六月IELTS 七分保底小组 (A类) 第四次作业已布置 (最新通知见一楼)

H-KevinUID: 2182070

(重要通知:现在所有题型已经全部做过了,但是真正的提高,在于对自己文章的错误不断的修改,用好的句子代替垃圾句子,用同义词代替口语词汇,用英语思维代替自己明显的中国式英语,所以:第四次作业就是修改自己的第一次作业4月26日--4月28日的那一个,然后再互改,目的是在考试前把TASK1特定图表的写作结构写到背熟的地步,TASK2思路固定模式化)

这是真正提高的阶段,无休止的写新东西只是机械的重复自己的错误而已,希望大家重视复习回改的方法


六月IELTS 七分保底 冲刺八分


{队员名单}
1.H-Kevin             (7楼)  1。2。3
2.wushasha  考完了    (3楼)   1。2。3
5.灵雨离子            (18楼)   1。2
7.computervision                     (24楼)   0。2
9.zeshow (Elin)         (34楼)   0。0。3
10.simpledream                       (38楼)   0。0。3
11.ayu (信宇)                      (41楼)   0。0。3



{互改顺序}.第一次:1 改 2 改 5 改 1;

          第二次:1和7互改,2和5互改,6和8互改 其他同志尽快完成作业

          第三次:10和7互改,1和9互改,其他同志尽快完成作业

          第四次:1和7互改,9和10互改



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      题目（括号内附字数）  六月IELTS 七分保底小组 (A类)×××（ID）第×次作业

     （寄托发贴格式扫盲 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-208286-1-1.html）(请大家参照,认真阅读下)
     


{作业}
第一次  4月26日--4月28日 (包括一个饼图,一个柱型图,一个水平线加图表双图,2个Issue) 1-5.rar (130.83 KB, 下载次数: 54)

2007-4-26 15:06:06 上传

下载次数: 54
4月26日--4月28日

请按时完成
第二次  5月01日--5月03日 (包括一个水平线,一个点状图,一个曲线趋势图,2个Issue) 2-5.rar (204.56 KB, 下载次数: 50)

2007-5-1 20:38:48 上传

下载次数: 50
5月01日--5月03日

请按时完成
第三次  5月07日--5月10日 (包括一个图表,两个流程图,2个Issue) 3-5.rar (331.53 KB, 下载次数: 40)

2007-5-7 20:28:49 上传

下载次数: 40
5月07日--5月10日

请按时完成

第四次:上面第一次






[ 本帖最后由 H-Kevin 于 2007-5-18 17:02 编辑 ]

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

。。。和GRE版面学习咯。。
支持一个。。我有空会来帮忙的

wushashaUID: 2289713

我也想参加，可是不知道怎么组织啊……还请版主指点！！！

First Composition - 1-4.GIF
Along with the rapid development of science and teachnology, people’s living level improve a lot and their demands for television and newspaper programs increase correspondingly. The questions under dabate are what fators influence the decisions to broadcast on television and print in newspapers; do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
In my opinion, there are several factors influence the editors decisions on program. Firstly, financial support is of great importance. Those editors who want to earn much more money for their staffs must broadcast or print charming programs that can attract audiences or readers, or they will terminate because none want to watch or read them. Secondly, the programs they broadcast and print must be accord with the audiences’ taste. None like to watch boring advertisements and meaningless progams.
Most people have become used to bad news, especially about some famous sports players or singers, and more and more youngers around me go into raptures at merely mention of bad news about the disatrous or other unpredictable things. This may be entertainments for their spare time, just as other people like to learn good news. As far as I concerned, it is hard to say whether it is a better thing or not if more good news was reported. Most important of all, the people’s concern on news not determined by good or bad news, but the latest and newest. Take sports for example, most of the people will be glad when hear that China players got a lot of golden medals in Olympic Games and Yao Ming, a good basketball player in NBA, got a high score.
Just as old saying goes, “everything has two sides”. Both good and bad news can attract the audiences and reader’s eyes. (300 words)

First Composition - 1-5.GIF
Along with the rapid development of science and technology, computers are becoming more and more advanced, and they are widely used in many aspects, for example, businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. Comuputers are becoming a common and indispensable tool for the average people all over the world.
There is no denying that computers have played extremely important roles in promoting our society, which make our life less laborous and more effient. An increasing number of people believe that computers will continue to exert dramtical roles and do many works for human in the future. Many experts are trying to produce a car cotrolled by computer that need no driver and can effectively decrease the traffic accidents. It will be a common traffic tool sooner or later. On the other hand, robots will be available along the development of computer industry and It can imagine some years later that to obtain an intelligent robot is an ordiary pople’s desire as well as a person’s need for a computer nowadays. I believe that all the thing that we want to use computers will be come into truth in the future.
However, many people point out that our dependence on computers may not a good thing and should be more suspicious of their benefits. We must admit that with the progress in computer industry, many other negative aspects like virus, intelligent cirme will increase correspondingly. But compared with their advantages, I am firmly convinced that computers’ advantages far overweigh disadvantages. We should encourgae people to learn and exploit new hard, soft wares and programs, that can prevent negative aspects sufficiently.
There is no invention receiving more prais and abuse than computers. Just as an old saying goes, “everything has two sides”. Although computers have disadvantages, we should try our best to make good use of them. (307 words)
:handshake

[ 本帖最后由 wushasha 于 2007-5-2 11:40 编辑 ]

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

。。。根据楼主的安排来。。文章你们选择最近考得比较多的吧。。然后我如果有能力，就帮你们看看把~~

xuezhongyangUID: 201193

我也要加入哦
可是不知道是什么时候开始
能否详述?

xumanggUID: 2286513

我先报个名先吧，6月我应该有空的，LZ能不能说得再详细点呢？？以前没听说过这种的，希望大家都来加入啊！！！

H-KevinUID: 2182070

开始写作业了,大家要认真,水平不是问题,进步才是目的


H-Kevin 第一次作业 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-655124-1-1.html
H-Kevin 第二次作业 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-659896-1-1.html
H-Kevin 第三次作业 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-665333-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 H-Kevin 于 2007-5-14 20:14 编辑 ]

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

7分的写作和8分的写作差很多的俄。。好好加油

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

看错了。。组的名字让我以为是为了写作8分冲刺的。。。

金金鱼UID: 2202172

这个建议不错，也是个督促自己的学习方法。

wushashaUID: 2289713

怎么没有人向上传啊？版主……

H-KevinUID: 2182070

我也不知道，联系不到他们，难道作业太多了？

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

组员间最好消息联系着，因为有些版油不常上网。。

H-KevinUID: 2182070

这两天花了全天时间报名IBT,队员先把五个作文都写了,修改顺序每次见前面

yidi mercuryUID: 195299

呵呵。。。ibt.。。