berlinbear的大作

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Whether encourage young persons to believe that trying hard would give an access to achieve great things is not only misleading but potentially harmful? While it might be tempting 觉得这个词用得不是特别精确，个人觉得reasonable 更贴切点to agree with the claimer at first blush 这个好，我杂就没想到呢？？on the basis that blindness and mania of idealism always come out come out 比较强调自己出来，这里更着重引出，觉得trigger out好点 numerous disappointment and frustration, however, to some extent, I tend to fundamentally hold the opinion that the essence of life is to pursue utmost ideality of belief, knowledge, and spirituality.  

Admittedly, it is acknowledged that people who are seeking for ideality sometimes suffers suffer more distress of failure rather than the happiness of success. As defined in the dictionary, an idealist is someone who has a “naively enthusiastic, over optimistic or romantic view; unrealistic: a starry-eyed reformer.” Obviously, in the reality society, no one can enjoy such an amazing life without any upset from the surrounding. One apt illustration of this point involves one of my friends who has been totally an ideal girl thinking about life. She dreamed to be an excellent pianist and she believed that paying enough efforts would definitely gain a satisfied result. So she practiced piano toughly hard and hoped that she can enter a professional music college. What is the pity,用感叹句吧，感情表达好点 she is not gifted and created 不确定有没有这种用法，你再验证，完了给我说enough in music so that she failed. Under this circumstance, young ones should not be觉得这里有点太绝对，加个blindly or over optimistically好点 encouraged to make great things through hard efforts, otherwise it may do some harm to both individuals and society.

Yet, standing on my point, I do not agree with the speaker that it is misleading and harmful to encouraging youth to have the belief that trying hard will lead to the achievements. The first specific reason is that human beings have the capability of expecting future and drawing the blueprint. It is hard to forecast how tomorrow will be and as a result, almost all behaviors of humans include sorts of imagine and ideality components. Paragon such as Martin Luther King, one of the most outstanding national leader, devoted his whole to eliminating racial discrimination and creating great democracy of the United States because he had a dream to provided a candle along with a light when America was waning on the part of many African-American. In his short life, Dr. King never gave up his hope that可以省去吧 to gain great accomplishment by trying hard and just the strength of ideal supported him to conquer all the hardness and barriers from American society, public, mass media and so forth. In other words, if Dr. King had not had such a firm hope of the beautiful future, the road of the United States may be opaque. All in all, the wishes of tomorrow life could keep our world full of vigor and energy for ever.

What is more, from the historic point of view, it is ideality and imagination that promotes the human beings to progress at all time. “Ideals are like stars,” said Carl Schurz, “you will not succeed in touching them with your hands. But like the sailor on the desert of waters, you choose them as your guides, and following them you will reach your destiny.” Without the wishes of flying freely as birds, human beings would never invent aeroplanes; without the wishes of exploiting the universe, human beings would never land the Moon; without the wishes of pursuing the liberty, equality and life, the human beings would never locate and share together in the abundance of today’s great democracy. In short, the dream of glorious tomorrow shed the light of human beings progressing. 这段写得真好，特别是排比部分，组员都可以来看看，呵呵，
Never look down on the value of ideality because of the far distance between the ideal and reality. Ultimately，the pivot of human beings is in the pursuit of inspirit and ideality.

berlinbear的文章很好啊，我要向你学习，句子表达贴切地道精练．不错不错，天使就是不一样

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Sally效率好高啊！~我要加快速度向你看齐了，呵呵~~
我没限时写的，速度快了语言就粗糙了，还要多多练习呀！

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最好直接跟贴在原文的后面.方便挨砖的同学查找
即使是改别人的文章,也要注意发贴格式哦
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