好心人过来看看这封推荐信该怎么和老师商量啊！

laowanjimimaUID: 2714584

好不容易要到一封UCLA 老实的推荐信，但是这封信看了让我很无语……
This class is problem and case oriented and is considered to be a very difficult course. ********always asked excellent questions and continually strived to learn more about the subject. It was a pleasure to have ********** in my class. ******** was an outstanding student.

******** is goal oriented and displays high achievement potential. ********* was not satisfied with an average learning experience; but wanted an excellent experience. I believe ****** attained that in my class. ******* would place in the top 10% of all the students I have taught. I can recommend ********* for your graduate business school.

If you have any questions, please call me at ******.

Very truly yours,


星号部分是我的名字……所以整片都是简单那句……因为只在那里上过2个月的课程，所以和老师的接触是不是太多……但也不至于是这样的吧……


有没有好心人，最好是有经验的，和我说说怎么和这个老师商量这封推荐信。这么些实在是不行啊……但是我怕我一有意见老师又不高兴了……怎么说会比较婉转有很有效果呢？


谢谢啦～！

rock19840717UID: 2387522

谁没事老写散文小说

NewYorker2010UID: 2660379

我觉得无所谓了
可能老外就了解你这么多，他不会像咱们似的总是over-elaborate
人家实事求是而已

11yaoyaoUID: 177037

一开始就应该把自己的简历阿，各种奖学金阿什么的都发给他

人家对你了解太少，自然写不出东西啊，也是很实在的

你让外国人给你写推荐信，如果关系不是很好的朋友，那么人家都是这样的，本着实事求是的精神，而且人家也担风险阿。

viennaUID: 2408794

学习一下老美的写作风格~