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本帖最后由 MELODYSKIING 于 2010-8-30 16:22 编辑
这是我第一次写TOEFL essay...没有限时,写了近两个小时,汗!语言还挺高中的吧……
望大家狂拍!谢谢!
(PS请问怎么传附件呢?如WORD文档)
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Some people think making sure that others (influential people or potential employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments can help you succeed, if you do not do this, you won’t have a successful life.
You may have come across someone complaining: "How can he fire me? He can hardly recognize how worthy I am!" Indeed, it is not all the boss's fault. In my opinion, he/she should take up the responsibility for missing a step, which is essential to succeed -- making sure that others know about your strengths and accomplishments.
Exposing your strengths and accomplishments to others may bring you more chances to succeed. To find an employment, you have to convince the potential employer that you are competent for the position by listing and explaining your advantages and achievements, just like selling goods. My cousin sister failed to get a job with her first resume. But after modifying her resume according to the advisor, removing the ordinary hobbies and highlighting her strengths for the job, she received three offers and finally stepped in the accounting firm her longed for. Having got a dream job, to an extent, is getting an opportunity to succeed.
What if starting your own business or studying academical problems? It is just the same, although these job seems to be more independent. We are now living in the information era, in which information greatly influences our decisions. Getting the recognition of your business or academic partners, you may get up-dated information while chatting or sharing, which may help you a lot in career. Moreover, by exposing nice qualities, one can make deeper impressions on others or even win appreciation. As a result, they will feel like chatting, cooperating and studying with you.
However, making sure others know about your strengths and accomplishments means not only introducing your strong qualities, but also showing these strong points in work. Otherwise, your demonstration will just gain hatred and destroy confidence.
To be successful, you need not only strengths and accomplishments but also the recognitions of them. In brief, I insist on the opinion that making sure that others know about your strengths and accomplishments can help you succeed, otherwise you won't have a successful life. |
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