恩恩 互相学习很受益!!
有个问题是boost的用法 可以说boost a sense of belonging么? 查了一下好像只有提高安全意识是boost a sense of safety 感觉boost这个词用来增长和激发的对象一般比较宏大~
a range of measures to boost tourism
the cut in interest rates will give a further boost to the economy
a boost in exports
另外在italki上问了一些网友的意见(推荐网站:http://www.italki.com/)
With extra income resulted from economic growth, a rising number of people nowadays enjoy travelling to distant places to appreciate the historic spots or gorgeous landscapes of certain renowned destinations.
1、resulted-> resulting 2、关于appreciate的用法:原句引用:It is OK. It certainly doesn't sound wrong. 'Enjoy' would be more common, but appreciate can be used in this situation to sound a bit more poetic. My person opinion is however that you have overdone the poetic in this sentence by using all of Appreciate/Gorgeous/Renowned. (就是用的大词太多~)
互相学习一下:
1、enjoy beautiful scenery是对的,appreciate确实不应该这样用,谢谢提醒!
2、run small business这个短语很好
3、boost the local residents’ sense of belonging这个修改觉得不够地道,boost a sense of belonging in local residents可能会比较好
4、 less educated tourists 这里我的原意是缺乏教养的人,well-educated是有教养的人的意思。但educated可能让人误解,查了一下,用less-cultivated tourists可能比较好。
5、发展tourism的缺点想不到很多,我参考一下你的吧哈哈哈