of our nation, but also we can learn how to deal with our daily lives, and how to meet with our future.

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475字还少啊？

In an atmosphere of advanced technology, the pace of daily life became faster and faster. Should we learn history? What is the function of history? In my point it is necessary to study history, not only because it is directly relevant with our daily lives but also because it immediately relates to most sectors （aspects是不是更好些） of our society such as culture, politics, arts, military, science and so on. （你的主题句有一个递进关系，首先不仅和日常生活相关，而且和其他方面也相关。那第2段是指日常生活吗？）

Learning history could inspire us to meet the difficulties in our lives without the limitation of space and time. There are numerous difficulties which we confront now and then. In difficulties, we often puzzle in whether we should give up chasing our own goal or not. Through the study of history, we can find out that every significant individual’s success was from their great endeavors and never give up spirits. Beethoven lost his hearing at twenty nine, but the lost of hearing did not hurdle him becoming the most famous musician in the world. When Madam Curie lost her husband in one accident, what she did was to continue teaching her husband's students, while standing the twinge in her heart. Some great spirits of human being can ever exist and function to inspire their descents along the time’s going. Through learning those stories we can get courage to conquer those difficulties in our daily lives. （榜样的作用）

（过度词）The study of history can help a nation to know much about itself. The essence of one nation is its cultures. Through learning history, we could know where our ancestors came from, what our cultures about, and how those cultures came into being. Just as our Chinese people, when we learn Three Character Primer we get to know that our ancestors care about Golden mean, filial piety, Confucianism, etc. Those cultures not only existed in the past, but also can still exist in today’s human behavior in China. With the understanding of our cultures, we can know better and behavior better in our society. （传承文化）

Except knowing one nation's culture, the study of history can guide us in politics, military, science and so on. A famous book named The art of war written by Suncui（孙武吧） has been studied by both oriental people and western people and has been used to military, politics, commerce, social science and so on. In politicians’ eyes the book told them how to treat with their opponents. In merchants’ eyes that book told them how to use their capitals in most efficient way. In social scientists' eyes the book told them how to deal with conflicts happened or maybe happen in society. All those great functions they got are through learning history. （在其他领域的指导作用）

In sum, history is a mysterious mirror. Through it, not only can we know the past of our nation, but also we can learn how to deal with our daily lives, and how to meet with our future.

虽然看完没发现什么毛病，但也总觉得很多东西点到即止，没有进一步说。

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In an atmosphere of advanced technology, the pace of daily life became faster and faster. Should we learn history? What is the function of history? In my point it is necessary to study history, not only because it is directly relevant with our daily lives but also because it immediately relates to most sectors of our society such as culture, politics, arts, military, science and so on.

Learning history could inspire us to meet the difficulties in our lives without the limitation of space and time.这个主题句有点不通 直接翻译旧是 学习历史可以超越时空限制地启迪我们解决生活中的困难 There are numerous difficulties which we confront now and then. In difficulties, we often puzzle in whether we should give up chasing our own goal or not. Through the study of history, we can find out that every significant individual’s success was from their great endeavors and never give up spirits. Beethoven lost his hearing at twenty nine, but the lost of hearing did not hurdle him becoming the most famous musician in the world. When Madam Curie lost her husband in one accident, what she did was to continue teaching her husband's students, while standing the twinge in her heart.居里夫人的例子没有指出她的不放弃是否导致成功的结果因此不能说明问题 Some great spirits of human being can ever exist and function to inspire their descents along the time’s going. Through learning those stories we can get courage to conquer those difficulties in our daily lives.

The study of history can help a nation to know much about itself.带来什么好处？ 最好在主体句里体现 The essence of one nation is its cultures. Through learning history, we could know where our ancestors came from, what our cultures about, and how those cultures came into being. Just as our Chinese people, when we learn Three Character Primer we get to know that our ancestors care about Golden mean, filial piety, Confucianism, etc. Those cultures not only existed in the past, but also can still exist in today’s human behavior in China. With the understanding of our cultures, we can know better and behavior better in our society.最好继续展开论述 比如加速社会发展什么的

Except knowing one nation's culture, the study of history can guide us in politics, military, science and so on. A famous book named The art of war written by Suncui has been studied by both oriental people and western people and has been used to military, politics, commerce, social science and so on. In politicians’ eyes the book told them how to treat with their opponents. In merchants’ eyes that book told them how to use their capitals in most efficient way. In social scientists' eyes the book told them how to deal with conflicts happened or maybe happen in society. All those great functions they got are through learning history.

In sum, history is a mysterious这个词感觉有神秘而不可琢磨的意思，miraculous更好吧…… mirror. Through it, not only can we know the past of our nation, but also we can learn how to deal with our daily lives, and how to meet with our future.

同意楼上的观点，有些地方没有讲透

[ Last edited by alcestis on 2005-8-6 at 17:43 ]

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你们说得很对，但是我就是论证展不开，只有空例子，怎么解决这个问题呢