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Young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term

In the modern society, more and more concern focuses on personal successful which is a great representation of individual value. So everyone wants to get a success in his career. The first step of career success is choosing a job correctly. In this case, I think young people should try different job before their decision to find the career suitable.

On one hand, even though people make their decisions according to their interesting, it is possible that they do not know their interesting clearly, especially when they are young. As we all say, interesting is the best teacher in our life. Because of lack of experience, young people often can not find out what is their interesting actually. Take the computer crash in the past few years as an example. In the last decade of years, many people devote themselves into computer and software career as the rapid development of computer industry. But after this market is saturated, these people clam down and find out that this area is not their interesting at all. Someone could find their actually interesting after the first try, while others could have different try to find out their trendy of interesting.

On the other hand, young people will not figure out what the society need until they have a try in the real society. People's cognition of society is always behind the real need of society. The computer rush is a good example of this point. As the software development, computers become friendlier to use in our daily life. This is the exactly time that the market needs a large amount of young people, but few young people devoted themselves to this area. After they have different try of job and career, they will at least have the good sense of choice if they are not successful in their career. Therefore, before they decide which career they will do in long term they should try different job to clarify the need of society.

Finally, nowadays the society gives us lots of chances to choose the career which they are good at, and different job will help young people to collect experience which is important to success. When young people change a job, this does not mean they are wasting time in last job. Every job is a gift which could help people in the future career. Even if people change their job to a totally different area, they may learn how to deal with the relationship in a group and learn the team work spirit in last job, which is benefit to their future.

Therefore, the different tries of job before decision benefit both personally and socially, young people should try different jobs before they decide the job in long term.

Young people should try different job(s) before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term

In the modern society, more and more concern focuses on personal success(ful) which is a great representation of individual value. So everyone wants to get a success in his career. The first step of career success is choosing a job correctly. In this case, I think young people should try different jobs before their decision to find the suitable career .

On one hand, even though people make their decisions according to their interests, it is possible that they do not know their interests clearly, especially when they are young. As we all say, interest ing删is the best teacher in our life. Because of lack of experience, young people often can not find out what are their interests actually. Take the computer crash in the past few years as an example. In the last decades of years, many people devote themselves into computer and software career as the rapid development of computer industry. But after this market is saturated, these people clam down and find out that this area is not their interests at all. Someone could find their actually interests after the first try, while others could have different tries to find out their trendy of interesting.

On the other hand, young people will not figure out what the society need until they have a try in the real society. People's cognition of society is always behind the real need of society. The computer rush is a good example of this point. As the software development, computers become more friendly to use in our daily life. This is the exact ly删 time that the market needs a large amount of young people, but few young people devoted themselves to this area. After they have different tries of job and career, they will at least have the good sense of choice if they are not successful in their career. Therefore, before they decide which career they will do in long term they should try different job to clarify the need of society.

Finally, nowadays the society gives us lots of chances to choose the career which they are good at, and different jobs will help young people to collect experience which is important to success. When young people change a job, this does not mean they are wasting time in last job. Every job is a gift which could help people in the future career. Even if people change their job to a totally different area, they may learn how to deal with the relationship in a group and learn the team work spirit in last job, which is benefitful to their future.

Therefore, the different tries of job before decision benefit both personally and socially, young people should try different jobs before they decide the job in long term.

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