Issue150 Kito小组作业贴 多谢修改^-^

bunnymz2005UID：2146758

【题目】
Issue150（2005年2-9月总频47次）科技类
“Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.
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【翻译】
由于电视和全球范围内的计算机网络，人们现在可以熟悉很多以前从未涉足过的地方，其结果就是使得旅游变得过时了。
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【提纲】
观点：人们现在的确可以通过电视和网络足不出户就领略世界各地的风光景，然而旅游业并不会因此而过时。
1．在这个电视和网络高度发展的社会中，人们可以足不出户就获得大量的信息和视觉享受。听起来，旅游业没有存在的价值了，但是在实际中似乎并不是这样。
2．而且，人们天生就有好奇，追求刺激的欲望。而电视和网络给人们提供大量的信息和诱惑，反而促进了旅游业的发展。人们望着电视里的Hawaii，怎么比得上穿上花衬衫去那里的海边听海声晒太阳。
3．另外，电视和全球范围的网络的发展还增强了各地人民的思想文化价值观的交流，让人们彼此了解对方，解除了很多希望旅游但又害怕的游客的顾忌。比如非典之后，亚洲国家的旅游业通过广告又开始复苏了。
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【正文】
Will the tourism become obsolete in the future? The author claims so insofar as people can now be familiar with a myriad of places that they have never visited before with the advent of television and Internet. Nevertheless, in my opinion, the tourism will be thriving continually in the future no matter judging from reality or people's needs.

First of all, considering the past half century since the first television and Internet come into people's everyday life, we might find the answer. As it turns out, tourism is still flourishing till now. Actually, the tourism appears to develop even more steadily and continuously rather than become old-fashioned during the past years. Every year, people throughout the world would go to visit China for climbing its Great Wall, Swiss for traversing Alps, Egypt for watching the great pyramids. Since now with television and internet people are still craving for travels, we have good reasons to believe the tourism in the near future would be prosperous as today.

In addition, as for human's needs the tourism would certainly not decline, either. As we know, people in general own the desires for something different--sensory experiences, exciting feelings and the like which may drive them to go to movies, bars or nature. The same is true when it comes to travel. Admittedly television and Internet can offer affluent information about a place or a historical building, however how that can be compared with real exploration. Could anyone envisage that only by watching TV documentaries about Hawaii would serve as a perfect substitution for lying on the beach and basking in the sunshine? Ostensibly not. This basic human need compels us to experience for ourselves as tourists.

On the contrary, with the development of television and Internet the tourism would be presumed to experience a boon for television and internet serve to precipitate communications among different cultures, mores, ideas and values. Indeed, by doing that would even relieve some suspicions or conflicts among countries. Take SARS in Asia for instance, the tourism is attacked in almost every country in Asia due to the prevalence of SARS. Even after SARS, the tourism can not recover because people fear that they may be infected. However, at length TV and internet help solve this problem though publicizing the WHO’s claim that Asia is safe. This illustrates that TV and worldwide computer connection to certain extent can go a long way toward the development of tourism.

To sum up, I concede that television and worldwide computer connections, to some extent, would influence people's choice to go for a travel. However as long as there exist people's needs for experiences and transformation, the tourism would never become omitted in the future.

Issue 写得很没有感觉，越写越没有话说，求助！！！！

leedgenUID：160823

【提纲】
观点：人们现在的确可以通过电视和网络足不出户就领略世界各地的风光景，然而旅游业并不会因此而过时。
1．在这个电视和网络高度发展的社会中，人们可以足不出户就获得大量的信息和视觉享受。听起来，旅游业没有存在的价值了，但是在实际中似乎并不是这样。
2．而且，人们天生就有好奇，追求刺激的欲望。而电视和网络给人们提供大量的信息和诱惑，反而促进了旅游业的发展。人们望着电视里的Hawaii，怎么比得上穿上花衬衫去那里的海边听海声晒太阳。（哈哈，这个好形象啊∶） ）
3．另外，电视和全球范围的网络的发展还增强了各地人民的思想文化价值观的交流，让人们彼此了解对方，解除了很多希望旅游但又害怕的游客的顾忌。比如非典之后，亚洲国家的旅游业通过广告又开始复苏了。
（这个观察角度很新颖，不错）
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【正文】
Will the tourism become obsolete in the future? The author claims so insofar as people can now be familiar with a myriad of places that they have never visited before with the advent of television and Internet. Nevertheless, in my opinion, the tourism will be thriving continually（这里加上rather than be obsolete怎么样） in the future no matter (no matter可以这么用么？) judging from reality or people's needs.

First of all, considering the past half century since the first television and Internet come into people's everyday life, we might find the answer. As it turns out, tourism is still flourishing till now.（我觉得前面两句可以合成一句话，这样首句就是中心句，观点更鲜明） Actually, the tourism appears to develop even more steadily and continuously rather than become old-fashioned during the past years. Every year, people throughout the world would go to visit China for climbing its Great Wall, Swiss for traversing Alps, Egypt for watching the great pyramids. Since now with television and internet people are still craving for（好词组，学习） travels, we have good reasons to believe the tourism in the near future would be （as） prosperous as today.

In addition, as for human's needs the tourism would certainly not decline, either. As we know, people in general own the desires for something different--sensory experiences, exciting feelings and the like which may drive them to go to movies, bars or nature. The same is true when it comes to travel.（it is also true when it comes to travel） Admittedly television and Internet can offer affluent information about a place or a historical building, however how that can be compared with real exploration这句有点中文痕迹，而且语法也有点不对. Could anyone envisage that only by watching TV documentaries about Hawaii would serve as a perfect substitution for lying on the beach and basking in the sunshine? Ostensibly（这个是“表面上”的意思啊，是不是用错了，呵呵，absolutely?） not. This basic human need compels us to experience for ourselves as tourists.

On the contrary（这个连词和上文联系不太好，因为没有这么强烈的转折啊）, with the development of television and Internet the tourism would be presumed to experience a boon for television and internet serve to precipitate communications among different cultures, mores, ideas and values. Indeed, by doing that would even relieve some suspicions or conflicts among countries. Take SARS in Asia for instance, the tourism is attacked in almost every country in Asia due to the prevalence of SARS. Even after SARS, the tourism can not recover because people fear that they may be infected. However, at length TV and internet help solve this problem though publicizing the WHO’s claim that Asia is safe. This illustrates that TV and worldwide computer connection to certain extent can go a long way （又学到一个好词组）toward the development of tourism. 很不错的观点，学习

To sum up, I concede that television and worldwide computer connections, to some extent, would influence people's choice (choice改成decision,是不是好点) to go for a travel. However as long as there exist(s) people's needs for experiences and transformation, the tourism would never become omitted in the future.

整体条理很清晰，词汇也很好，继续努力

好几个单词我还是开了金山词霸才懂，惭愧啊