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7.13独立Which is better, challenging plans about one's future or practical plans about one's future? , W' d! z. G9 w$ g+ w7 C+ u2 U* l" Y3 D, `In my opinion, I’d like to choose to set a practical plan about my future since challenging plans can always make me less self-confident and practical ones are flexible when I meet conflicting schedules(这边要表达的是challenging plan由于比较有挑战性,所以相对的schedule比较紧张,不利于调整,而practical plan的schedule就没这么紧张,因此方便调整。是这个意思么,开始没太理解practical跟flexible之间的关系,觉得应该再表达的清楚点,比如说下challenging plan的日程比较紧。不然给人感觉就是challenging plan-> unconfident, practical plan-> flexible in schedule感觉逻辑有点跳跃,因为practical plan不完全等同于relaxed plan).% h% ?. Z3 s1 m2 r+ D3 W()()()1 H/ w:In both short-term and long-term, practical plans are useful and can encourage me to accomplish it efficiently. A typical example is setting study plans for English exams. In short-term, for example, in a period of ten days, since a lot of vocabulary cannot be remembered, I’d reject challenging plans like memorizing 2000 words since I will not be confident enough to trust myself if I cannot reach my target. In this case, I definitely prefer to do some practices which are similar to real exams. In long-term, for instance, in a semester(这里in long-term和in a semester一起用总觉的有点别扭,上面也是一样。或许可以这样: As a long-term example, in a semester....), because I am used to examine the percentage of the whole work that I’ve accomplished, if I cannot do well as I supposed to do, I also lose much confidence.(这段感觉语言上不太顺畅,可能是时间关系吧。)7 l z: |1 Y5 eAdditionally, practical plans are flexible which means that I can change part of my plan or make a compromise when I meet conflicting schedules. Such experience always exists in my daily life. For example, I planned to do physical exercise at night which may spend me about 2 hours. However, my mother told me that I had to have a dinner with one of her friends’ family in the evening, so I have not enough time to complete my exercise. At this time, I can have various options such as doing the practice in the afternoon or adding complementary exercise in the following days. If I have a challenging plan, no spare time can be left for me to make some changes to the plan or have a break.(这段感觉挺好的)For the reasons I listed above, compared to challenging plans which always take me a lot of time and need plenty of work, I prefer to set a practical one for myself. From one side, it can encourage me to be self-confident and finally accomplish the supposed work. From another side, it can be flexible and allow me to have some spare time to relax.
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