fish1044作业--写作

spyUID: 2295035

With the rapid development of the society, our lives have been changed dramatically. One of the byproducts of these changes is the bigger gap between parents and their children. Accepted or not, thousands reasons can be stated to support my point. But, I think the following three are the most important ones.

First of all, what children learn today is very different from that of the children in their parents’ time. Children are learning at formal school and their knowledge is much connected to the world while our(their) parents had received little formal education. Knowledge difference between parents and children results in different views they have of the world. For example, my father is a farmer and knows nothing about physics. So, what my father concerns much is the weather which is critical for his crops and what I really interested(时态不对) is the physics that I learn from school. It is not the case when my father was a child since my grandfather is also a farmer（这句的since比较没有根据）.

Second, what children experiences today is much different from what their parents did. Thanks to the fast growing economy of China, our childhood has become much colorful and also much isolated with our parents. Take television for example, we spend almost all our spare time watching it and seldom talk with our parents. However, when our parents are young, their family（复数？） can’t afford television. The whole family has a lot of time chatting with each other especially after dinner, which gives their parents enough time to know them well.

Last but not least, children today are facing a much more challenging life and thus the competition is much fiercer. As mentioned above, our society is now changing quickly. In order to keep in pace with others, we had to do our best to study and learn. Nevertheless, my parents’ lives were simple at their childhood, they knew exactly （that）they would be farmer（s） of their own land and fed on themselves. They did not need to compete with others. Thus, this different social background also widens the gap between parents and children today.（最后的总结和前面的论据衔接的不太好）

In conclusion, our parents are possessing different knowledge, experiencing different lives and facing different social background from their children. These differences keep the parents to know their children well which is not the case 50 years ago. Thus, it would be safe to state that parents do not know their children well then the parents 50 years age.

语言表达很好，逻辑很清晰，例子也很实际，第二段能再扣紧主题就更好了。

lupiscesUID: 2231942

With the rapid development of the society, our lives have been changed dramatically. One of the byproducts of these changes is the bigger gap between parents and their children. Accepted or not, thousands reasons can be stated to support my point. But, I think the following three are the most important ones. 简洁的开头，很好

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First of all, what children learn today is very different from that of the children in their parents’ time. Children are learning at formal school and their knowledge is much connected to the world while our parents had received little formal education. Knowledge difference between parents and children results in different views they have of the world. For example, my father is a farmer and knows nothing about physics. So, what my father concerns much is the weather which is critical for his crops and what I really interested is the（不需要定冠词） physics that I learn from school. It is not the case when my father was a child since my grandfather is also a farmer.这个理由说的不错，例子也举的好，最后一句说的不太清楚it is not the case，what case？（是不是指父子兴趣不一致）

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Second, what children experiences today is much different from what their parents did. Thanks to the fast growing economy of China, our childhood has become much colorful and also much isolated with our parents. Take television for example, we spend almost all our spare time watching it and seldom talk with our parents. However, when our parents are young, their family can’t afford television. The whole family has a lot of time chatting with each other especially after dinner, which gives their parents enough time to know them well.这个理由也不错

Last but not least, children today are facing a much more challenging life and thus the competition is much fiercer. As mentioned above, our society is now changing quickly. In order to keep in pace with others, we had to do our best to study and learn. Nevertheless, my parents’ lives were simple at their childhood, they knew exactly they would be farmer of their own land and fed on themselves（这个有歧义，吃他们自己？）. They did not need to compete with others. Thus, this different social background also widens the gap between parents and children today.% p, Z/ ~/ m" `) o3 M, w1 c2 k

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In conclusion, our parents are possessing different knowledge, experiencing different lives and facing different social background from their children. These differences keep the parents to know（from knowing） their children well which is not the case 50 years ago. Thus, it would be safe to state that parents do not know their children well then the parents 50 years age.

观点很清晰，理由例子都不错，最大的特点是把两辈人进行了比较，很切题
其实每个例子都可以多写一点，不过时间肯定不够。。这个写法的问题，我觉得你可能有自己的想法
总之，写的已经很好了

fish1044UID: 2190500

10.16作业
写得太长了。

With the advancement of the modern technology, it seems to be right that people’s life is getting easier than ever before. Some are already planning how to spend their leisure time freed by technology. However, I want to argue that modern technology in fact adds our burden in the future and thus, we may have a much busier time than we have today. The reasons to support my opinion are stated as follow.
First of all, due to the development of the health care technology, people can live a longer life than before. Thus, our planet is bearing more and more people. The increment of the population will eventually lead to fiercer competition than before. For example, as we college students are about to graduate, the process of job hunting begins. We now have to compete at least 50 students to gain ourselves a job. However, during the last four years, the number of students at school has been doubled while the jobs offered by the companies do not increase accordingly. Students have to work harder to excel in up to 100 people and eventually students’ leisure time will be decreased.
Second, every sword has two sides. While the technology advancing, it comes with numerous of side effects. Instead of saving us trouble, we have more problems to solve indeed. For instance, the invention of automobile makes us less trouble when we trying to travel from one place to another. However, this invention leaves us a more serious problem. That carbon dioxide released by the cars is the main cause of the so called “Greenhouse Effect” which increases the temperature of the earth and thus melts the ice in the polar area. The melted ice will increase the sea level and finally, many of the offshore cities will be flooded. In order to solve this problem, it requires a lot of people’s effort. In a whole, the invention does not save people’s time as much as it is expected.
Last but not the lease, as the technology advancing, the knowledge that possessed by mankind is booming. One needs to spend more time to learn in order to keep up with the society. As in the current society, one should spend at least 13 years averagely on education just to make sure that they are not left behind. If you want to be elite of the society, you need to spend at least 20 years to educate yourself. It would not be hard to image that the time people spend in education will continue to increase in the future.
As a conclusion, although modern technology increases the life quality of most of the people, it does not necessarily guarantee us more leisure time. On the contrary, competition brought by the increment of the population, side effects come with the development of new technology as well as increasing education time all together cost us more time and our life might be even harder than it is today.

shirley072UID: 2712200

With the advancement of the moderntechnology, it seems to be right that people’s life is getting easier than everbefore. Some are already planning how to spend their extraleisure time freed by technology. However, I want to argue that moderntechnology in fact adds our burden in the future (adds our future a burden) and thus, we may have a much busier timethan we have today. The reasons to support my opinion are stated as follows.
First of all, due to the development ofthe health care technology, people can live a longer life than before. Thus,our planet is bearing more and more people. The increment of the population willeventually lead to fiercer competition than before. (Thus, our planet is occupied by incremental population which eventually leadto fiercer competition than before.主要是觉得bearing more and more people有一点不顺口)
For example,as we college students are about to graduate, the process of job huntingbegins. We now have to compete at least 50 students to gain ourselves a job.However, during the last four years, the number of students at school has beendoubled while the jobs offered by the companies do not increase accordingly.Students have to work harder to excel in up to 100 people and eventuallystudents’ leisure time will be decreased. (例子挺好的，但是感觉有点没有描述清楚，比如说we now have to compete…我们现在…但是后面紧跟着一个转折，说last four years…实际上是想说明现在人多了不少，但是至少从时间上面看不出来)。
Second, every sword has two sides.While the technology advancing, it comes with numerous of side effects. Insteadof saving us trouble, we have more problems to solve indeed. For instance, theinvention of automobile makes us less trouble when we trying to travel (facilitatesour traveling恩这个表达不知道可不可以，只是不想跟上面trouble重复)
from one place to another. However, this invention leaves usa more serious problem. That carbon dioxide released by the cars is the maincause of the so called “Greenhouse Effect” which increases the temperature ofthe earth and thus melts the ice in the polar area. The melted ice willincrease the sea level and finally, many of the offshore cities will beflooded. In order to solve this problem, it requires a lot of people’s effort.In a whole, the invention does not save people’s time as much as it isexpected. (感觉这一段的主要内容是讲的科技进步带来的具体的负效应，而人们花在上面的leisure time在段前和段后只是非常概括的提了一下，没有具体讲)

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Last but not the lease, as thetechnology advancing, the knowledge that possessed by mankind is booming. Oneneeds to spend more time to learn in order to keep up with the society. As inthe current society, one should spend at least 13 years averagely on educationjust to make sure that they are not left behind. If you want to be elite of thesociety, you need to spend at least 20 years to educate yourself. It would notbe hard to image that the time people spend in education will continue toincrease in the future.
As a conclusion, although moderntechnology increases the life quality of most of the (ofthe去掉) people, it does not necessarily guarantee us more leisure time.On the contrary, competition brought by the increment of the population, sideeffects come with the development of new technology as well as increasingeducation time all together cost us more time and our life might be even harderthan it is today.


改得不好请指正：）

hmnsunUID: 2653457

With the advancement of the modern technology, it seems to be right that people’s life is getting easier than ever before. Some are already planning how to spend their leisure time freed by technology. However, I want to argue that modern technology in fact adds our burden in the future and thus, we may have a much busier time than we have today. The reasons to support my opinion are stated as follow.
7 _# N: J) Y: ]& VFirst of all, due to the development of the health care technology, people can live a longer life than before. Thus, our planet is bearing more and more people. The increment of the population will eventually lead to fiercer competition than before. For example, as we college students are about to graduate, the process of job hunting begins. We now have to compete （with）at least 50 students to gain ourselves a job. However, during the last four years, the number of students at school has been doubled while the jobs offered by the companies do not increase accordingly. Students have to work harder to excel in up to 100 people and eventually students’ leisure time will be decreased.
Second, every sword has two sides. While the technology advancing, it comes with numerous of side effects. Instead of saving us (from?)trouble, we have more problems to solve indeed. For instance, the invention of automobile makes us less trouble (make it less trouble for us)when we trying to travel from one place to another. However, this invention leaves us a more serious problem. That carbon dioxide released by the cars is the main cause of the so called “Greenhouse Effect” which increases the temperature of the earth and thus melts the ice in the polar area. The melted ice will increase the sea level and finally, many of the offshore cities will be flooded. In order to solve this problem, it requires a lot of people’s effort.这句话有点儿问题。 In a whole, the invention does not save people’s time as much as it is expected.
/ L" @8 z& p7 W! N% d- o, N6 [Last but not the lease, as the technology advancing, the knowledge that possessed by mankind is booming（good word）. One needs to spend more time to learn in order to keep up with the society. As in the current society, one should spend at least 13 years averagely on education just to make sure that they are not left behind. If you want to be elite of the society, you need to spend at least 20 years to educate yourself. It would not be hard to image that the time people spend in education will continue to increase in the future.
7 r  u9 r. i! |; G; F: G+ f2 pAs a conclusion, although modern technology increases the life quality of most of the people, it does not necessarily guarantee us more leisure time. On the contrary, competition brought by the increment of the population, side effects come 、coming with the development of new technology as well as increasing education time all together cost us more time and our life might be even harder than it is today.

我不多做评论了，因为感觉写的比我好多了，怕评论不当，哈哈。学习一下。

48# fish1044

fish1044UID: 2190500

10.17 作业

    Keeping informed with the latest news is very important in people’s life. TV, radio or newspaper are the ways by which we collect the information. Even though, many people think that TV can give us a vivider illustration of what happening around the world, I think, newspaper instead, in the most important way for us to get the latest news. My conclusion is drawn based on the following reasons.

    First of all, newspaper is the fastest choice for people to gather information. When certain event happens, the newspaper reporters need to carry their paper and pens only to record what happen there while the TV reporter need to bring many devices as well as a group of people to the spot. For example, few months ago, a bus suddenly caught on fire and burned most of its passenger to death in Chengdu. This news was published on the evening paper the same day, but you can find this news on TV on the other day.

    Second, newspaper can contain variety kinds of different news. News on the newspapers possesses only a small area of the paper and it would not be matter what kind of news appears on this area. However, the program on TV needs to combine the news with video material, some kind of news such as quarrel on the street would be consider too mineral to be reported on TV since you have to mobilize a lot of people and device as well as spent money to shot the scene. As a result, news show on TV will be limited due to some financial issues.

    Last but not least, newspaper is easier for us to get the news. TV programs can only be shown on certain kind of device which could receive TV signal and has a display to show the image. It would not be possible for most of people to carrying those devices with them, even if they do, they can’t watch the display all the time. On the contrary, newspaper is easier for people to carry around. In addition, people can read the news on newspaper whenever they want, what they need to do is just to unfold the paper. In this aspect, newspaper is more convenience than TVs.

    In conclusion, newspaper has more efficiency as well as more capability than TVs to convey information. All of the above advantages including the convenience of newspaper support my opinion that news paper is a better medium to distribute news compared to TVs.

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

字怎么不大点啊,我 不是近视都看不清

fish1044UID: 2190500

这样子够大了吧。翠花，来了都不给点评论啊。。。

daisy840228UID: 2684617

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    Keeping informed with the latest news is very important in people’s life. TV, radio or newspaper are the ways by which we collect the information. Even though, many people think that TV can give us a vivider illustration of what happening around the world, I think, newspaper instead, in the most important way for us to get the latest news. My conclusion is drawn based on the following reasons.
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+ S1 \2 Y( I8 X2 I1 S: S    First of all, newspaper is the fastest choice for people to gather information. When certain event happens, the newspaper reporters need to carry their paper and pens only to record what happen there while the TV reporter need to bring many devices as well as a group of people to the spot. For example, few months ago, a bus suddenly caught on fire and burned most of its passenger to death in Chengdu. This news was published on the evening paper the same day, but you can find this news on TV on the other day.9 n. M" ]( f6 a! r9 ^, r8 V9 Z8 p

- \; C2 E# @, Z    Second, newspaper can contain variety kindsvarities,variety 和kind相同意思吧 of different news. News on the newspapers possesses only a small area of the paper and it would not be amatter what kind of news appears on this area. However, the program on TV needs to combine the news with video material, some kind of news such as quarrel on the street would be consider too mineral to be reported on TV since you have to mobilize a lot of people and device as well as spent spendmoney to shotshoot the scene. As a result, news shows on TV will be limited due to some financial issues.
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6 p+ c* z! Z) |; T: m9 t    Last but not least, newspaper is easier for us to get the news. TV programs can only be shown on certain kind of device which could receive TV signal and has a display to show the image. It would not be possible for most of people to carrying carrythose devices with them, even if they do, they can’t watch the display all the time. On the contrary, newspaper is easier for people to carry around. In addition, people can read the news on newspaper whenever they want, what they need to do is just to unfold the paper. In this aspect, newspaper is more convenienceconvenient than TVs.
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& A0 `4 M& ?, R. x7 B# @5 s2 E    In conclusion, newspaper has more efficiency as well as more capability than TVs to convey information. All of the above advantages including the convenience of newspaper support my opinion that news paper is a better medium to distribute news compared to TVs.
结构清晰，观点明确，恩，语法错误也比较少，我的文章才刚贴出来，你也帮我看看吧，谢谢

spyUID: 2295035

Keeping informed with the latest news is very important in people’s life. TV, radio or newspaper are the ways by which we collect the information. Even though, many people think that TV can give us a vivider illustration of what happening around the world, I think, newspaper instead, in(is) the most important way for us to get the latest news. My conclusion is drawn based on the following reasons.

    First of all, newspaper is the fastest choice for people to gather information. When certain event happens, the newspaper reporters need to carry their paper and pens only to record what happen there while the TV reporter need to bring many devices as well as a group of people to the spot. For example, few months ago, a bus suddenly caught on fire and burned most of its passenger to death in Chengdu. This news was published on the evening paper the same day, but you can find this news on TV on the other day.(这个例子感觉不太好，在国外这种在TV news可以很快看到，国内情况可能比较特殊。)

    Second, newspaper can contain variety kinds of different news. News on the newspapers possesses only a small area of the paper and it would not be matter what kind of news appears on this area. However, the program on TV needs to combine the news with video material, some kind of news such as quarrel on the street would be consider too mineral（是minimal？不太理解什么意思） to be reported on TV since you have to mobilize a lot of people and device as well as spent（spend） money to shot the scene. As a result, news show on TV will be limited due to some financial issues.

    Last but not least, newspaper is easier for us to get the news. TV programs can only be shown on certain kind of device which could receive TV signal and has a display to show the image. It would not be possible for most of people to carrying those devices with them, even if they do, they can’t watch the display all the time. On the contrary, newspaper is easier for people to carry around. In addition, people can read the news on newspaper whenever they want, what they need to do is just to unfold the paper. In this aspect, newspaper is more convenience than TVs.

    In conclusion, newspaper has more efficiency as well as more capability than TVs to convey information. All of the above advantages including the convenience of newspaper support my opinion that news paper is a better medium to distribute news compared to TVs.

前两个理由感觉不怎么具有说服力，尤其是第三段，例子不太好，毕竟吵架这种新闻报纸上应该也很少见的，而且只要有价值的新闻，电视台是不会放过的。

fish1044UID: 2190500

10.19作业

Many of the people hold the idea that facts and concepts are two controversial things. In fact, the facts and concepts are the things that are related to each other. It could be considered inappropriate to draw a general conclusion on which is more important. However, for a graduate student who takes the responsibility to propel the develop of science, I think that concepts are more important and my argument is stated as follow.

First of all, concepts come from facts, they are the general ideas extracted from facts. Generally speaking, the beginning of the process for human of knowing the nature is through facts. When we collect a certain amount of facts from our life, we begin to study them and there comes the concepts. For example, people first find the phenomenon of electric stimulated magnetic force and then, after many years of study, people find the concept of electromagnetic wave. Thus, concepts are the essence of facts, it consists the general character of many related facts. In this aspect, learning concepts are more important.

Second, concepts can not only help you to understand the facts, they could even help us to turn our ideas into facts. As we all know, the most direct motivation of human to study the facts is to control them. Owes to the eagerness of human to conquer the nature, the world of science is advancing in an astonishing rate. Here we also take the concept of electromagnetic wave as an example. When people understand the concepts of electromagnetic waves well enough, they begin to use them to manipulate the invisible fields to server the mankind. Telegraph, radio communication as well as all kinds of wireless products are invented based on electromagnetic theory. Emphasize our study on concepts can never be too serious.

Last but not least, concepts can only be possessed by learning, while facts can be known by inspecting or experiencing. We should know that, facts are simply an accumulation of our life experience but concepts, on the contrary, can only be possessed though learning. Again, electromagnetic wave would be an appropriate example to illustrate my point of view here. Like electric field, electromagnetic wave can not be seen by eyes or feel by ones hands. People might see a compass turns to an opposite direction when put near a time-variant current. However, the electromagnetic wave can only be understand by mathematical equation when is derived through a long time of study.

In conclusion, as a graduate student, it is our goal to contribute new knowledge to our world which could eventually help to improve our power against natural force. Emphasize our study on concepts is the most direct way for us to realize it. As a result, it would be safe for me to stress my point that concepts are more important than facts for graduate students like us.

如是_ivyUID: 2704554

10.19作业

Many of the people hold the idea that facts and concepts are two controversial things. In fact, the facts and concepts are the things that are related to each other. It could be considered inappropriate to draw a general conclusion on which is more important. However, for a graduate student who takes the responsibility to propel the develop of science, I think that concepts are more important and my argument is stated as follow.

First of all, concepts come from facts, they are the general ideas extracted(abstracted是不是好些啊） from facts. Generally speaking, the beginning of the process for human of knowing the nature is through facts. When we collect a certain amount of facts from our life, we begin to study them and there comes the concepts. For example, people first find the phenomenon of electric stimulated magnetic force and then, after many years of study, people find the concept of electromagnetic wave. Thus, concepts are the essence of facts, it consists the general character of many related facts. In this aspect, learning concepts are more important.个人觉得这一段主要在写概念理论来源于事实，是它的抽象，但是并没有足够的理由说明怎样因此学习概念理论就更重要了。其实觉得主要可以开展在后一部分，至于概念抽象于事实，可以一句话带过。

Second, concepts can not only help you to understand the facts, they could even help us to turn our ideas into facts.按照这个句子，似乎上一段要说概念帮助人们更好的理解现象和事实，但是真的米有看出来这一点 As we all know, the most direct motivation of human to study the facts is to control them. Owes（owing） to the eagerness of human to conquer the nature, the world of science is advancing in an astonishing rate. 觉得用rate有点小诡异哦~但是speed好像很Chinglish。不知道可不可以用pace呢Here we also take the concept of electromagnetic wave as an example. When people understand the concepts of electromagnetic waves well enough, they begin to use them to manipulate the invisible fields to server the mankind. Telegraph, radio communication as well as all kinds of wireless products are invented based on electromagnetic theory. Emphasizeing our study on concepts can never be too serious. 这个句式用的很精彩啊看完这一段，才明白你是大概从学习知识和应用知识这样的框架写的。这一段显然比上一段论证的充分很多

Last but not least, concepts can only be possessed by learning, while facts can be known by inspecting or experiencing. We should know that, facts are simply an accumulation of our life experience but concepts, on the contrary, can only be possessed though learning. Again, electromagnetic wave would be an appropriate example to illustrate my point of view here. Like electric field, electromagnetic wave can not be seen by eyes or feel by ones hands. People might see a compass turns to an opposite direction when put near a time-variant current这个例子很生动. However, the electromagnetic wave can only be understand by mathematical equation when is derived through a long time of study.这一段我有点茫然了，因为后面和第一句的态度貌似有点矛盾

In conclusion, as a graduate student, it is our goal to contribute new knowledge to our world which could eventually help to improve our power against natural force. Emphasize（to emphasize好一些） our study on concepts is the most direct way for us to realize it. As a result, it would be safe for me to stress my point that concepts are more important than facts for graduate students like us.

总体很好的~~比我写的好多了。我写的是很自己把自己思路堵死了~~O(∩_∩)O~学习了！！

joyceliuUID: 2477232

Manyof the people hold the idea that facts and concepts are twocontroversial things. In fact, the facts and concepts are the thingsthat are related to each other. It could be considered inappropriate todraw a general conclusion on which is more important. However, for agraduate student who takes the responsibility to propel the develop ofscience, I think that concepts are more important and my argument isstated as follow.8 l5 x! n1 T2 L5 f( E7 F
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Firstof all, concepts come from facts, they are the general ideas extractedfrom facts. Generally speaking, the beginning of the process for humanof knowing the nature( human's knowledge about nature) is through facts. When we collect a certainamount of facts from our life, we begin to study them and there comesthe concepts. For example, people first find the phenomenon of electricstimulated magnetic force and then, after many years of study, peoplefind the concept of electromagnetic wave. Thus, concepts are theessence of facts, it consists the general character of many relatedfacts. In this aspect, learning concepts are more important.
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Second,concepts can not only help you to understand the facts, they could evenhelp us to turn our ideas into facts. As we all know, the most directmotivation of human to study the facts is to control them. Owes to theeagerness of human to conquer the nature, the world of science isadvancing in an astonishing rate. Here we also take the concept ofelectromagnetic wave as an example. When people understand the conceptsof electromagnetic waves well enough, they begin to use them tomanipulate the invisible fields to server the mankind. Telegraph, radiocommunication as well as all kinds of wireless products are inventedbased on electromagnetic theory. Emphasize our study on concepts cannever be too serious. ' v; m- Q8 P' @

Lastbut not least, concepts can only be possessed by learning, while factscan be known by inspecting or experiencing. We should know that, factsare simply an accumulation of our life experience but concepts, on thecontrary, can only be possessed though learning. Again, electromagneticwave would be an appropriate example to illustrate my point of viewhere. Like electric field, electromagnetic wave can not be seen by eyesor feel by ones hands. People might see a compass turns to an oppositedirection when put near a time-variant current. However, theelectromagnetic wave can only be understand(understood)by mathematical equationwhen is derived through a long time of study.; L& @$ h" w. S4 o& m; O
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Inconclusion, as a graduate student, it is our goal to contribute newknowledge to our world which could eventually help to improve our poweragainst natural force. Emphasize our study on concepts is the mostdirect way for us to realize it. As a result, it would be safe for meto stress my point that concepts are more important than facts forgraduate students like us.

写的好棒啊，实在没什么可改的。前两段递进解释concept比fact重要，最后一段从learning这个角度出发进一步阐明观点，学习了。辛苦帮我也看看吧，掐时间写的，自我感觉不好，谢谢啦

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

Many of the people hold the idea that facts and concepts are two controversial things. In fact, the facts and concepts are the things that are related to each other. 这个观点和写法好很新颖的It could be considered inappropriate to draw a general conclusion on which is more important. However, for a graduate student who takes the responsibility to propel the develop of science, I think that concepts are more important and my argument is stated as follow. 开头很精悍的, 好也很明确

f all, concepts come from facts, they are the general ideas extracted from facts. Generally speaking, the beginning of the process for human of knowing the nature is through facts.嗯很地道啊 When we collect a certain amount of facts from our life, we begin to study them and there comes the concepts. For example, people first find the phenomenon of electric stimulated magnetic force and then, after many years of study, people find the concept of electromagnetic wave. Thus, concepts are the essence of facts, it consists the general character of many related facts. In this aspect, learning concepts are more important
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Second, concepts can not only help you to understand the facts, they could even help us to turn our ideas into facts. As we all know, the most direct motivation of human to study the facts is to control them. Owes->owing to the eagerness of human to conquer the nature, the world of science is advancing in an astonishing rate. Here we also take the concept of electromagnetic wave as an example. When people understand the concepts of electromagnetic waves well enough, they begin to use them to manipulate the invisible fields to server the mankind. Telegraph, radio communication as well as all kinds of wireless products are invented based on electromagnetic theory. Emphasize our study on concepts can never be too serious.这段好,内容句子

Last but not least, concepts can only be possessed by learning, while facts can be known by inspecting or experiencing. We should know that, facts are simply an accumulation of our life experience but concepts, on the contrary, can only be possessed though learning. Again, electromagnetic wave would be an appropriate example to illustrate my point of view here. Like electric field, electromagnetic wave can not be seen by eyes or feel by ones hands. People might see a compass turns to an opposite direction when put near a time-variant current. However, the electromagnetic wave can only be understand->understood by mathematical equation when is derived through a long time of study.个人认为一个例子可以用2次,我就有时候用2次.3.次..貌似多了点. 而且主题都是一个的

In conclusion, as a graduate student可以说年轻人,现代人..只是研究生貌似范围小了,有局限性, it is our goal to contribute new knowledge to our world which could eventually help to improve our power against natural force. Emphasize our study on concepts is the most direct way for us to realize it. As a result, it would be safe for me to stress my point that concepts are more important than facts for graduate students观点同上 like us. 仔鱼句子很好的啊,语法也不错,没什么问题.结构逻辑都好的.句子结构好,简单复杂都有了.也不繁琐.跟你学习了

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10.20 作业

    With the development of the society, our technology seems to focus more and more on personal life. Numerous products such as microwave, oven or refrigerator have made our life much easier than before. It would be no doubt that our life will be even more convenience than what it is now in 20 years. Thus, when come to the question that related to the time people will spend on food preparing, I certainly agree with the statement that people could spend less time in preparing food or cooking 20 years later.

    First of all, the advancement of new technology makes it possible for us to free ourselves from food preparing and cooking. People’s life is becoming the core concern to the scientists who are responsible for development modern technology. In fact, thanks to the modern technology, our life is being more convenience than ever before especially in food preparing. For example, the invention of canning and refrigerator make longer food preservation possible. Also, the invention of microwave gives us a choice to heat our food fast. What’s more, you can find almost all kind of microwave food including pasta and pizza which can be done and ready to be served after just 2 minutes’ reheated in the microwave. The fast food market is still growing in an exponential rate. It won’t be hard for us to image the easy life 20 years late.

    Second, the adding pressure on our burdens requires us to spend more time at work. In fact, the development of life technology, which conveniences our life, is a requirement of the advancing society. For instance, as a student who is about to step into the society, we are now suffering a greater pressure than before. The student number has almost been trebled while the jobs offered are almost the same. We have to spend every time possible to work in order to excel. Thus, the time spare from food preparing is precious. When the competition becomes fiercer 20 years from now, people will never hesitate to save time in every possible means. As a result, the time they spend on preparing food will be lessening.

    In conclusion, it is not only possible but also irresistible for people to spend less time in preparing food in the future. Based on the facts stated above, it would be safe to draw the conclusion that, people would spend less time in preparing food or cooking.