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3.2 考试

重点就是要练好作文。上次20分，这次的目标是27分。

2.26 University should spend a lot of money on the social activities to attract more students.
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2.25 Students should read books chose by themselves, or recommended by their teachers.
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2.24 It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because of the loss of old friends.
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2.23 The main purpose for people who have jobs is for money rather than social status.
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2.22 If parents want their children to perform well in school, they should limit that their children spend watching TV.
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2.21 Talented people's leadership is inborn and can't be learned by people.
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2.18 Nowadays, the advertisements are being false, that people can no longer depend on it.
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2.17 It is more important to choose friends who can make you fun or to choose friends who will give help when you need them.
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2.15 It is important to know about what is happening around the world, even if it doesn't affect your personal lives.
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2.6 All scientific discoveries should be shared among all scientists all around the world; the government and businesses should not keep any discoveries in secret.
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