【备考日志】草莓酱拌饭小组 by Napery—小手札记：世界是我们想象的画布。

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单眼皮vs肿眼皮 发表于 2009-11-15 20:42

嘿嘿 谢谢眼皮儿呀

爪子做事太慢了 囧囧囧。。。

欢迎多来参观提意见呀~~

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自然科学类的文章在整个题库中占据了字数最多的那一类，比如下面这篇文章140个字，
几乎是所有argument中题干最长的一道题。自然科学类文章经常在学术专有词上涉猎不少，
所以会花很多功夫去解释，它难就难在学科背景还是要有一些的。
比如文科生要是碰到地球撞击彗星的题目恐怕一时半会儿都理不清楚头绪。
而考古类和地球起源的一个难点在于，
作者经常在时间轴上露出一些破绽，而这样的破绽往往容易被忽略掉。
另一个难点在于，经常很难分清楚哪些是推论，哪些是史实。

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112The following proposal was raised at a meeting of the Franklin City Council. "Franklin Airport, which is on a bay, is notorious for flight delays. The airport management wants to build new runways to increase capacity but can only do so by filling in 900 acres of the bay. The Bay Coalition organization objects that filling in the bay will disrupt tidal patterns and harm wildlife. But the airport says that if it is permitted to build its new runways, it will fund the restoration of 1,000 acres of wetlands in areas of the bay that have previously been damaged by industrialization. This plan should be adopted, for it is necessary to reduce the flight delays, and the wetlands restoration part of the plan ensures that the bay's environment will actually be helped rather than hurt." Logic Chain: Notorious for flight delays[Fact 1] => building new runways to increase capacity[Assumption 1] => filling in 900 acres[Fact 2] => disrupt tidal patterns and harm wildlife[Fact 2] => fund the restoration of wetlands which have been damaged[Assumption 2] => In order to reduce flight delays and help the environment, the plan should be adopted[Assumption 3] 之前构思的逻辑图： 后来重新审视后，觉得应该修改成下面这个逻辑图： 就这道题而言就是：我们应该按照题目所说方案去实施 BY-- 米饭头头儿 Assumption 1 1. This proposed plan rests on an unlikely assumption that an inadequate capacity has resulted in the flight delay. Other reasons for flight delays: harsh weather condition; poor or ineffective management; airplanes of poor qualities; No sufficient evidence supports that building new runways could help to settle this problem. It might ultimately turn out to be a waste of money. Assumption 2 2+3. Could the benefits from wetlands restoration be capable of counteracting the damages brought by the bay-filling? more serious deterioration before the restoration is completed; impossible to restore to its original condition; harmful effects on environment have been ignored without certain solutions; no reliable and precise data to substantiate its positive impacts speaks louder than its negative impacts. Assumption 3 4.  Whether the airport has the ability to keep its promise? This plan could be absolutely put into practice? No evidence.

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196. Sadly, widespread negative images of businesspeople have been created in large part by television. Consider the fact that, although they make up a mere 10 percent of the characters in dramatic roles on television, businesspeople are responsible for about one-fifth of all the crime on television shows. In fact, in a recent survey of television producers, only 35 percent of the television roles for businesspeople were viewed as positive ones. 很不幸的，商业人士广为人知的负面形象很大程度上是由电视造成的。请考虑如下事实：尽管商业人士在电视剧角色中只占10％，他们却占了电视节目中所有犯罪的大约五分之一。实际上，在最近一次对于电视节目制作者的调查中，电视角色中的商业人士只有35％被看作是正面人物。 Assumptions： 1. Negative images have been created only by TV. 2. These negative images had fair negative influences on audience and people thought of them as real roles in real life. [觉得这是个隐含的假设。假设商人的负面形象有负面影响。] 3. The fact that they make up 10% in roles on TV and account for 20% in crimes on TV shows demonstrate that Businesspeople stand for negative images and these were more influential than their positive ones. 4. A survey of TV producers is reliable and thus the statistic that 35% were viewed as positive ones means 65% were absolutely viewed as negative ones. 5. It was thought that the negative images of business people created by TV had contributed to the impression of producers that 35% were viewed as positive ones. [作者假设制作人的这个调查结果，是因为电视塑造出来的负面形象的影响。] 分析：[颜色相同的，为相应的分析，有点点类似于提纲。] 1. Other media such as magazines, newspapers, Internet or novels contributed to the widespread negative images of businesspeople. 2. Every walk of life can be characterized on TV shows, compared to other professions; perhaps 10% defines a number of less people. Despite the fact that 1/5 of all the crime are business people, we are not informed of the ratio of all crime to the whole roles on TV. 3. Even the ratio is high; it doesn’t mean that the businesspeople stand for negative images as their positive ones may appear much more often on TV shows. 4. The survey is statistically unreliable. The number of respondents might be insufficient to represent all producers. 5. The result that 35% were viewed as positive doesn’t necessarily mean that 65% are all negative ones, as there may be some characteristics without neither negative nor positive images. 6. It is possible that TV producers have to view businesspeople as negative ones for work’s sake, as the scenarios sometimes call for negative ones which are just to the contrary in real life. It is also of fair possibilities that in order to attract people who are interested in businesspeople for their negative images, TV producers mean to view them as negative ones. The author confuses the cause and result. 7. Even businesspeople were negative images created by TV, it is not necessary that they will have negative effects. Perhaps their crime has failed to leave audience any deep impression or the audience think that business people’s negative images have nothing much to do with their real life, such as in their choice or view of careers in their real life.

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sigh...

196确实很纠结。。。

花了上午的时间一直在考究这个题目。。。。

囧。。。。下午要好好赶今天的任务咧。。。。

天气好冷，爪子都伸不出来了，要窝在被窝里过冬啦。。。。。

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期末了 要考试了

sigh....

要好好准备考试的事情了....

最近对issue&argue&words都没有感觉了....

自己果真很肤浅......休息下...回来接着再战....

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昨晚和S语音BS，效果就是不一样。

很有收获呀。

S的口语真好~

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128# Napery

。。。小手你又无话可说了。。。
。。。。。那也表乱说呀。。。。
。。。。。。。囧一个。。。。。

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我要再没背好单词 就罚我没饭吃吧。

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初稿。写摆上来。晚点再修改。囧。写的累死了。

NO.88 科技与社会

"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."

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Issue
孔子曰：“文胜质则史，质胜文则野。文质彬彬，然后君子。”意思是质朴胜过文采，就显得粗野，文采胜过质朴，就显得虚浮。文采和质朴兼备，然后才能成为君子。”要写好aw，大家都知道内容胜过语言，但如何具体操作并且平衡语言和思想，却是一个很难真正领悟并赋予实践的问题。

形式
好文章不一定是句子长，用长短结合的句子写出清晰的文章，让别人看的很舒服，才是要追求的。如果不能很好的驾驭长句子，我个人认为先追求表意的简洁明了比较重要，其中可适当添加长句，然后根据自己对语言运用能力的进步逐步增加表达的复杂性，不能想要一蹴而就。大家都喜欢说“什么and什么，什么or什么”, 本意是想说更多的东西，结果往往表意不清，或者叙述累赘，反而乱了句子结构。所以这么用要谨慎，想清楚了逻辑结构再用。用排比句式，当然能使文章工整而有气势，但是从应试作文的角度看，如果一下子想不出那么多例子怎么办？

用词
好文章也不是非要用难词，当然适当点缀是必要的，用的合适才是王道。用的不确定的词要查一查用法和例句，想当然地用上去会导致表意模糊甚至变化。虽然AW强调逻辑思维能力，但没有合适的语言承载，再完美的逻辑也只存在你脑子里。所以厚此薄彼，轻视语言也不可取。我们不是和文学家比，但我们再怎么也是和以英语为母语的美国学生比，所以表意准确应该是基本要求。

特地找了小樱斑斑的帖子学习。
最近比较喜欢“挖坟”，没事了，就翻帖子看看。
收获很大。

对于issue，前人们的经验和看法真的值得一看，然后却不是简简单单一扫而过。
还是思考吧。看帖子是要思考的。
写AW更是要思考了。
距离上次写issue貌似是两个星期的事情了。
这次写88，啥都没多想，有啥想法写啥，红宝单词一边去，完全杜绝滥用。
不停的琢磨文章的逻辑思维，不断的更改自己的提纲。
困惑总是不停的出现，到了后来，也干脆懒得再改提纲了。
写的时候，虽然没有限时，但是比之前快多了。
起码算是我手写我心好了，真囧。
也没多想句子的样式，想到啥句型就搬上去。
也没好好的斟酌。

先写写自己暂时的想法，或许等哪天回头来看，又会有收获。
翻修自己的文章，看到的是血一般残酷的事实。
囧。杯具啊。

PS:
S同学说俺有生词。。
囧，爪子小小说明一下，如果有可能是平常看一些素材的时候就记住了的词。。。
但是不晓得是不是红宝词呀。。。
而且这些词是按照文章背景来记忆的。。。
应该没有用错吧。。。
sigh。。。。血淋淋。。。。


膜拜一下小樱斑竹的这几段话。
真的很精练。
以后写文的宗旨就是这个了！

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下个周一，第一门专选考试。
我要加油了。

我要是浪费时间了，就罚我睡不好觉吧。

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132# Napery
偶是没有考46级所以对单词完全麻油概念的裸人...额...所以词汇量很小嘞...无视我好了

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杯具啊。。
听老渔串讲，最有印象的竟然是，“记不住拉倒”。。。。
不过，我喜欢这种感官式的记单词方法。。。
比老盯着单词书强多了。。。
恩，爪子接着听。。。。