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"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
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Under many circumstances,the bright future of a society involves the correlation between socialization and education on children and the destiny of society.The author calims that it is how children are socialized today that determines the destiny of the society and that the method of raising children in order to ensure a better society has not been learned yet. In taking various factors into account, I side on the opposite of this claim and reckon that it assumes a distortedly narrow view over the key point of a better society.

To begin with, I have to concede that the socialization of our children is very important to the future of society as the world will surely be pass on to the next generation one day. It is a glorious responsibilty for this gerneration to provide proper education and socialization for the children and the science of raising children is complex and still needs more continuing development.

As a matter of fact, however, the socialization of children is not the only decisive factor to ensuring a bright future of our society. The civilization of human society consists of various disciplines and areas, a person who is nonsociable could be quite outstanding in other realms such as physics or sports and so on, which serve as 不可或缺的 unlackable part of our civilization. Therefore, a child who is not well-socialized is also possible to make great contribution to promote the development of the society.

To carry the idea further, it is imporssible to get simple approaches to follow with as a key to make children today become a better-society-maker tomorrow. The essece of education is not a rigid dogma which is never changed, nevertheless, it is developing and changing all the time to keep suitable to the culture, economy, technology and other respects of the society on a certain stage.Even Albert Einstain was once considered as dull boy when he was in primary school, thus ensuring a better society is such a complex task that it is far less than enough for education to accomplish it.

Last but not the least, the knowledge and civilization of human society, including the science of education, is in the process of development as a whole. In the acient period of history, during which people had known little about education, out society made progress every bit of time and goes to the prosperity today. It is evidently not reasonable to claim that we are still unawear of the essece of education today after so much progress in education science.

To sum up, it is oversimplified to draw a conclusion that the socialization of children fully determines the destiny of the society and even more unaccordingly to say that we have not got the key to raise children for a better society.