如有需要批改的童鞋们可以在楼下跟帖,综合 or 独立均可,前提是把完整的题目(音频,文本or确定链接)+ DOC(x)附件,我将以附件形式附上comment...如果没有特别要求,可能只是较简单的suggestion (maybe no correction), 或者可以根据 “grammar” or "logic" 等特定要求进行具体点评。
3.8-iamjerrywang (跳转5L)
"A or D: Young people today are more likely to give time and effort to improving the world than young people were in the past."
3.9-foamfly (7L)
"A or D:All school teachers should be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge."
3.10-太阳边界 11L
"A or D: Government should focus on its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development."
3.11-fsi045662 19L
"A or D:All school teachers should be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge."
3.12-enid317 23L
"A or D: Nowadays it’s easier to maintain health than the past."
3.13-太阳边界 27L
"A or D: People living in small villages are more satisfied with their life than those who live in cities."
3.14-q9450839 (提供了两篇习作,我就只改那篇新的题目的吧,还有一道govenment budgets的可以参考之前改过的哈) 36L
"A or D: Your job has greater happiness than your social life."
3.15-糖甜甜39L推荐习作
"People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. "
3.16-mhd9876 40L
"Nowadays, neighbors depend on less than people live in the past."
3.18-ailin1232 48L
"In order to be successful, people should be more like others than being different from others."
3.19-乳虎 49L
"It's important for the governments to provide money to things that are beautiful and not just for things that are practical."
3.20-ybcmath 50L 推荐语言
"Imagine a friend of yours needs help in a class, and you are one of the best students in that class. Do you think it is better that you help your friend or that he finds a tutor?"
3.29-fsi045662 46L
综合第一篇!: Iraq Vessel for electricity?
3.30-Pigap60L
“Universities spend money on improving facilities (labs and general equipments) better than hiring famous teachers.”
3.31-亚伦先生61L推荐语言
"Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship."
4.1-wobushihaoren2 62L
"People will spend less time in cooking or preparing food in twenty years than nowadays."
4.7-亚伦先生 64L
”Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on young people.“