[感想日志] 应王老师的要求，写一下5.23的作文回忆~ [复制链接]

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发表于 2015-5-25 10:43:56 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue

28) The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

当时遇到这题并没有觉得难写，因为题目中已经给了我分类的思路，于是我是这样写的：

认为题目所提及的四个方面对于great nation都不可或缺。

字数超过了屏幕，估计400多字应该没问题，但是中间段可能写得还是不够深刻~

Argument

78/114/116/117
The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a food distribution company with food storage warehouses in several cities.
Recently, we signed a contract with the Fly-Away Pest Control Company to provide pest control services at our fast-food warehouse in Palm City, but last month we discovered that over $20,000 worth of food there had been destroyed by pest damage. Meanwhile, the Buzzoff Pest Control Company, which we have used for many years, continued to service our warehouse in Wintervale, and last month only $10,000 worth of the food stored there had been destroyed by pest damage. Even though the price charged by Fly-Away is considerably lower, our best means of saving money is to return to Buzzoff for all our pest control services.

写作指导是question类

题目并不难，但是我感觉自己写的还是有一点乱，而且question类之前没有特别练过。。。字数应该是刚刚超过屏幕的样子。。。

具体结果可能还得作文分数出来之后才能评价，我感觉这次Issue比Argument写的感觉要好，不知道为什么。。。

因为23号的考试被数学坑了，所以还准备在短时间再战一次，估计7月初左右，所以接下来时间还是希望花一点时间练习作文，可能还需要麻烦王老师指点~（但是由于6月专业考试比较多，可能写作文的频率较之前会降低。。）