1006G splendidsun的备考日记——Protect my dream

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-12
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1050520&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D280%26amp%3Borderby%3Ddateline
Comment：
This is a very sensitive topic that involved everyone in our society. Firstly, we could draw a picture about the sex laws in America. Although well-known for its open mind to sex, US establish very strict laws of this area. Especially to meet the need of many parents of adolescents, they try their best to make their children live in a safety environment. While, the excess strict laws makes it is difficult to focus on the truly dangerous persons that commit sexual crime. The sexual predators name list for public has little value of avoiding of the hurt to the children. And the assessment of a sexual predator also has defects. In my viewpoint, the so called sexual predator should be classified according to their behaviors and the negative influence they bring to the society instead of putting them in the same group. In this way, people would make it clear that who is the most dangerous while others are not. At the same time, despite of punishing the predators the most effective way of preventing the sexual crime happening is to inculcate children have a strong awareness of self-protect.

错字：
Adolesent— adolescents

Words:
paedophile恋童癖
entice怂恿
rape强暴
sexual predator 性捕食者
rapist强奸犯
molester猥亵者
penalty处罚
impose强加
ratchet effect齿轮效应
have great latitude to
prostitute妓女
consensual sex 认同的性行为
indecent exposure有伤风化的暴露
child pornography儿童色情作品
be barred from 不准
tabloid小报
vengeful复仇的

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-13
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1050822&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D280%26amp%3Borderby%3Ddateline
Comment：
What is the aim of education? That's a great question worthy to contemplate. The result of education could be classified into two groups. The first one is knowledge which is limited to the different disciplinary. The second group is the route of thinking. There is no doubt that learning how to think has greater value than the former ones. However, the process we learn the learning abilities permeate to the process of learning objects knowledge. Thus, object knowledge couldn't be neglect in the education. Only learn the learning abilities would be too vague and general for a primary student to understand. But it would be much easier for him/her with the help of learning the object knowledge. Also, in this way he/she would get the point of how to exert the learning abilities he/she has.

错字
Abilities—abilities

Words：
hollow sound 空洞的声音
eloquent雄辩的，有说服力的
gigantic巨大的
in matter of 与……有关
mockery嘲笑
sovereign至高无上的
exile流亡
preach说教
exclaim 大声说出

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-14
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1051165&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D280%26amp%3Borderby%3Ddateline
Comment:
The issue that Google would exit Chinese market really surprises me a lot. At first, it is difficult for me to understand why Google would rather give up the greatest potential market in China. Now, I have got the main points. As a global search engine, users from all around the world use it as a main tool in their lives. While， some extremists exert Google to convey their ideas to oppose the government of China. To prevent this situation, Chinese government has to filter the results of searching and delete the sensitive words. But that seems to be incompatible with the belief of Google. The search engine should offer the complete results and fast service to its users. However, the filter results slow down the speed of searching. What else, in China the competitor BAIDU occupy most of Chinese market as it has a good relationship with the government and filter the results throughout. Actually, Chinese people tend to use BAIDU instead of google for the following reasons：
1. BAIDU is a indigenous brand of searching engine, which the government give great support for its development.
2. BAIDU could meet the need of Chinese user. Although Google could offer more accurate and complete searching results, most of them are English version which are difficult for most Chinese citizen to understand. Take myself as a example: When I am searching some non-academic key words, I prefer using BAIDU. While for the academic resources, Google would be the first choice to gain the accurate information.
3. China has its own special situation that couldn't make all to public especially some sensitive history events. Thus the searching results couldn't be equal to those from any other part of China.
Above all, it is very difficult for Google to make a balance between the government's need and the users' need in China.

错字：
Controvatial— controversial

Words:
cyber网民
infrastructure基础设施
surveillance监督
prompt引起
outcry尖叫
lucrative有利可图的
be intoxicated with 陶醉于
pornography色情文学
indigenous本土的

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-15
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1051416&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D280%26amp%3Borderby%3Ddateline
Comment:
This article makes a brief summary about the progress the women have made for the past decades. Women have becoming the majority of the workforce and universities graduates in America. However, women are still under-represented in the stage of leaders. And sexism is still existed more or less. Despite the pressure from work, women have to face the problems from their families. Rearing children seems to be the responsibilities of women. It is not an easy case for them to make a balance between work and family. And rearing childern is not only time-consuming but also money consuming. If a woman divorces with her husband, there is no doubt that a child is a huge spiritual and economic burden for her.
For the government, it is difficult to change the roles that women play. But it is possible to give them abundant welfare and insurance for women to have a high quality of life, which also benefit for the whole society.


错字：
Arical—article
Progass— progress
Insourance- insurance

Words:
PepsiCo 百事可乐公司
Areva阿海珐公司（法）
empowerment 授权
menial仆人
sexism性别歧视
modicum一点点
friction摩擦力
under-represented 不足的
child-rearing抚养子女
momentum动力，冲劲
hand-to-mouth无隔夜粮的，勉强维持的
quota定额
summon up振作，唤起
march into 长驱直入

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-16&17
原文：
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1051661&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D280%26amp%3Borderby%3Ddateline
Comment：
Two experts explain their opinions about whether US need to take military action to curb the nuclear programme of Iran. I agree with the one who is against the motion.
Despair over the unsuccessful diplomatic efforts to curb Iran's nuclear ambitions so far has raised the perceived value of military action, but I insist that the best way to proceed is still diplomacy.
Military actions might have little effect of curbing the promotion of nuclear program. However, it would bring severe hurt and casualties of the rank and file which may raise the vengeance about the world. Also rebuilding the collapse cities is a heavy economic burden for the whole world.
Thus, the most efficient and effective way to solve this problem is diplomatic way that countries make an agreement together and each member implement their own promise.

sanction 制裁
belligerent交战国
viability 可行性，生存能力
standoff 僵局，冷战
foolhardy 有勇无谋的，蛮干的
untenable站不住脚的
implement执行，实施
last resort最后手段
commendable值得赞扬的
yeild 产生
reluctance 勉强，不情愿
have no compunction about doing 不后悔……
intransigence不妥协，不让步
upcoming即将到来的
deployment部署，调度
Massive Ordnance Penetrator (MOP)巨型穿地导弹
vigilance警觉
know-how诀窍，专门技能
Persian Gulf波斯湾
nuclear deterrent核威慑力量
retaliation报复
pre-emptive先发制人
fortification防御工事
backfire逆火



1. Too often belligerent motives are ascribed to anyone who suggests the viability of the military option in resolving the international standoff over Iran's nuclear programme.
2. It would be foolhardy to argue that military action is the preferred policy option for stopping Iran's nuclear aspirations, which are strategically untenable for the United States.
3.For this kind of nipping in the bud strategy to work, the nuclear programme must be limited in scope, so that serious damage can be achieved with a single blow.
4.beyond the military response itself, it would open an account between Iran and whoever attacked it that would be very difficult to settle.
5.Regardless of how successful a particular attack might be, it is less likely to become the basis for a long-term solution to the challenge posed by a determined proliferator than would be a negotiated bargain.


抽象句型
1.Beyond A, it would open an account between B and C that would be very difficult to settle.除了带来A意外，它还会为B和C之间的带来一个非常难解决的问题。
2.Regardless of A, it is less likely to become the basis for a long-term solution to B.
不管A， 他对于B不是一个长久之计

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-8
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1049555&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D280%26amp%3Borderby%3Ddateline
Comment:
In this article, the author thinks that politics is closely related with the morality. It is difficult to balance within these two sides. For long term, the author offers a solution to take Christian as the mortality which could ensure that the society could have a high standard of mortality. Also this would decrease the incidence of political crime.  Actually, the author’s idea is easy to understand. Kind-hearted citizens would comprise of a peaceful society which will have a steady political situation.
This article is an extraordinary template for us to study the writing skills and organization of paragraphs. This is also a good resource to grasp the points from. And some examples is also convergent to the conclusion that the author declares.

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-20
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1052619-1-1.html
Comment：
Today's topic is very interesting and cutting-edged. I like it very much because I could grasp all points that the author wants to demonstrate. Ha~~
In the field of biology and basic medical science, the main barrier that limits the development of science research is how to focus on specific targets. Without specificity, it is difficult to know the interaction among molecular and the pathways of signal transduction which are very essential to explain the mechanisms that different organs work together. Also specific targets have the same vital roles in the clinical therapy. Chemotherapy and radiotherapy to tumors have very low capacities to choose the tumor cell. In this way, not only tumor cells could be killed by the chemical toxin or radiation but also normal cells would be hurt in this process. After balancing the benefit and the injury that chemotherapy and radiotherapy bring, the patients have to suffer the side effects of them in order to survive. In this article, the author highlights a new method to target a group of specific neurons by transforming the virus that could fire into the brain neurons. The light signals could be traced and recorded which offer the original resources of neural activities. This great breakthrough gives a hint for neurobiologists to understand the brain activities and diseases. Maybe someday this type of virus could be apply in the clinical testing just like the tracer in PET. However, it is still a long way to arrive that stage because this issue is closely related with medical ethics. And control of viruses is another problem scientists should resolve before it is applied in public.


错字：
Contol—Control
Pulic—Public

optogenetics光遗传学
dystopia糟透的社会
numbingly使麻木的，失去知觉
schizophrenia精神分裂症
extinguish压制，熄灭
check off核查无误做上记号
legerdemain戏法，骗术
manipluate操纵，处理
limbic system 边缘系统
laser diodes激光二极管
fine-tuned 调整，微调

好句
1.
Over the past few years Crick’s vision for targeting neurons has begun to materialize thanks to a sophisticated combination of fiber optics and genetic engineering.

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-19
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1052308-1-1.html
Comment：
Although NEA (National Endowment for the Arts) made a great contribution to the promotion of arts to American citizens in early times, now its distribution of funding has less positive effect on the plural development of arts. In the article, the author said that the government sponsors arts because it could create lots of work positions but not for the art value they bring to society. Economic promotion replacing aesthetic value is over-focused by the NEA/the government. Thus, many artists would rather give up the funding in order to have the right of self determination.
Actually, any governments would like to sponsor the fields that could great benefit to the economy. However, there is no doubt that this action would limit the pluralism and diversity of this area. To balance this situation, I think the government should focus on both economic and aesthetic value, especially the latter one. The origin of arts is to bring happiness and pleasure to people.
错字：
Plurism—pluralism
Orgin- origin

bailout紧急求助
plead辩护
seemingly表面上看来
pull off努力实现
paltry无价值的
wangle设法脱身，骗取
beret贝雷帽
be in line for即将获得，有可能获得
provocative挑动性的，煽动性的刺激的
fashion from由……做成
mandate强制执行
evangelize传福音
bequest遗产
matinees白天举办的音乐会
thrive繁荣，蒸蒸日上
highbrow知识分子
entity实体
sabotage妨害，破坏……行动
accordion手风琴的
baptize受……的洗礼
puppetry木偶
epics史诗

Keep your soft-core socialism for Citigroup and the manufacturers of wooden arrows!不太明白~~

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-10
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1050228&extra=&page=1
Comment:
In this article, the author explains the subtle difference between uncertainty and risk. Uncertainty is full of unknown that it is difficult for us to predict the trend of development. However, we are familiar with most of the factors which are comprised in the risk. It is possible to control these factors which might decrease the rate the risk happens.
Then the author illustrates three methods to deal with the uncertainty: strategy anticipation, organizational agility and uncertainty absorption.
The assertion of the author really brings some fresh knowledge for me. Also this article teaches me some Golden Rule to survive in this competitive society.

splendidsunUID: 2723757

Issue 125
The past likes a mirror that reflects the trend of development for the future. Based on my understanding of the society progression and science development, I hold the opposite viewpoint that the past could predict the future.

The future is a continuation of the past. The past provide solid and valid resources to make a summary of the rules of the events, which play key roles in the prediction. Basic to the forecasting the astronomical phenomena for astronomers are the observation records from the early times. The integrality and completeness would greatly devote to accurate forecasting.

Not limited in the "experience science", such as observation astronomy and meteorology, the past also gives hints to the "experimental science". The level of hormone of human bodies fluctuates within a very narrow range. Feedback regulations of hormone contribute to the homeostasis of bodies. After recognizing this point, studying the regulation of blood pressure seems to be much easie. The feedback theory guides the researcher to find a positive pathway which increases the blood pressure and another one to suppress the over-increase to prevent the heavy burden of the high blood pressure brings to the heart and brain.

The prediction of the future is about the trends that would be followed but not the details. Taking the society progression as a typical example, according to the history of human society, it is obvious to predict that the society would be more democratic and people would have greater freedom. But it is difficult to describe how to arrive this stage in very detail which depends on the situation at that time.

However, there might raise the question about the accuracy of the prediction. The past is also changing all the way. What we use to make a clear prediction is “dynamic past”, which means we need to update new information at any time to attain accurate predictions. Even the breakthroughs in different eras have their roots in the past. The background would give sufficient cues for the coming breakthroughs. The intensive contradictions between two countries would lead to a war. A severe economic crisis may due to the irreparable defective economic system. The information explosion asks for the spread of Internet.

In order to make prediction for the future, we need to collect complete information from the past and update it with current situation. And then abstract the rules and principles within this information. At last, we need to find the similarity of the future and the past and apply the rules to the future. From this process, we could draw a relative clear picture of the future.

Above all, the past is the most valuable experience that we have. We could make sufficient use of it to guide and instruct us for our future. The past may provide us the shortest route to get the destination and live efficient lives.

错字：
Phenonmena—phenomena
Experimental—experimental
Horomon— hormone
Homostasis-homeostasis

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-21
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1053017-1-1.html
Comment：
Today's article introduces a new technology "electromagnetic pulses (EMPs)" that could punch holes on the steel. Prior to the traditional stamping pressure, EMPs could punch holes with smooth fringe without tearing the metal. And its high efficiency makes it outstanding when comparing with the laser methods.
The principle of this new technology is widely known. It makes use of the discharge from the capacitors to produce a strong current which is able to punch a hole on a piece of 30mm-diameter steel.
In my viewpoint, there are many classical principles in different fields that could be dug out to find new applications. That's one route to discover new inventions. And then the inventors just need adjust the principles to the new functions.

错字：
Techonology—technology
Digged-dug

a blast of
do away with 清除，废除
beef up 加强
coil线圈
repel排斥
stainless steel不锈钢
Volkswagen 大众汽车
burr 毛边
blunt钝的，不锋利的
stamping冲压，冲击制品

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-22
原文：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1053277-1-1.html
Comment:
I like today's topic very much. The reasoning line of this article is very clear. Without big words that are difficult to understand. I can grasp the whole idea of the author.
Conformity and individuality is a hot topic that whole society widely discussed. By conforming to each other, it may bring peace and harmony not only in small groups but also between countries. However, in nowadays individuality should be give higher esteem, because it might make breakthroughs without compromising to the authority figures. And being ourselves is the best way to satisfy our inner needs according to Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs which emphasizes self actualization is on the top of the pyramid.
Chinese people keep thinking the reason for that there is no Chinese from mainland could achieve Nobel Prize. In my opinion, we pursuit conformity excessively while overlook the benefit of individuality. In other words, we don't have enough freedom to do what we desire to. I agree with the points that conformity is comprised of individualities and every one represents the unique in the world. We couldn't deny the world of our potentially unique contribution by following the crowd.


错字：
Emphasise—emphasize

Words:
irreconcilable不能和解的
prosecution检举
be plead with恳求
feed up with 厌倦
unscrupulous肆无忌惮的
authority figures权威人物
aptly适宜地
句子：
1.Absence makes the heart grow fonder.小别胜新欢
2. The truth is individuality and conformity are merely different sides of the same coin.
3. For as Hermann Hesse (1877 ~ 1895) wrote, "Every man is more than just himself; he also represents the unique, the very special and always significant and remarkable point at which the world's phenomena intersect, only once in this way and never again."
4. We need to conform, but not at the price of abandoning reason and common sense.
5. Nietzsche quote, "You have your way. I have my way. As for the right way, the correct way, and the only way, it does not exist."
6．Friedrich Nietzsche (1844 ~ 1900): "The surest way to corrupt a youth is to instruct him to hold in higher esteem those who think alike than those who think differently."

splendidsunUID: 2723757

说说1-21的备考吧~
效率低，主要是因为某人的缘故，写了一篇A137一篇I51，
A感觉没有想象中的容易，也搭上什么都没看，直接写
I更是让我想了许久
写出来后却被从头批到尾
不过某人也的确说的实实在在
AW最重要的是逻辑，其次是语言的准确性，最后是语法
我的那篇整个逻辑混乱，加上乱用大词，最后就是语法乱糟糟
没法要了，吸取教训，争取每天都有进步~
加油！

splendidsunUID: 2723757

1-23
原文https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1053643-1-1.html
Comment:
Economic topic is still difficult for me to grasp the ideas. I couldn't wholly understand that why banks bankruptcy could lead to the economic crisis throughout the world. What's the function of invest banks which could sell products that are still not be produced? From this article, the author tries to propose that the all banks need to have greater buffers so as to prevent the recession from happening again. Also in this bonus season, the government of America asks for the charge for liability levy from banks which is regarded as guarantee for the banks. However, the functions of banks is just collect the spare money from the rank and file and put them into the big projects that need a large amount of money. Why do banks invest money to some products that do not exist?


错字：
Gurantee—guarantee

Words:
devastation毁坏，荒废
pact合约
a lender of last resort最后贷款人
liability 负债
underwriting 保险
levy征税
rein in 放慢
self-fulfilling prophecy自我验证的预言

splendidsunUID: 2723757

说说这几天吧~~~到24号坚持每天1篇A，一篇I
呼~~有时候一篇可以磨好久
不过还好，至少坚持下来了~~
25号一天看题库，但是看得很慢，一天下来60个，现在仍在继续，因为我今天的目标是100~~
不看完不睡觉！加油！！！