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分类讨论:学习题材 第四组 28 42 59 200 229 TECHNIQUE

现在是今天的topic:TECHNIQUE,一共有5个题目:

28. "Students should memorize facts only after they have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts. Students who have learned only facts have learned very little."

42. "Because learning is not a solitary activity but one that requires collaboration among people, students of all ages will benefit academically if they work frequently in groups."

59. "Too much emphasis is placed on role models. Instead of copying others, people should learn to think and act independently and thus make the choices that are best for them."

200. "The most elusive knowledge is self-knowledge, and it is usually acquired through solitude, rather than through interaction with others."

229. "The best way to learn a new subject or skill is to study small segments or details in great depth rather than to start by trying to develop a sense of the whole."

这一次各个题目之间联系相对比较散,不如上三次的那样紧密。主要都是围绕学习的过程和方法提出的论断。考虑到各个题目比较强的独立性,分来拟定提纲思路可能效果比较好一些。

我先来起一个引子:
28 What is the difference between FACTS and IDEAS. TRENDS, CONCEPTS that help to explain? Is it possible that mere fact will suffice?Is such explanatory matter always necessary? Or are they always available? Or, is this statement conditionally correct?if so, what is the condition?

42 Is learning a kind of activity that require collaboration? What is collaboration? Is collaboration required ----- is it a must or is it supplementary? After all is it helpful? Is it possible that without collaboration one may learn much better? If collaboration is somewhat helpful, does this suggest people of different AGE should work in groups often? Btw, is “to work in groups” the perfect illustration of collaboration? If not classified by age, then what? Or shall people of the SAME age work together? Etc. (Still so many questions are reserved..)

59 What is role model? What is “copying others”? What do we actually copy from others? Does making choice that are best for oneself contradict to copying from others? The speaker claims “to think independently and THUS make the best choice for themselves”, yet HOW comes this “THUS” ? How much emphasis have been place on role models? Is it too much? What are the effects?

200 What is the most elusive knowledge? How do you define “self-knowledge”? Is it the most elusive knowledge, or does it resemble some certain feature other than being extremely elusive? Why? How is self-knowledge acquired? Which is more important in forming self-knowledge, solitude or interaction with others? Do they interact or function independently? Are they mutually exclusive? Is there a criterion to judge, a common feature to get compared? What is your idea or the formation of self-knowledge? Is there any conditional thing? (Further analysis can be fabulous)

229 What is “to study in details”? What is “to try develop a sense as a whole”? Who actually performs these? Is it possible that we don’t “try” to develop a sense as a whole but actually “receive” what is already developed? If so, is it beneficial or detrimental, considering diverse aspects? And the same questions for “details”. Also, is there any criterion to judge? Is there any conditional thing? Are they mutually exclusive? Synergic or antagonistic? Most importantly, think over how to respond to the “RATHER THAN”. Is the denial of integrity reasonable? Why?

我只是写出了部分可以引起思考的一些提示,其中一些应该说是破题的关键。大家可以针对这些问题写出自己的观点,或者提出新的问题,等等。now自由发言。

试着写了两段59
role model对于成人和儿童作用的不同
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As for children who are at the stage of forming one's value system are prone to imitate role models , since it is one of the ways they develop their own. However, they may not be aware of whether the behaviors of their role models are good or bad or suitable for them to carry out,that is to say, they think less before copying. Of course we cannot blame on our children's immature judgement or argue that it is wrong to establish role models for children. Children need help from parents to choose a right person as their role model and instructed by them on how to think and judge independently and make decisions on their own. Moreover, I contend the society should pay more attention to the role models not in order to copy them but to supervise them for the seek of the ethos of the whole society ,especially for our children.

Most adults are rational enough to distinguish whether the deeds of role models are correct and act according to their own situations in order to make up decisions best for them, because of the way role models impact on individuals. First, adults will have his or her own judgement on the behavior of the role models. If what the role models do are admirable, it will be recognized and stored into the database of the brain , that is to say, it provide a feasible example when an adult encounters such questions or situation. Still it doesn't mean he or she will act totally according to the example ,most likely he will judge the whole circumstance and compare the example provided by the role model with other plans available and make some adjustment the fact that they are thinking and making choices independently , while not simply copying the deed. Consider, Kobe Bryant is the one you admire and set as your role model.No doubt a reasonable adult won't copy his misconduct . Thereby, though great influence role models may have on adults, to allege adults are copying instead of analysing and deciding by themselves are no more than overestimating the importance of role models .

6楼的问题本身就是一个需要定义的地方,完全可以讨论下去

如果用过浙江大学“新编大学英语”的话,应该记得有一个whether sports stars should be role model的文章,正反观点都有。

上面两段写得不错,除了第一段第一句有语法错误。我觉得对于adult其实还有进一步的区分:是intentionally的模仿和自我完善所选择的role model,或者处于一种impulse,并不是太理智的情况,例如崇拜,而选择的role model,这两者是不是需要区分呢?当然这是围绕role model的界定,本身扯得有点远了,最终必须回到learning上。

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分类讨论:学习题材 第五组 4 92 138 181 217 REASEARCH

本帖最后由 tequilawine 于 2010-2-16 22:17 编辑

看来还是得我来~还剩下8道题两组,今天这一组的topic是REASEARCH,一共有5个题目:

4"No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."

92. "In any academic area or professional field, it is just as important to recognize the limits of our knowledge and understanding as it is to acquire new facts and information."

138. "Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress."

181. "The way students and scholars interpret the materials they work with in their academic fields is more a matter of personality than of training. Different interpretations come about when people with different personalities look at exactly the same objects, facts, data, or events and see different things."

217. "In order to produce successful original work, scholars and scientists must first study the successful work of others to learn what contributions remain to be made."

这一次的各个题目就更加散了,汗……大家分头列提纲来讨论吧。
4. a. 肯定interdisciplinary study的重要,确实有很多的学科要借鉴别的学科的重要思想,比如statistics在sociology,biology和chemistry发展成为biochemistry,history需要geology和archaeology
b. 但似乎并不是那么绝对,比如研究comparative literature,具体例子没想好

另外,突然想到,不一定要outsider bring 吧,自己吸收别的领域只是大概也可以作为一个反驳吧?
关于4题,再补充一点,任何领域的发展都需要工具,如计算机,基本上所有的field里都能发挥作用,所急也就必然离不开这些工程师们的介入
92. a. 承认limitation可以减少自满、停滞不前的保守心态,能更好的吸收新的知识
b. 可以容忍犯错,to err is human,不会为自己的失误而过度懊丧自责
c. 但这不是不接受新知识的借口

outsider bring vs insider borrow,这一点很精彩。

92的话,老方法:如果说equally important,则importance所在的方面有可能不同,各自独立而同样重要,这是一个入手的地方。当然如果要negate one and set up the other,另当别论。例子自己稍微想一想。

138 首先考虑mistake的重要性,实际上很多科学上的发现都让人哭笑不得——来源于非常白痴的mistake,但是only through mistake是否走极端,without mistake是否可以,此其一;关于THROUGH mistake的定义,mistake是作为process还是initiation/inspiration,此其二;论题是对于individual还是society,是在哪个field,分开讨论,此其三。

181 最容易想的是学科差异,除了比较俗。另外我突然打算和原题叫板:如果说people produce different interpretation for EXACTLY the same thing,其实是因为they are not EXACTLY different,质疑这一观点的产生中带有的局限性。不知道是不是一个可行的做法。另外就算是different interpretation,different到什么程度?真正differentiate到了objective和subjective,training和personal preference的程度?对原题说的有道理的地方充分肯定,胡扯的地方要做到敏感,然后狠狠地批。

217的话关键在于original和successful work of others. 原来有一道题专门讨论originality可以参考,到底什么是original需要定义(如果写常规观点这一点基本可以忽略,但是如果写反常规观点的话肯定要做出语惊四座的关于originality的诠释)。同时,是不是一定必须每次都要去study这个东西?会不会有些情况下没必要?此外,work of others也许有,successful则不一定,没成功的前人工作就不去study了?等等。

现在的回复根本不够多啊,这样子我是不能换到最后三个题目的。大家有什么想法尽管说。 :)
217. "In order to produce successful original work, scholars and scientists must first study the successful work of others to learn what contributions remain to be made."
而这里说的目的是 to learn what contributions remain to be made.
就是它的目的狭窄到只是去弄清还有那些东西没有人发现过——这明显的是功利的在看研究。
“对于original work是有很大"则是 无根据的,题目显然没有说去学习前人 会给人了解同领域的发展
并且分析别人著作的优缺可以使自己受教育

题目的 行动是scholars and scientists must first study the successful work of others
它所达到的个小目的是to learn what contributions remain to be made
而大目的是to produce successful original work
是吗?
大家都是针对 大目的to produce successful original work来讨论
而忽略了小目的to learn what contributions remain to be made
的局限性   即目的狭窄到只是去弄清还有那些东西没有人发现过——这明显的是功利的在看研究
是吗?
没看懂你的意思
我个人认为to learn what contributions remain to be made为to produce successful original work服务
当然,如果观点不同,也没有问题。写to learn...并不能保证to produce.... 思路也不错。就看自己怎么把握。

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分类讨论:学习题材 第六组 177 179 183 PURPOSE AND EFFECT

第六组共三道题目:

177. "The study of an academic discipline学科 alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."

179. "What most human beings really want to attain is not knowledge, but certainty. Gaining real knowledge requires taking risks and keeping the mind open but most people prefer to be reassured rather than to learn the complex and often unsettling truth about anything."

183. "As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."

都是传说中的经典思辨题目啊~ 自由发言开始 :)
177. "The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."

Position: agree
1. economics: 一切影响我们生活的经济活动(举例)为何发生
2. maths: 抽象具体世界的能力,精确描述对象的语言
3. history: 通过历史洞悉人类规律,理性面对未来

179. "What most human beings really want to attain is not knowledge, but certainty. Gaining real knowledge requires taking risks and keeping the mind open but most people prefer to be reassured rather than to learn the complex and often unsettling truth about anything."

Position: agree
1.人们害怕不确定的未来。自然/社会规律可以预见未来因而使人安心。人们喜欢规律的建立(followers of Pythagoras),厌恶规律的消失("God does not play dice" vs quantum mechanics)
2.真正的科学研究往往是富有自我颠覆精神的。科学家接受令人不安的新事实,并因此发展新的理论。固守旧理论往往阻滞进步。(举例……)
3.先行者和一般人的区别:伟大和平凡,获得安慰和孤独...

183. "As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."
agree
1。表面上的,直接的东西往往是容易理解的,越深入的知识往往越抽象而难以理解
2。更高层次的知识往往牵涉到更多表面并不相关的现象,需要更专业的描述语言,因此更加复杂。
3。没有一种知识体系是完备无暇的,新的知识往往伴随着新的,更困难的问题。

117 The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."

I agree, of course. Can anyone disagree?
OUTLINE:
I agree, and even would go further.
1 Gerenally, any academic discipline can afford one, who has truly learnt them, powerful tools to measure, evaluate the world and find meanings behind events and phenomena.
2 Moreover, different disciplines endow a student with different, and even contradicting in some respects, eyes.
3 We need caution not to be bigoted disciples who believe in their eyes too much to accept other views about the real world.

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179. "What most human beings really want to attain is not knowledge, but certainty. Gaining real knowledge requires taking risks and keeping the mind open but most people prefer to be reassured rather than to learn the complex and often unsettling truth about anything."

I agree.
1 Knowledge has dual function: on one hand, it conducts applications, which embodies knowledge; on the other hand, it directs research, which breed new knowledge. The former brings certainty while the latter uncertainty.
2 Most people, other than few scientists and alike, only use knowledge as an invisible tool to solve problems and, in turn, attain certainty which amounts to security from difficult troubles.
3 Understandably, certainty brings more benefits to common people than does truth. Without truth, they usually still live well, while without certainty, they are doomed, deprived of all anticipations.

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183. "As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."

I strongly agree.
1 A history of knowledge is also a history of questions. One question was answered only to find another question lies beneath the answer.
2 Ken has boundary. Every tested theory is built on a set of hypotheses and thus sets its boundary, beyond which stand questions disobedient to these hypotheses.
3 When the range of our ken expands, as knowledge advances, more questions with no known presumptions emerge to challenge us.

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“浅阅读”的危险:转一篇对作文思路有帮助的文章,尤其是学习类

文汇报:浅阅读的危险


                                    汪涌豪


  所谓浅阅读,主要表现在阅读兴趣的单一上,集中体现在对生活类、时尚类等
通俗读物的偏好上。当一个人或一个社会大多数人只读这一类书,少有更多途的阅读拓展
和更进一步的知识追求,就不能不引起人们的忧虑和警惕


  通俗读物或许可以安慰人于一时,但安慰不到久远;或许可以滋润人的情绪,但滋
润不到灵魂。那永远能安慰和滋润人灵魂的,只能是经过时间淘洗的经典,因为它保留了
人类对外部世界和内在心灵最艰苦的开拓,也最能证明人的心智所可达到的精神高度


  为了一个人精神的成长,乃至一座城市文明的提升,现在是到了加大对先进文化的
宣传力度,认真学习与吸收人类一切优秀文明成果,并使之落实到从出版到发行各个方面
的时候了


  进入7月,各地书店又呈现出一片火爆景象,新书充斥书架,读者纷纷涌入。应该说,
对于今天日渐忙碌的都市人而言,不管出于何种原因,基于主动还是被动,能抽时间走进
书店亲近书本总是好事。读书能增进知识,陶冶性情,进而提高人的文明素质与城市的文
化品位,怎么说都应该鼓励。不过细加观察,其间一种浅阅读现象很堪忧虑,它主要
表现在阅读兴趣的单一上,与之相伴随的,还有阅读过程的随意和阅读目的的迷失。


  阅读兴趣单一集中体现在对生活类、时尚类等通俗读物的偏好上,而肯花时间细细体
味经典名著的越来越少。这从新华书店7月份销售统计中就可看出。据此统计数字,除《新
华字典》等长销书外,各地书店位居排行榜之首的都是通俗读物,相比之下,人文社科类
图书少而又少。即就其中最好销的文学类书籍而言,位居前列的也多为《我为歌狂》、《
爱上爱情》等通俗小说,或者日、韩当红作家的言情新作。此外便是网络文学的纸介版和
漫画图文类读物了。前者已发展到将网络游戏改制为创新小说隆重推出的程度,而后者漫
画绘本,因其作者放低身段,以平视大众的姿态,关心普通人的生存状态和日常生活,有
一点童真与温情,再带些外冷内热的调侃,浪漫感伤的倾诉,一下子将许多人挟制到远离
现实的虚拟真空,并成为都市时尚情感最好的代言,其中有的销量已过百万册,有的则被
改编成电视剧在热档播映。至于一些原本是儿童看的图文书,也错位成了成年人的最爱,
本地一家著名的周刊有漫画书八大经典之选,其中如《丁丁历险记》等书就吸引了无
数成年人的眼球,书价不低,销售却仍火爆。


  本来,读养生、化妆、烹饪、园艺类书,乃或读名人传记以励志,读理财宝典以应用
,完全随各人的兴趣和需要,都无可厚非。但问题是,当一个人或一个社会大多数人只读
这一类书,少有更多途的阅读拓展和更进一步的知识追求,譬如因人际关系紧张和生存压
力增大,就只选择浪漫过头的爱情童话以为即时的寄托,因生活节奏加快和闲暇时间的稀
缺,就只拿轻松浅显的四格图文替代计划中的原典赏会,就不能不引起人们的忧虑和警惕
。这种阅读过程的随意与阅读兴趣单一一样,再清楚不过地凸现了都市人在阅读目的上的
迷失。因为事实显然是,读书可以用为休闲,但决不仅止于休闲,其最根本的质性更无关
于休闲。读书除能深化已知了解未知外,还在于能助成人们深刻的灵魂拷问与自我反省,
并从根本上满足从生命的繁琐中挣脱出来的自由向往,从而求得对生存困境最彻底的觉解
和对情感层次最诗意的丰富。


  显然,上述通俗读物是很难帮助人真正实现这一目的的,它们或许可以安慰人于一时
,但安慰不到久远;或许可以滋润人的情绪,但滋润不到灵魂。那永远能安慰和滋润人灵
魂的,只能是经过时间淘洗的经典,因为它保留了人类对外部世界和内在心灵最艰苦的开
拓,也最能证明人的心智所可达到的精神高度。所以我们在东西方都可见到,人们把读这
样的书比作心灵的探险,比作灵魂的壮游。而在当今变化迭生的信息社会,一切
知识不断被刷新,也惟有它历久弥新,能让人反复体味,并引导人克服格式化的生存,走
向精神的丰实和成熟。此所以费迪曼要将从荷马到毛姆、佛斯特的作品列入从18岁到80
《一生的读书计划》,卡尔维诺要在《为什么要读经典》中说:每一次重读经典,就像
初次阅读一般,是一次发现的航行。经典是这样一种东西,它很容易将时下的兴趣所在降
格为背景噪音。


  可现在,时下的兴趣有从背景噪音升格为阅读主流的危险,即使是经典,也多被
掺了水透了气,如坊间迭出缩水名著即是一显例。那些《文学名著精缩》、《外国文
学速读手册》、《文学名著快读》,将丰富的文学大餐变成速食的快餐,据说销得不错,
但对通过阅读经典以获取精神滋养这一目的的达成而言,显然是一条岔道,一种偏航。




  为了一个人精神的成长,乃至一座城市文明的提升,现在是到了加大对先进文化的宣
传力度,认真学习与吸收人类一切优秀文明成果,并使之落实到从出版到发行各个方面的
时候了。我们不需要面上的花团锦簇,而急需切实的长养扩充。而对读者来说,进食但求
适口是可以的,但寻找精神食粮,就应该有更上一层的追求。依此衡量,浅阅读不能
算是一种自觉的阅读,甚至还不能算是一种有效的阅读。

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[原版]艺术课程不可少+海洋的评论

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A Justification辩解 For the Inclusion of the Arts in the Educational Curriculum
Sheryle Bergmann Drewe  The University of Manitoba



With the educational curriculum suffering from overcrowding过于繁重, along with the recent "back to basics" movement, the arts programs in many schools have suffered considerably. If the arts are to avoid the impending "knife," a strong justification for their inclusion is required. In this paper, I will argue that the strongest justification for the inclusion of the arts in the educational curriculum lies in在于 their potential to foster understanding on the part of the participants of artistic activity. I will further argue that the understanding attained through participation in the arts is a particular sort of understanding; a rich understanding. In proposing that understanding can be attained through participation in the arts, I will have to respond to the criticism that I am viewing participation in the arts as instrumentally有益的 as opposed to intrinsically valuable. I will suggest that, although art may be instrinsically valuable, the strongest justification for the inclusion of the arts lies in the potential of aesthetic activity to foster a rich understanding of the human experience.

I will argue that it is a focus on the form of artistic expression which results in the potential for attaining a rich understanding. The possibility of attaining understanding presupposes that aesthetic activity has a certain degree of objectivity. I will examine the sort of "objective" reasoning involved in appreciating and creating works of art and will conclude that the reasoning involved in aesthetic activity has the potential for fostering a rich understanding on the part of the participants of such activity.


INTRINSIC VERSUS INSTRUMENTAL?
Aesthetic activity has often been justified based on the intrinsic value内在价值 隐含价值 inherent in such activity. Proponents支持者 of the "art for art's sake" point of view suggest that participation in aesthetic activity is valuable in and of itself; that is, appreciating and creating art is valuable for its own sake. This may be the case but two points must be made in response to the "art for art's sake" position. First, if by "art for art's sake" we mean that appreciating and creating a work of art is pleasurable for its own sake, we must question this justification in an educational context在教育的背景下. Justifying art for the pleasure it elicits could lead one down a slippery slope. What if students find encounters with comic books, or worse, pornography, to be pleasurable; do we thereby justify their inclusion in the educational curriculum? Rather than justifying the inclusion of the arts for their pleasure-giving potential, I would suggest that it would be more prudent谨慎的 to examine their potential for expanding students' understanding. Ironically, Richmond (who is a strong advocate of the intrinsic value of art), suggests that "art so distinguished is (uniquely) worthwhile educationally in as much as it provides inspiration for creativity and reveals for our understanding and appreciation imaginative and insightful images of reality in aesthetically significant visual form" [italics added].1

The second point I wish to make is related to the potential for expanding students' understanding through art. I want to argue that there cannot truly be "art for art's sake" but rather正相反的, in Abb's words, "art for meaning's sake."2 By art for meaning's sake, I am referring to the potential for students to derive meaning from encounters with art. I will explore this possibility in more detail in the next section. At this point, I propose that to the degree to which works of art express content, to that degree they are instrumentally, not simply intrinsically, valuable. This contention is not concurred with by Richmond who makes the distinction between those who argue for the study of an apolitical, aesthetically autonomous art and those who see art in education as an avenue for asserting certain socio-political concerns, for example, marxist or feminist, and various kinds of community action while denying lofty aesthetic ideals in favour of more popular and accessible art images.3
Richmond's description of "those who argue for the study of an apolitical, aesthetically autonomous art" requires further analysis. Is it possible to have "apolitical, aesthetically autonomous art?" Although all art may not be political, I would suggest that all art expresses some content. Richmond would agree with this notion, for in an earlier paper he states that "content is necessary to art and to our pleasure in it in that artistic expression always expresses something, however abstract" [italics added].4 It is the expression of content in art, I would argue, that negates the possibility of "aesthetically autonomous art." This content need not be a blatant political statement but it may be, depending on the "things that matter" to the artist. Richmond himself suggests that the educational value of art "resides in the discipline's capacity to develop the skills, sensibilities, and language of form needed to help students aesthetically express ideas and feelings about the things that matter to them and to others in the community, and to understand and appreciate the art around them" [italics added].5 Marcuse emphasizes this notion of "things that matter" when he suggests that society remains present in the autonomous realm of art in several ways: first of all as the "stuff" for the aesthetic representation which, past, and present, is transformed in this representation. This is the historicity of the conceptual, linguistic, and imaginable material which the tradition transmits to the artists and with or against which they have to work.6
The "stuff" for aesthetic representation may be political, religious, cultural, etc. The question which is certain to arise at this point is "what then separates art from propaganda?" My answer to this question brings us back to the flip side of the dichotomy which I am attempting to dissolve. Recall the description by Richmond of "those who see art in education as an avenue for asserting certain socio-political concerns, for example, marxist or feminist, and various kinds of community action while denying lofty aesthetic ideals in favour of more popular and accessible art images."7 This description aptly illuminates the underlying dichotomy; on the one hand, there are "popular and accessible art images" and on the other, "lofty aesthetic ideals." However, these are not always, and need not be, exclusive. Part of the problem is a misunderstanding of the concept of aesthetic ideals. These need not be "lofty" and inaccessible to the general populace. In fact, if one understands the aesthetic in the manner defined by Abbs, that is, "a mode of apprehending through the senses the patterned import of human experience,"8 the distinction between the aesthetic and the accessible appears much less obvious. Although some people may require assistance in noticing the "patterned import of human experience," once some "tools" have been provided by pointing out features such as line, design, color, etc., I am suggesting that anyone who can "apprehend through the senses" can access the aesthetic.

The key to answering the question regarding the distinction between "popular and accessible art images" and propaganda also lies in an understanding of the aesthetic in the terms proposed by Abbs. Critical in the definition of the aesthetic is the notion of "the patterned import of human experience." Apprehending the "patterned import" involves apprehending the aesthetic features of the work of art. Not any sharing of the concerns of human experience can be apprehended aesthe-tically. There must be some pattern or form. Richmond points out the importance of form in aesthetic experience.

Under the aesthetic perspective, art is never considered simply as the communication of literal meaning, as the vehicle of social ideologies, or as text. What principally matters is an artwork's unique qualitative character, and this leads inevitably to an interest in form, in relationships, in the way something is structured and shaped.9
Thus, I would suggest that what distinguishes art from propaganda is this "interest in form, in relationships, in the way something is structured and shaped." I must emphasize that I am not propounding a sharp distinction between content and form. In fact, one cannot have one without the other. As Bailin points out "the manner of expression in art constitutes a part of what is expressed, and it is impossible to totally isolate either form or content."10 However, I am suggesting that greater or lesser attention might be paid to the form of an expression and what distinguishes propaganda from art is that with propaganda the message or content is considered to be more important than the form in which it is expressed.
Returning to the original division "between those who argue for the study of an apolitical, aesthetically autonomous art and those who see art in education as an avenue for asserting certain socio-political concerns," I hope that I have shown how the dichotomy underlying this division is false. There is no such thing as "aesthe-tically autonomous art" if art is seen as an expression of human experience. On the other hand, art cannot be viewed as simply "an avenue for asserting certain socio-political concerns" if it is at all concerned with form; that is, how the content is expressed. The dissolution of this dichotomy by illuminating the emphasis on both form and content in art is necessary for a justification of aesthetic activity based on its potential for fostering understanding.


FOCUS ON FORM
The preceding discussion was intended to demonstrate that to the degree that works of art express some content, to that degree they may be instrumentally, not simply intrinsically, valuable. However, a distinction had to be made between art and "propaganda" and that distinction concerned a focus on form. The suggestion that the form of art works is essential to attaining a rich understanding through participation in aesthetic activity is related to what Abbs refers to as the sensuous when he describes the aesthetic as "a particular form of sensuous understanding."11 I propose that the apprehension of the sensuous as it pertains to experiences of the senses is a necessary condition for having an aesthetic experience. However, such perceptive experiences, be they visual, oral, tactile, etc., are not sufficient for an aesthetic experience to occur. Also needed for an aesthetic experience is the involvement of feelings on the part of the participant. This involvement of feelings is part of the sensuous in the definition of aesthetic as sensuous understanding. It is interesting to note the linguistic connections between sensation and feeling. Abbs provides some illuminating illustrations. "'To keep in touch' is both to keep in contact and to remain close in feeling. To touch an object is to have a perceptual experience; to be touched by an event is to be emotionally moved by it. To have a tactile experience is to have a sensation in the finger-tips; to show tact is to exhibit an awareness of the feelings of others."12

I am suggesting that both the employment of the senses and the experiencing of feelings are necessary for an aesthetic experience to occur. The final condition necessary for an aesthetic experience involves understanding, namely, Abb's "sensuous understanding." I am suggesting that the apprehension through the senses (including feeling) makes it possible to attain sensuous understanding of human experience. I propose that apprehension of works of art lead to greater understand-ing of human experience. This "understanding through apprehension" is similar to Russell's "knowledge by acquaintance." Russell suggests that "we have acquaintance with anything of which we are directly aware."13 This notion of "direct awareness" is reminiscent of Abb's definition of the aesthetic as "a mode of apprehension through the senses."14 In fact, Russell suggests that sense-data supply the most obvious and striking example of knowledge by acquaintance. However, we are directly aware of more than just sense-data. According to Russell,

all knowledge of truths, as we shall show, demands acquaintance with things which are of an essentially different character from sense-data, the things which are sometimes called "abstract ideas," but which we shall call "universals"…that is to say, general ideas, such as whiteness, diversity, brotherhood, and so on.15
I suggest that such universals can become known by acquaintance with works of art. For example, an audience of a modern dance performance could come to understand the "universal" of diversity through being "acquainted" with the image of dancers moving in different and diverse ways. I must emphasize that, although the audience may be becoming acquainted with universals, this acquaintance is a result of an encounter with a particular work of art.
Suggesting that knowledge is attained through acquaintance with the arts ushers in the question of whether this is simply private knowledge, not amenable to public debate. Hirst seems to hold this view when he states that he is interested in "knowledge by description" not "knowledge by acquaintance."

I am not here interested in the character of such personal experiences. It is rather the sense in which there is a content communicated in artistic expressions, and the legitimacy of talking here about knowledge of a propositional or statement kind that I wish to pursue. What is involved in the acquisition of any such knowledge is a further question.16
However, it is this "further question" wherein, I am suggesting, lies the most promising justification for aesthetic activity. Hirst, in introducing his paper "Literature and the Fine Arts as a Unique Form of Knowledge" suggests that "this [art as a unique form of knowledge] may be the least interesting, indeed the least important or valuable, aspect of the arts."17 I would agree with Hirst, if by knowledge we focus only on a propositional kind. However, this narrow focus does not do justice to a discussion of the understanding which can be attained through acquaintance with the arts. Hirst attempts to discuss the possibility that works of art can be regarded as statements of a unique kind, but he sets aside questions about the nature of artistic experience. I would suggest that it is not possible to consider works of art as unique statements without questioning the nature of artistic experience. Hirst avoids discussing the very thing that makes artistic statements unique. "Artistic knowledge is autonomous because it involves elements over and above those derived from elsewhere, but no particular character for these elements is being suggested other than that they are essentially artistic."18 A discussion of the character of these "elements" is necessary if a justification based on understanding is to have any strength. I would suggest that the primary character of artistic elements is their sensuous nature -- involving both sensations and feelings.
Talk of sensations and feelings is sure to be criticized as involving only private knowledge. Underlying this criticism is a perceived dichotomy between private and public knowledge. However, I would suggest that this dichotomy is not as rigid as it is typically perceived to be. Hirst refers to artistic concepts and their role in a public language.

An area of experience arises with the development of the concepts it employs and they in their turn develop in the use of the appropriate public language. Just as our experience of the physical world is determined by and limited by the concepts we have learnt in public discourse about that world, so our artistic experience will be limited by the mastery we have of the language that is art. But what is more, it is an essential part of this thesis that works of art are not conceivable as expressions of essentially non-artistic experience. The type of experience concerned and the type of discourse necessarily go together as they share the same concepts.19
Ironically, Hirst has "hit the nail on the head" regarding the dissolution of the private/public knowledge dichotomy. Artistic experience and artistic discourse "share the same concepts." Although artistic discourse may be public, artistic experience involves private feelings and sensations. However, these private sensations and feelings are understood and expressed through concepts which are part of a public language. For example, if I am viewing Picasso's Guernica, I visually sense "harsh" lines, distorted figures, anguished features, etc. The concepts of "harsh" lines, etc., have been developed through a public language. The visual sensations described by these concepts, however, are inseparably tied to my feelings in viewing the painting. I feel distressed, disgusted with what people do to each other through war. My understanding about war is enriched through my experi-ence with the painting. This understanding is different than the understanding attained when I am simply told that war has ugly consequences. By feeling the anguish in the faces of the figures represented, I understand the ugliness of war in a richer sense than if I am simply told this. However, this understanding is not confined to the private sphere. I can point out the distorted features (using public concepts) and others may feel what I feel. However, there are some who may not feel the same disgust. I am suggesting that these artistic concepts are necessary but not always sufficient for the attainment of a rich understanding.

INTERPRETIVE REASONING
Having suggested the necessity of shared artistic concepts for the attainment of a rich understanding, it is important to clarify how these concepts lead to enriched understanding. These shared artistic concepts are based on a body of knowledge involving aesthetic features which is independent of particular people experiencing works of art. I would suggest that there is a sense of objectivity when people utilize this body of knowledge. That is, this body of knowledge makes it possible to provide reasons for making aesthetic judgments which are not purely subjective. However, the charge of subjectivism is typically leveled against the arts because the arts are contrasted with the sciences. This charge has lost some of its force in recent years since contemporary philosophers of science have called into question traditional views concerning scientific verification and objectivity.

A scientist cannot by himself explain something for himself alone. In order even to know "what" he is to explain, he must already have come to an understanding with others on the matter…Now, such an agreement on the intersubjective level can never be replaced by a procedure of objective science, precisely because it is a condition of the possibility of objective science.20
I concur that intersubjective agreement makes it possible to have "objective" science and I would argue that intersubjective agreement makes it possible to have "objective" artistic experience. However, this "objective" artistic experience requires a different form of verification than is involved within science.
More flexible forms of verification involve an exploration of different forms of reasoning. Besides the deductive and inductive reasoning which are characteristic of mathematics and science, reasoning can also be used to give an interpretation of a work. A prime example of interpretive reasoning occurs in literary criticism where textual evidence is given to support an interpretation of a text. Different interpretations can be argued for as a result of using the "shared concepts" of literary features, (for example, dramatic irony, figurative language, etc.). Thus, if people have acquired some knowledge of aesthetic features, they are able to convey their interpretations in such a way that others, although they may not agree, can at least understand the reasons for the interpretation. If the reasons are convincing, people may change their interpretation upon reflection of the various reasons presented. The question which may be raised at this point is how people's feelings play a role in this process of reasoning. For example, if someone does not interpret Picasso's Guernica as expressing anguish, this person will not "feel" the distress felt by the person who does interpret the painting in this way. However, if the person changes his/her interpretation, that is, if someone points out the "harsh" lines and distorted figures, the person may come to "feel" the anguish expressed in the painting. In this situation, the person's feeling changes with a change of interpretation. Thus, the feeling is connected to the understanding and I am suggesting that the understanding is richer because of this affective dimension.

It may be tempting to suggest that one interprets a work of art and as a result of this interpretation, has a certain feeling. However, it must be emphasized that this process of reasoning is not dichotomous from the feeling evoked. The two are integrally connected. A person may experience a work of art and "feel" something but he/she may not have consciously formulated an interpretation of the work. However, upon reflection, an interpretation may be formulated and this interpreta-tion would account for the feeling evoked. Although I am suggesting that someone might "feel" something through an encounter with a work of art and not have consciously worked out an interpretation, I do not think someone who has some knowledge of aesthetic features and is in a "normal" emotional state, could experience a good work of art without "feeling." By delimiting the work of art as good, I am suggesting that the work has the aesthetic features necessary for the audience to interpret the subtle nuances which result in the attainment of a richer understanding of the human experience.


CONCLUSION
I have argued that the strongest justification for the inclusion of the arts in the educational curriculum lies in their potential to foster a rich understanding of the human experience. It is a focus on the form of artistic expression which results in the potential for attaining this rich understanding. The possibility of attaining understanding presupposes that aesthetic activity has a certain degree of objectivity.

This "objectivity" is bestowed upon aesthetic activity as a result of "shared artistic concepts." These shared artistic concepts are based upon a body of knowledge involving aesthetic features which is independent of particular people experiencing works of art. I suggested that there is a sense of objectivity when people utilize this body of knowledge. That is, this body of knowledge makes it possible to provide reasons for making aesthetic judgments which are not purely subjective. In proposing that understanding can be attained through participation in the arts, I responded to the criticism that I am viewing participation in the arts as instrumentally as opposed to intrinsically valuable. However, I conclude that, although art may be instrinsically valuable, the strongest justification for the inclusion of the arts lies in the potential of aesthetic activity to foster a rich understanding of the human experience on the part of those participating in aesthetic activity.

For a response to this essay, see Arnstine.


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1. Stuart Richmond, "Three Assumptions that Influence Art Education: A Description and a Critique," Journal of Aesthetic Education 25, no. 2 (1991): 5.
2. Peter Abbs, "The Pattern of Art-Making," in The Symbolic Order: A Contemporary Reader on the Arts Debate, ed. Peter Abbs (London: Falmer Press, 1989), 209.

3. Stuart Richmond, "Art and Politics in John Berger's Novel A Painter of Our Time," Journal of Social Theory and Art Education 11 (June 1991): 26.

4. Stuart Richmond, "Once Again: Art Education, Politics, and the Aesthetic Perspective," Canadian Review of Art Education 16, no. 2 (1989): 121.

5. Richmond, "Art and Politics," 33.

6. Herbert Marcuse, The Aesthetic Dimension (Boston: Beacon Press, 1978), 18.

7. Richmond, "Art and Politics," 26.

8. Abbs, "Aesthetic Education: An Opening Manifesto," The Symbolic Order, 1.

9. Richmond, "Once Again," 1.

10. Sharon Bailin, Achieving Extraordinary Ends: An Essay on Creativity, (Dordrecht: Kluwer Academic Publishers, 1988), 36.

11. Abbs, "Aesthetic Education: An Opening Manifesto," 1.

12. Ibid., 3.

13. Bertrand Russell, The Problems of Philosophy (New York: Oxford University Press, 1959), 46.

14. Abbs, "Aesthetic Education: An Opening Manifesto," 1.

15. Russell, The Problems of Philosophy, 48, 52.

16. Paul Hirst, "Literature and the Fine Arts as a Unique Form of Knowledge," Knowledge and the Curriculum: A Collection of Philosophical Papers (London: Routledge & Kegan Paul, 1974), 154.

17. Ibid., 152.

18. Ibid., 162.

19. Ibid.

20. Karl-Otto Apel, "Perspectives for a General Hermeneutic Theory," The Hermeneutics Readers, ed. Kurt Mueller-Vollmer (New York: Continuum Publishing Company, 1985), 330-31.
想必大家都听说过art for art's sake,这种发端于西方的理论本意为“欣赏和创造艺术本身就是有意义的”。这一般会被理解为艺术是为了使人快乐。可是把这个观点置于教育环境中就比较危险,为什么这么说呢?如果学生觉得色情文学使他们快乐怎么办?因而有一种有关艺术教育的提法是“art for meaning's sake”,要教育学生从欣赏艺术中发现意义。那么,是什么样的意义?

艺术确实在表达一些东西。这些东西与政治,宗教,文化等相联,是整个人类社会在审美范畴中的表现。我们要做的,就是通过感觉来领会置于审美范畴的人类经验。在这个过程中培养出来的丰富理解力就是一种意义。

艺术把人类的经验用特别的形式表现出来。要领会人类经验一定要领会它的形式。形式和内容无法分开。一方面艺术表达人类经验——这一点说明艺术是无法独立存在的;另一方面看待艺术不仅仅只看内容,要看它如何表现内容。两方面兼顾的审美,才真正培养出丰富的理解力。

培养丰富理解力的关键在于理解形式。因为审美是一种特殊的感官理解。审美活动中,普通的感官享受确实很重要,但同时需要情感的加入。这种特别的感官理解最终指向对抽象的、本质的观念的理解。

但这种感官的理解也引出了一个问题:究竟我们领悟到的只是一种私人感受,还是经得起公开讨论的理解?这个关口也是为审美活动辩护的关键。它到底有没有客观性?

首先,大家都承认艺术活动原本就是感官的。问题在于当我们要表达一种感官感受时我们采用什么话语?艺术的内容是有关人类经验的,但人类经验本身难道不也是一种话语吗?它们是可以达到一致的。艺术活动与个人感官和情感相连,但表达这些所用的语言毕竟是大众语言的一部分。

表达艺术感受的语言,是由一系列公众承认的艺术概念组成的。当人们用这一语言阐述他为什么会有这种感受时,客观性就出现了。如果阐述是有说服力的,听众会改变自己的看法而从你的角度看;如果阐述仅仅传达自己的意见,人们不同意,但至少人们懂得了这种意见的由来。

另外,人们的艺术感受往往都夹杂着感情,带着感情去理解,带着感情去阐释。就这样,带着感情的阐释使我们在聆听时渐渐改变,这种改变不是别的,就是变得更加丰富的理解力。

这是读完上文之后的一点整理,或许对大家有点帮助。另外,原文的语言有许多值得观摩学习的地方。欢迎更多讨论。

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分类讨论:科技题材

结合前人的分类,我把科技方面的话题作了一个简介,目的是让大家在没事时不必去找题库就可以思考这些题目的思路。
因为是临时想法,也不知道有没有用,刚才才写出来,可能有的说得不是很明了,请大家修改。希望能够起到抛砖引玉的作用!

1.新产品是否能够代替传统工具的问题(7-DC vs 印刷品;155-读书vs现代方式;159-人脑vs机器)

2.科技对人和社会的影响:(30-旨在节省时间?;124-节省时间否?;66-是否引起惰性,影响思考能力?;88-对传统道德的影响;107,151-实时通讯使人作出匆忙判断?;114-能否改善humanity;129-总是积极的吗;135-对环境的双面影响;166-最大贡献是使生活更舒适;196-解决问题?带来问题?;219-大量的信息对人的影响;)

3.政府是否应该干预。(69)(可归入政治)

4.通过什么方法来衡量进步(115-逻辑和数字?)

5.作科研的目的(119-首先考虑改善公众生活?)

6.多媒体(150-电视对旅游业影响;233-多媒体与教学;237-复制品和原版,以及对公众的价值)

1.新产品是否能够代替传统工具的问题(7-DC vs 印刷品;155-读书vs现代方式;159-人脑vs机器)

7 "The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."

155"Contemporary society offers so many ways of learning that reading books is no longer very important."

159 "The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."

2.科技对人和社会的影响:(30-旨在节省时间?;124-节省时间否?;66-是否引起惰性,影响思考能力?;88-对传统道德的影响;107,151-实时通讯使人作出匆忙判断?;114-能否改善humanity;129-总是积极的吗;135-对环境的双面影响;166-最大贡献是使生活更舒适;196-解决问题?带来问题?;219-大量的信息对人的影响;)

30"The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."

124 "Instant foods, instant communication, faster transportation-all of these recent developments are designed to save time. Ironically, though, instead of making more leisure time available, these developments have contributed to a pace of human affairs that is more rushed and more frantic than ever before."

66"As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate."

88 "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."

107 "Instant communication systems encourage people to form hasty opinions and give quick replies rather than take the time to develop thoughtful, well-reasoned points of view."

151"High-speed electronic communications media, such as electronic mail and television, tend to prevent meaningful and thoughtful communication."

114"Humanity has made little real progress over the past century or so. Technological innovations have taken place, but the overall condition of humanity is no better. War, violence, and poverty are still with us. Technology cannot change the condition of humanity."

129"Technology is a necessary but not always a positive force in modern life."

135 "While most of the environmental problems we face result from the use of technology, society must depend upon technology to find solutions to these problems."

166"Over the past century, the most significant contribution of technology has been to make people's lives more comfortable."

196"Technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life."

219"Now that computer technology has made possible the rapid accessing of large amounts of factual information, people are less likely than ever to think deeply or originally. They feel unable to compete with -- much less contribute to -- the quantity of information that is now available
electronically."

3.政府是否应该干预。(69)(可归入政治)

69"Government should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development"

4.通过什么方法来衡量进步(115-逻辑和数字?)

115"It is through the use of logic and of precise, careful measurement that we become aware of our progress. Without such tools, we have no reference points to indicate how far we have advanced or retreated."

5.作科研的目的(119-首先考虑改善公众生活?)

119 "When research priorities are being set for science, education, or any other area, the most important question to consider is: How many people's lives will be improved if the results are successful?"

6.多媒体(150-电视对旅游业影响;233-多媒体与教学;237-复制品和原版,以及对公众的价值)

150 "Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete."

233 "Although innovations such as video, computers, and the Internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students, these technologies all too often distract from real learning."

237."Computers and video technology can make facsimiles of original works such as paintings and historical documents available to everyone. The great advantage of this new technology is that it will enable anyone—not just scholars—to conduct in-depth research without having access to the original works."

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[重要] 对论证中的Coherence与Sentence hopping的分析 [长篇] [color=red][b]推荐

本帖最后由 tequilawine 于 2010-2-17 14:12 编辑

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一个礼拜以来看了不少的文献,昨天晚上脑子里来了点灵感(ft,结果还兴奋得睡不着),今天就写写关于行文中coherence的问题。本来以为这个可以算作是跟木耳这头逻辑牛抢抢生意,后来一琢磨还是属于discourse的范畴……不扯了,开工。

嗯,要研究coherence的话,就先要给这个东西下下定义。参考一下文献:金山词霸的解释是“一致”(ft,不够信达雅),Merriam-Webster里面写的是:“1 : the quality or state of cohering: as  (a) : systematic or logical connection or consistency (b) : integration of diverse elements, relationships, or values; 2 : the property of being coherent。不过由于我这几天大脑晕的比较厉害,外加本来就不擅长这种“名词解释”题,也就懒得再上升到理论高度。

简单说,coherence的反面就是东拉西扯。一段话围绕着一定的主题来进行,前后承接合理合适,这在coherence上面就okay。如果说一段话,第一句是地球,第二句是蚂蚁,第三句变成Matrix III,天晓得这到底是要说什么。

在我们写作文的时候,情况就更明显。一般来说围绕一个主题进行分析和论述的时候,coherence是体现你的思路的衔接和流畅性的一个显著feature,同时也是让人家看明白看懂的一个重要因素。

举个例子,用中文写好了,干脆写一个搞笑的:
从现实情况出发考虑,feier和imong相比,feier在勾引mm的方便程度和效率上具有相对的优势。这一优势主要在这两点上得到体现:第一,众所周知男生的姿色在勾引MM这件事上起到重要的作用。而事实上,feier是一个大大大大~~~帅哥,这一点是feier勾引MM的必要条件;与此同时在某某范围进行的什么双中心随机变量统计抽样调查表明,85%的被调查MM认为就“帅”这项指标而言feier的指标和imong的指标有显著性差异:这帮mm认为feier明显帅于imong。由于统计分析证明这帮mm的意见是有代表性的和普遍性的,因此可以说feier明显帅于imong,从而feier在“帅”上占到了优势。第二,供需平衡关系在勾引MM的过程中起到了同样重要的因素,而这种平衡关系主要体现在一定范围环境下MM数目和GG数目的比例。根据国际专业权威调查公司做出来的数据:imong那边的MMGG比是二比一,feier那边MM比GG是二百比一,也就是说,feier那边的MMGG比明显高于imong那边的。这个数字的含义,就是两边相比而言,feier那边的MMGG供需平衡关系倾向于MM追GG,同时这一倾向的强度明显高于imong那边的情况。又根据统计上的证明,(1)这样一个倾向可以促进相对比例数字少的一方进行勾引活动,(2)倾向越sharp,相应的促进效果和推动力就越好,所以,feier在供需平衡关系上和imong相比也占有了明显优势。综上所述,以imong做参比,feier可以更加方便快捷的勾引MM。

前后罗罗嗦嗦说了一大堆,但是可以看出来的是,这段话从coherence来讲是基本上够格的。从前往后围绕着某个中心进行说明,而前后的transition也比较smooth。那么下面看看这个版本:
事实上imong是不能比feier更加方便快捷的勾引MM的。Imong在长得帅这方面比不过feier,而且他们学校GG数量不是太少。勾引MM这件事要综合考虑各方面的因素,既然feier更加帅,也就是说imong有劣势,再加上imong那边MM并没有感受到什么压力,谁勾引谁都说不一定呢。搞不好还是要imong去追MM了,但是feier也许就能轻轻松松的勾引MM。

单独从coherence的角度来讲,这个版本就有点问题。考虑3个问题:一段话能不能围绕着一个topic进行,topic转换的时候能不能smooth,前后句是不是能够衔接。这两段话都是我故意设计的,后面一个的问题主要就是:前后句之间的跳跃比较明显,在围绕单独的topic叙述和展开上做的差(刚刚说到“帅”立刻就着急嘛慌跑去说“人数”),而topic之间的转换的话则是翻来覆去不容易找到reasoning sequence

设计了这两个例子,我主要是要说明这几个问题:
1.通过设计这两个例子让大家从感性上对coherence有一个认识,至于具体的做到coherent的技巧我最后总结一下。
2.其实除了coherence以外这两段文字还涉及了很多写作feature的。有些问题也是大家原来经常问,比较关心的。
从写作字数说起(虽然写作字数不是什么大不了的因素):前两天刚刚看到过类似的argument,论点找得比较准,但是展开就是有问题,总是以为argument只有那么几句话,说完了就没得说,实际上是在substantiate论证这一步上除了问题。其中,最明显的就是看是否有越级画等号的现象。回到上面的例子,MMGG比和供需平衡是不是一个东西?如果写成“imong那边MMGG比比较小,所以供需平衡不是超级一边倒”,这中间是不是缺了一个“MMGG比是供需平衡的指标”?又例如,最后的结论都落在了“更加方便快捷的勾引MM”,如果在这里把结论落到了“更加方便快捷的勾引PPMM”,这就是个问题:这个PP哪里出来的?这个例子和第一个例子所指向的道理是同一个:不同概念之间的细微差别一定要辨析清楚,不能随便画等号,如果画等号了,至少就可能出现这两种问题。同样的,再例如,绝对量和相对量是不是搞混了?“因为feier是个大大大大~~~帅哥,所以feier比imong更加容易勾引MM”,请问这个“更”到底是哪里出来的?这一点上,虽然也可以说成是混淆了绝对量和相对量,但实际上,往往大家对绝对量和相对量的掌握和理解其实是清晰的,只不过少交待了一句“imong是个大青蛙”或者“imong没有correspondingly帅”,这句潜台词,的确是心里面想到了,但是就是没写出来。好,一篇文章里,各个地方一共缺上n次这样的潜台词,后果就很明显了,那就是clumsy and fragmented expression。

而且,这两个例子写得是argument的味道大于issue的味道,但是这个原则是通用的。而且,如果在issue里面越级画等号,写到一半把自己绕进去,那可就是糗到家了。(嘻嘻,这种事我干过n次,当场郁闷死)

也许有人会感觉这个东西有点像车轱辘话来回说,的确,不过要看这个“车轱辘”是怎么定义的。分析论证的过程,前后要联系起来,不可能是散着甚至是跳着。肯定是绕着一定的话题逐渐展开,有点类似一股旋风,绕着圈子往前走,当然这个可不是说兜圈子,“围绕一个话题”是很正经的论证,给一个“兜圈子”的帽子,多难听。:p  有区别的。

从coherence出发谈到了不少东西,最后不妨还是回到coherence上面。我目前想到的tips其实不多,也就是两三点:
1.说完了上句说下句,而不是说下下句,或者下下下句。(当然更不能说前句或者前前句)不要以为下句可以默认就直接说下下句,要是你默认了人家默认不过来,人家就只好犯嘀咕了。
2.注意transition的使用。不要吝啬手里的Therefore啦,yet啦,however啦,这些词很多的,用到正点儿上,把前后给穿插组织起来,安排好,well-organized。(当然有两件事情绝对禁止:第一,通篇全是because,都该以为你连since都不会用了,拜托花样多一点;第二,不管三七二十一前面是我睡觉后面就therefore我吃饭,这样写的话谁看谁跳楼的。)
3.前后句的意群要能联系起来。例如这种第一句是地球,第二句是蚂蚁,第三句变成Matrix III的肯定不行。例如一开始说帅,就从帅说下去。第一句说帅是重要因素,那下一句肯定还是和帅挂钩的,例如帅的程度,帅的评定,目前谁帅谁不帅,等等。一环扣一环,行文是有结构而紧凑的,而不是下跳棋。举个小例子,你的第一句说到了某个关键字,第二句有时候就会有this,that指代上去,一定程度上表明了you are still staying around the certain topic.当然,这一点不是绝对的,只是一个个例,但从一定程度上能说明问题。

好,今天从coherence出发,胡扯了一大堆最后又回到了coherence上面,可以算是功德圆满,阿弥陀佛,善哉善哉,希望通过这篇文章可以对大家行文中coherence以及其他相关feature的表现上有所帮助。

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详细分析ETS评分标准:6分同5分纵向对比

评分标准(重要性依次递减)

A 6 paper presents a cogent, well-articulated analysis of the complexities of the issue and conveys meaning skillfully.

A typical paper in this category:

presents an insightful position on the issue;
develops the position with compelling reasons and/or persuasive examples;
sustains a well-focused, well-organized analysis, connecting ideas logically;
expresses ideas fluently and precisely, using effective vocabulary and sentence variety;
demonstrates facility with the conventions(i.e., grammar, usage, and mechanics) of standard written English but may have minor errors.

1. complexity: 事物的两面性(同一事物有优点就有缺点,相比较的事物有各自的优缺点),从多角度分析事物( 分析不同领域中,不同情况下)。论点一边倒的文章论述得再好也只能得5分。

2.insightful position:在有全面深刻理解的基础上,观点最好新颖独到(对ets来说),但必须保证能自圆其说。5分文的要求是well-considered position, 因此只要求多论述几个理由,多考虑几个方面,表明你确实好好思考过,而不强求对论述题目有全面深刻的认识。看看ets范文的3篇5分文,你就能感觉的它们和6分文在思考深刻全面上的差距。所以,若对某方面论题不了解,还有一个月就要上考场的话,就不必花大时间饿补相关知识,只需看看别人的提纲,结合自己肚里的东西(足够),整理出自己的提纲,考场上有条理性的加以论证。但切记,既然在这个给分点上你已经失去了优势,就应该在其他给分点下功夫:论述结构,论证技巧以及语言运用(参看本文其他部分的分析)。

3.conveys meaning skillfully: 可用于论证的一切技巧(估计老美自己用起来也得费点心思)。比如文章的行文方向,起承转合不用明显的标志词(first, second, however, on the other hand, the second example illustrating my point),而是依靠论述的内在脉络(只可意会不可言传)自然而然的引到下一块内容。总之是看不到transitional phrases确能明显感觉到论述的方向及其改变(例ets范文2, 6分文的第二段首句的作用)。再比如巧妙地运用引言代替自己的reason(如ets范文1的As the head once said)。再有一个深受老美喜爱的论证技巧:vivid metaphor(如ets范文1的to inspect only one's toenails is to ignore the whole body),使枯燥的reason生动形象。总之,此点是用来筛选6分文的,故对5分文作者不要求。5分文的要求是conveys meaning clearly, 所以把话说清楚别词不达意,茶壶煮饺子倒不出来就行。

4. compelling reasons(reason 就已经够令人头疼的了,有加了个compelling):这是最重要的一个得分点。就是你的理由及其论证,目的是让读者认可你的理由,从而接受论点。5分文要求logically sound reasons, 结合ets范文可看出6分文要求理由非常有说服力,而5分文要求理由合常理,读者认为没错即可。

5.persuasive examples:用来支持reason的,使抽象的reason 更具体,更易被读者理解,从而产生共鸣,或使其更可信,更有说服力。可用的例子有自己的经历,引言。在范文里Ets重点表扬过两种举例方式:1). extended examples(见范文1, 6分文),叙述例子的过程就是reason的过程;2). examples are varied(见反问2,6分文),举各个领域的例子或例子涉及的范围很广。恰切的例子一定要论述充分(不然ets都替你可惜)。5分文要求well-chosen examples, 4分要求是relevant examples,因此我个人认为,要达到5分要求,例子一定得典型,多少有点说服力。个人经历是最好的例子,但不能是特例。

6. well-focused: 简单说就是不跑题。中心论点明确,全文不跑题;各段主题句明确,围绕主题句论述。使读者读完后对行文脉络,各段段意有清晰的印象。5分的要求是:is focused,内容上不如6分文联系那么紧密,但也应给读者留下同样的印象

7.well-organized:文章采用的论述结构,分几个部分论述,每部分有几段,各部分、各段间的关系是什么。切记,每个大的论述单元后要小结;全文结尾(最后一段)要对全文进行总结延伸:不能单纯的重复罗列各分论点,要根据全文的论证脉络,把论述过的分论点有机的结合起来(可用一些起承转合词),起到深化主题的作用。全文结尾的总结很重要,运用好了能鬼使神差的把跑题的文章变成考虑全面,论述充分的好文(例ets范文2,6分文)。相比较下,许多人提倡的文章开头的提纲挈领反倒只有坏处没有好处:一是很容易弄的文章头重脚轻;二是这样做束缚了作者的手脚,后面的每一步论证都要考虑是否回应了文首的概括,反而不能reason fluently。三是容易弄巧成拙,本来是想让阅卷人清晰地把握文章内容,可他很可能会觉得你的reason 不够skillfully, 而且在文章结尾的时候,得再一次总结全文(必不可少),若对英语的驾驭不是很好,很可能重复文首的那句话,这恰巧是阅卷人最善于揪的一个小辫子(可从ets范文评语中出现的频率看出)。再说,能够在开头把文章就概括得很好对我们来说也不容易。所以,还是把精彩的放到后头,前面简单的表明立场即可。

8.connecting ideas logically:using transitional phrases起承转合词,过渡句,或有此种作用的句子,总之起到help organize the ideas and move the argument forward(摘自ets范文评语)。5分作文要求connecting ideas appropriately, 个人认为就是ets可以容忍用transitional phrases把不logical的ideas强行联系到一起,起码表面上过得去。所以,当你觉得段与段间的内容衔接得不顺,就干脆加个明显的起承转合词。

8. fluently:跟着感觉走没错。

9. precisely: 不要罗嗦,表达简洁。但如果以上几点做得好,这缺点可以忽略不计。

10. effective vocabulary:基本上挺难,但不影响大局,为避免重复大胆的用你想用的词,阅卷人能理解。

11.  sentence variety:最好长短句结合,ets藐视总用短句的人:Since most of the sentences are short and choppy, the ideas they try to communicate are also choppy(摘自ets范文1,1分文评语)。

12. 还有语法错误等等,小毛病,先把上面的问题解决好在理它吧。

最后提醒大家注意几点:
1. 没有十分地把握,不要乱下定义,严重的损害议论文严谨的文风。
2. ets讨厌重复:不论是内容上还是形式上,总结也要做到避免重复有层次,先表面后深刻,先分段后整体.

以上是我的一点拙见,之所以整理出来一是想给大家点启发,二是想抛砖引玉得到高手的指点,所以还望大家多多发言,谈谈自己的看法。

imong modify:
不同意的地方:

论点一边倒的文章论述得再好也只能得5分。——这个不同意,其实应该看你如何定义一边倒。

insightful不等于观点必须新颖

vivid metaphor也许困难了点儿,不一定非得追求写得非常生动,尤其是实力有限的时候。但是:把论述的对象从逻辑成分具体化,实例化,绝对有好处

许多人提倡的文章开头的提纲挈领反倒只有坏处没有好处——这个不同意。我觉得应该再看看范文和其他人的文章,然后再来分析和讨论,现在的conclusion恐怕为时尚早。实际上这也是取决于你如何定义你在这个conclusion里面所使用的词汇:第一,你说得“坏处”也许仅仅是“潜在妨碍某一篇文章得到6分”而不是其他;第二,实际上我们现在所说的“提纲挈领”往往就是指你后面说到的“前面简单的表明立场”。

再一次提示:在你提出的论断中,这些keywords必须界定清楚,避免误解。

个人认为就是ets可以容忍用transitional phrases把不logical的ideas强行联系到一起,起码表面上过得去。所以,当你觉得段与段间的内容衔接得不顺,就干脆加个明显的起承转合词。——强烈反对乱来。悠着点儿

fluently:跟着感觉走没错。——同上,悠着点儿。

effective和precise的关键在于你的表达不能背叛或者偏离你的思考,这也是为什么我对某些网友使劲儿强调语言。语言方面永远为你的思考内容服务,sentence structure也一样。

语法错误和小毛病的话如果不影响到你的思维表达,问题还不是太大。虽然说思维第一性,我还是建议大家平时写作的时候顺带着就把这些地方给干掉,毕竟有word,很方便的。如果因为这种错误影响了关键地方的思考内容的表述,到时候都没地方去哭!

没有十分地把握,不要乱下定义,严重的损害议论文严谨的文风。——不知道为什么特地提出来。下定义是必要的,乱来当然也是不行的。

总结得不错,比较有启发意义(虽然我觉得有些地方需要商榷)。评个精,大家讨论讨论。

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"The purpose of many advertisements is to make consumers want to buy a product so that they will 'be like' the person in the ad. This practice is effective because it not only sells products but also helps people feel better about themselves."

The speaker asserts that the many ads which make consumers want to "be like" the person portrayed in the ad are effective not only in selling products but also in helping consumers feel better about themselves. This assertion actually consists of two claims: that this advertising technique is used effectively in selling many products, and that consumers who succumb to屈服于 this technique actually feel better about themselves as a result. While I agree with the first claim, I strongly disagree with the second one.三句话把前因后果和自己的立场交待的非常清楚,尤其是后两句的分析,很值得借鉴。

Turning first to the statement's threshold claim, do many ads actually use this technique to sell products in the first place? 从这里就可以看出作者对于原题的理解分析很清晰,在开头对于题干第二句进行了高度技术性的表达,而在下一段立刻开始对题干第一句,也就是整个题目的assumption进行分析。Consider ads like the wildly popular Budweiser commercial featuring talking frogs. There's nothing in that ad to emulate效法; its purpose is merely to call attention to itself. 先举一个反例 Notwithstanding尽管 this type of ad, in my observation the majority of ads provide some sort of model that most consumers in the target market would want to emulate, or "be like." 肯定了这一assumption. While some ads actually portray people who are the opposite of what the viewer would want to "be like," these ads invariably convey the explicit message that to avoid being like the person in the ad the consumer must buy the advertised product. 对上一句话进行了具体的深入。 As for就--某方面来说 whether the many, many ads portraying models are effective in selling products, I am not privy to并不知情 the sort of statistical information required to answer this question with complete certainty. However, my intuition is that this technique does help sell products; otherwise, advertisers would not use it so persistently. 肯定了题干关于effective的论断,虽然从结果推出原因狡猾的躲开了正面的分析,但在这里还算是可行的。

Turning next to the statement's ultimate claim that these ads are effective because they help people who buy the advertised products feel better about themselves, I find this claim to be specious. 提出主要的部分并要开始进行驳斥。注意用词从threshold变到了ultimate. Consumers lured by the hope of "being like" the person in an ad might experience some initial measure of satisfaction in the form of an ego boost. We have all experienced a certain optimism immediately after acquiring something we've wanted a good feeling that we're one step closer to becoming who we want to be. However, in my experience this sense of optimism is ephemeral短暂的, invariably giving way to disappointment that the purchase did not live up to its implicit promise. 提出ephemeral,三句话顺序把自己认为的过程进行了叙述,而彼此之间是相互说明而不是各自独立(第二句话主要支持了第一句,然后用However连接第三句),这样一来虽然整个的论证在后面,这一部分的组织仍然保持严密,不致显得主观臆断。

非常紧凑,立刻开始对上一段的最后一句话进行论述支持:One informative example of this false hope involves the dizzying array of diet aids, skin creams, and fitness machines available today. The people in ads for these products are youthful, fit, and attractive what we all want to "be like." And the ads are effective in selling these products; today's health-and-beauty market feeds a multi-billion dollar industry. But the end result for the consumer is an unhealthy preoccupation with physical appearance and youth, which often leads to low self-esteem, eating disorders, injuries from over-exercise, and so forth. And these problems are sure signs of consumers who feel worse, not better, about themselves as a result of having relied on the false hope that they will "be like" the model in the ad.这一段可以说就是叫做well-chosen example(if not insightful),从一开始就紧扣题干论断中的各个feature:be like,effective ads,end result,再用时间顺序组织好,论证方面就至少是5分的水平了。

Another informative example involves products that pander to迎合 our desire for socioeconomic status. Ads for luxury cars and upscale clothing typically portray people with lucrative careers living in exclusive neighborhoods. Yet, I would wager赌注 that no person whose life-style actually resembles these portrayals could honestly claim that purchasing certain consumer products contributed one iota to his or her socioeconomic success. The end result for the consumer is envy of others that can afford even more expensive possessions, and ultimately low self-esteem based on feelings of socioeconomic inadequacy.相比之下这一段的例子就不如上一段做的好,从pertinence,organization,以及expression of idea上都要略逊一筹。这一段恐怕在论证上就难以达到5分(如果单独拆开判分的话)

In sum, while ads portraying people we want to "be like" are undoubtedly effective in selling products, they are equally ineffective in helping consumers feel better about themselves. In fact, the result is a sense of false hope, leading ultimately to disappointment and a sense of failure and inadequacy--in other words, feeling worse about ourselves. 结尾重新表述了观点,从开始的oppose经过4个段落的分析最终落脚在具体的论点内容上。

这篇文章总体来说,在论证组织方面是比较值得我们学习的。4个段落的内容安排非常清楚,段内的衔接组织总体水平都很好。尤其是开头段和倒数第三段,是比较值得借鉴的。虽然就insightful analysis和well-focused organization两点来讲,全文的分析并不能够完全深入而个别部分的组织有过草率,难以拿到6分,但是我认为拿到5分基本上是没有问题的。就逻辑分析和相应表述方面,我想我们如果达到这篇文章的水平,那就很不错了。

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每日一评:体会6分benchmark:Express ideas CLEARLY and PRECISELY
Issue110
"When we concern ourselves with the study of history, we become storytellers. Because we can never know the past directly but must construct it by interpreting evidence, exploring history is more of a creative enterprise than it is an objective pursuit. All historians are storytellers."

Are all historians essentially storytellers, for the reasons that the speaker cites? In asserting that we can never know the past directly, the speaker implies that we truly "know" only what we experience first-hand. Granting this premise, I agree that it is the proper and necessary role of historians to "construct" history by interpreting evidence. Nevertheless, the speaker's characterization of this role as "storytelling" carries certain unfair implications, which should be addressed. 仍然是精彩的分析,三句话把来龙去脉交待得清清楚楚,提纲挈领,准确的下手把骨架抓出来。看了这几篇文章之后我想大家应该能够感受到,我们在critical thinking上面和目标水平的差异,从某种角度来说,一定程度上就体现在这里。

One reason why I agree with the speaker's fundamental claim lies in the distinction between the role of historian and the roles of archivist and journalist. By "archivist" I refer generally to any person whose task is to document and preserve evidence of past events. And by "journalist" I mean any person whose task is to record, by writing, film, or some other media, factual events as they occur--for the purpose of creating evidence of those events. It is not the proper function of either the journalist or the archivist to tell a story. Rather, it is their function to provide evidence to the historian, who then pieces together the evidence to construct history, as the speaker suggests. In other words, unless we grant to the historian a license to "construct" history by interpreting evidence, we relegate the historian to the role of mere archivist or journalist.概念辨析的清晰透彻在这里体现得淋漓尽致,全部都围绕着中心词evidence,段落组织非常严谨。最后一句话用unless和relegate两个词联合,重述了作者的观点:Historians construct history. 看看6分文章的benchmark:express ideas clearly and precisely——说的就是这个样子。

Another reason why I agree with the speaker's characterization of the historian's proper function is that our understanding of history is richer and fuller as a result. By granting the historian license to interpret evidence--to "construct" history--we allow for differing viewpoints among historians. Based on the same essential evidence, two historians might disagree about such things as the contributing causes of a certain event, the extent of influence or impact of one event on subsequent events, the reasons and motives for the words and actions of important persons in history, and so forth. The inexorable result of disagreement, debate, and divergent分歧 interpretations among historians is a fuller and more incisive understanding of history.这一段作者提出的是another reason,但是个人认为整个段落的内容很难被称为well-chosen,最多只能是pertinent的水平。这个as a result在reasoning/example的贴切/到位程度上并不是很好,这种“因为结果所以原因”的写法现在看来很容易出问题(不排除个别case,这一点有待进一步的调研和考证),好在内容上还没有开始跑题。这一段的论证和前后相比是有比较明显差距的。

However, we should be careful not to confuse this license to interpret history, which is needed for any historian to contribute meaningfully to our understanding of it, with artistic license.进一步深入的概念辨析 The latter should be reserved for dramatists, novelists, and poets. It is one thing to attempt to explain historical evidence; it is quite another to invent evidence for the sake of creating a more interesting story or to bolster one's own point of view.相当精辟的对比,再次体现了上文提及的benchmark。 A recently released biography of Ronald Reagan demonstrates that the line which historians should not cross is a fine one indeed. Reagan's biographer invented a fictional character who provided commentary as a witness to key episodes during Reagan's life. Many critics charge that the biographer overstepped his bounds as historian; the biographer claims, however, that the accounts in the biography were otherwise entirely factual, and that the fictional narrator was merely a literary device to aid the reader in understanding and appreciating the historical Reagan.这一个实例可以说是相当的well-chosen,但是很遗憾后面没有进一步追击论证,因而难以达到insightful的程度。尽管在行文中已经提出了the latter should be reserved for dramatists…但是TS和结尾都没有提及或返回继续强调这一实质上最重要的内容,这一点是很遗憾的。

In sum, I strongly agree that the historian's proper function is to assemble evidence into plausible constructs of history, and that an element of interpretation and even creativity is properly involved in doing so. And if the speaker wishes to call these constructs "storytelling," that's fine. This does not mean, however, that historians can or should abandon scholarship for the sake of为了-- an interesting story. 结尾简单重述论点,和开头一样的清晰。

这篇文章值得我们学习的最大特色就是:express ideas clearly and precisely. 首先是第一个body的historian,archivist,journalist的分析,再者就是在第三个body关于interpret关键词的定义。贯穿全篇可以看出作者对这种关键词的掌握相当到位,在深入掌握骨架的基础上行文纵横有序,效果就很显著了。遗憾的是老外280的一贯作风导致这篇文章恐怕难以拿到6分,但是这种清晰的辨析水平是不可能拿不到5分的。

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网络与读图时代

关于读图时代:
1、技术进步的口号掩盖了其带来的消极影响,认为技术在进步,社会在发展。
2、消灭一种二元对立的思想,批判一面并不等于捍卫另一面。
3、读图本身被纳入了消费文化的领域,当读图成为一种视觉的消费方式时,我们不愿意对图本身有所深究了,
在这种前提下,不仅消灭了图的深层意义,也理直气壮地消灭了阅读,消灭了以阅读为代表的思考。图片
向人们提供了一种刺激,图片和文字的结合就是耸人听闻的题目加大照片,没有任何进一步思考的空间和
余地。
4、文字信息能促进人的思考,而图象信息更多地让人认可这个现实世界,不利于人们对现实世界进行批判
和反思。

网络:
1、恢复了精英时代:少数人劳心,大部分老百姓劳力。网络领域一样,少数人维护更新,大部分人
坐享其成。
2、对传统的“真实”概念和标准提出了挑战,网络可以把任何事物复制得无限精确,人类对于模仿复制
精确度的追求到了无以复加的地步,模仿复制原来是一种手段,现在几乎成了目的了。(美国学者Michael
Taussig<<mimesis and alterity>>),人类为什么对复制有如此强大的欲望,消费文化,资本的黑手?
3、虚拟空间允许人们在点击的瞬间实现各种幻想,虚拟空间于是成为一种逃避主义者的天堂。
4、网络并不象有人认为的那样消解了话语霸权,相反正是英语话语霸权的体现和巩固。同时许多人在网络
上多是无意义的乱说,并不能真正形成推动社会变革的言论空间。同时这种对霸权的挑战意义也是很有限的。
5、会用的人才能有网络,有电脑的人才能有网络,受过良好教育的人才能有网络,那么,剩余的人呢?

关于进步:
1、技术的每一个发展,包括像原子能技术的开发,总被说成是进步的,结果就会极力抹
杀原子能可能出现的危险性,一直到广岛爆炸原子弹以后,才有少部分先觉者看到了毁灭
性的远景。一直到现在,人类仍然生活在原子弹的恐惧之中。可是这个恐惧在近些年又逐
步给进步主义冲淡了。值得注意的是,二十世纪后半叶以来,科学技术的巨大发展又带来
新的问题和危险,比如地球环境的破坏,但这也被进步主义所遮蔽。
2、问题的关键不是技术进步,关键是技术进步到底造福于谁?技术被谁所利用。你不能
用进步和落后这样的二元论把更严重的问题给抹杀了。

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网络与读图时代

http://news.xinhuanet.com/newsmedia/2003-03/10/content_769424.htm
赵德明:比尔•盖茨消灭不了图书

最近从国内一些报纸上看到比尔·盖茨先生在中国访问的一系列消息,感到信息产业的确在全球范围内取得了辉煌的成果。但是恰恰在这个时候从西班牙传来了这样的消息:比尔·盖茨不久前访问西班牙皇家学院时在新闻发布会上立下誓言:不消灭书本和纸张死不瞑目。此言一出,立刻在西班牙文化界引起轩然大波。西班牙的作家、院士们纷纷撰文,指出:用单一的高科技手段来代替多种文化的表现是不可能的。

  大作家质疑比尔·盖茨

  在比尔·盖茨看来,书籍已经是顽固的不合时代潮流的商品了,而电脑屏幕具备了可以成功代替纸张的全部功能和条件。他还说,网上的信息和网络文学代替报刊和书籍以后,不仅花费少、占地孝方便快捷,还有利于环保,如停止对森林的破坏、大气环境中的氧气增多等等。

  对此,西班牙秘鲁裔著名作家巴尔加斯·略萨发表了《文学与人生》一文,他反诘道:“我当时不在唱——假如我在场的话,我要对比尔·盖茨先生发出嘘声的,因为他公然厚颜无耻地道出让我和我的同行们,让大批在纸上拼字母的写匠们失业的企图。电脑屏幕真的能全面代替书籍吗?真的像盖茨说的那样神奇吗?我这样说并非我不完全了解新技术发展在信息领域的巨大革命意义,比如互联网,它每天都为我的工作提供不可估量的帮助。但是,因此就承认电脑屏幕可以代替文学阅读的纸张,那还有一段无法穿越的距离。”

  略萨指出:网上的阅读虽然也可以进入话语的梦境和惬意之中去,但无论如何也不可能有阅读书籍那样的亲密感、聚精会神和心心相印,这是他在长期文学创作中一直认同书本的结果。他说,他很高兴在互联网上漫游,寻找世界各地的信息,但不会去上网阅读西班牙大诗人贡戈拉的诗歌、乌拉圭大作家胡安·卡洛斯·奥内蒂的长篇小说或者墨西哥文豪奥克塔维奥·帕斯的散文,因为他知道:阅读效果绝对不一样。他坚信:如果书籍消失,文学会受到严重伤害,可能是致命的伤害。当然,文学的名字是不会消失的,但是可能会用来指定一种文本,根本不是我们现在理解的文学作品,比如对富翁旅游团中的名人,或者对索福克勒斯的《安提戈涅》和莎士比亚悲剧进行戏说和吵闹的电视节目。

  既上网,又看书

  西班牙媒体还公布了2002年西班牙作家协会的一项调查结果:西班牙有一半的公民一年都不读一本书;而与此同时,图书的销售量却在成倍地增长。一方面不读书,一方面书又卖得很好,这似乎是一个矛盾的数字。而调查结果显示:在西班牙5000万人当中,实际上存在着一个稳定的读书消费群体,而这个消费群体恰恰都是“双料”读者:既上网,又看书。

  读完上述消息两天后,有朋友从西班牙寄来一本伊莎贝拉·阿连德的新作———长篇小说《野兽之城》,精美的封面上赫然写着:第七版,从2002年9月至11月的3个月中已销售16万册。而查阅最新的西班牙各大报纸的文化版面,发现《野兽之城》并不是畅销书榜上销售量最多的书籍,有一本2001年问世的长篇小说《萨拉米纳的士兵们》,上榜高达70个星期,印刷量超过30万册。有一本名为《百次飞行》的诗集,高居诗歌类图书榜首49个星期。这些消息是否可以说明这样一个问题呢?———买书的人依然买书。买书人自有买书的道理。

  高科技手段不能解决文化差异

  笔者在拿到《野兽之城》以后,觉得这部作品非常生动有趣,它讲述祖孙二人在亚马孙地区寻找一种巨大的怪兽,其冒险经历令人开卷之后难以释手,因此我无论在床上、饭桌前,还是在医院候诊的座椅上,甚至课后散步在未名湖边总要翻阅几页,不断地追随着主人公的命运变化,脑海里不断地联想着巴西热带雨林的风光。这样的读书方式和感觉,电脑是不能代替的。全球人类生存方式的差异,不同国家和地区经济发展水平的差异,不同民族文化传统的差异,永远是绝对的。用同一个高科技手段解决如此之多的差异是不可能的。我想,就是到了世界大同的时候,也不可能人人说英语,个个吃西餐,每人都挎着笔记本电脑,那样也就失去了生活的乐趣。你愿意读竹简,我愿意读袖珍本,他愿意上网漫游,互相不可代替,而且各有各的乐趣。尊重乐趣的选择,尊重不同的生存方式,承认差异,不强求一律,是尊重人权的起码表现。已经进入了21世纪的人类难道在这个问题上还会倒退吗?

http://www.thinkwan.net/list.asp?id=392

变味的读图:读图时代还是伪图时代?

作者:吴锡平 -上传日期:2004-1-2



  近年来的文化出版界正越来越明显地呈现出“快餐化”、“浅阅读”的特质,“读图”是其中一个备受青睐的宠儿。随着读图概念的深入人心和出版市场的成熟,“读图”的疆域正不断地扩展,一些纯文学、纯学术和思想类的著作也开始加入到“读图”的行列中来了。随着此类“读图”式文学和学术著作种类、数量的增加,一个新的话题开始浮出水面:“读图”有没有界限?或者说,是否不论内容任何著作都可以“读图”?

  在早先的“读图”出版物中,大多遵循着这样一条规则,就是图片和文字互为补充,内容具有相关性,必须是有着内在联系的有机体。但随着“读图”概念被越来越多的读者接受,市场空间和效益开始显现,“读图”的概念开始泛化了。加入图片的书页似乎是“好看”了,但图已经不是在和文形成互动,而是对阅读形成了干扰,甚至对文字的意义造成了消解。
  配图图像与文字没有直接联系,为什么要生拉硬扯把它们放在一起?一言以蔽之,为了经济利益。将纯粹的、严谨的学术类思想类著作打扮得花枝招展,去吸引读者的眼球,去创造市场利润,就像让枯坐书斋潜心学问的学者穿上戏服去赶场子,说笑话逗人笑一样,滑稽得很,也荒唐得很。一个社会的人文精神,一个民族的文化素质是需要一批寂寞的,读起来不那么“轻松愉悦”的著作来支撑,来维系,来传承和发扬的,这些书永远是和那些所谓的“视觉的盛宴”隔绝的、拒绝外在包装和炒作的,其价值只能在青灯黄卷式的叩问和解读中得到体现。就像并不是所有的歌都可以用来摇滚那样,并不是所有的著作都能赢得市场,都能“愉悦”读者的。对每一个担当着社会道义和人文传统的出版社来说,这样的“读图”不是对文化的继承和发扬,而是游戏和抹杀。不久前,有好事的出版社为泰戈尔的诗做了插图本,看着充斥着卡通人物的《飞鸟集》真是令人哭笑不得,不像是对大师诗歌的诠释,倒像是后现代对传统经典的戏说,很有一些“无厘头”的味道。这种“文不够,图来凑”式的“读图”只会败坏读者的胃口和读图欲望,将“读图时代”变味为“伪图时代”,只会破坏出版市场的繁荣。
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“无书可读”引发一片争论

作者: -上传日期:2004-1-2

  《新周刊》166期,隆重推出了“中国图书业的另类观察——无书可读”,引发了业内人士和读书爱好者的一片争论。他们提出的理由包括:
  1.书籍越来越多,过于垃圾、过于商业、过于功利、过于弱智,无书可读。
  2.需求越来越多,要中产、要小资、要休闲、要励志,各取所需。
  3.选择越来越多,可读报、可上网、可听碟、可看电视,书不可不读。
  这些理由无疑是成立的,也点到了我们的创作界出版界“穴道”上,但简单的否定是不是太容易了点?
  在我们这个各种“供应”都极度丰富的年代里,有一个很有趣也很发人深思的现象:端起碗来吃肉,放下筷子骂娘。具体到图书业也是如此,和20年前比起来,我们今天可以阅读的东西实在是太多了,多到让你无所适丛、难以消化的程度。据不完全的统计数字显示,仅2002年一年全国就出版图书17.89万种,比上年增长12%。按新旧版图书各占50%比例,一年新版的图书近9万种,对读书人来说,这个时代实在是一个可以“饕餮”的时代,阅读的盛宴为他们准备了很齐全的“菜单”。有趣的是,就是在这个“琳琅满目”面前,我们确实觉得无从下“筷子”:这么多的“菜”,我到底选择哪个?哪些“菜”才是我需要的?哪些“菜”才是真正有营养又不会让我吃成“血压高、血脂高、血糖高”的“三高人士”呢?与阅读者的困惑相映的是大量“快餐食品”、“垃圾食品”借着繁荣的名义大行其道。
  书是一个宽泛的概念。《新周刊》专题里的那个“书”,大多说的是新出版的图书。牢骚所指——新书泛滥成灾,垃圾成堆,让人感觉“无书可读”。由此我们可以明白,这个“另类报告”的策划者们其实真正要说的不是什么“没书可读”,我也相信他们都没少读书,他们的矛头直指那些“垃圾书”、“跟风书”,以及大量的以功利为目的和市场诉求的“剪刀糨糊书”。今天的中国图书出版界,确实是“一本太仓促的书”。所谓市场化的大潮不仅使中国图书业成为最功利也是最无序的行业,其中所裹挟着太多的泥沙,也令我们的读者在变身成为享有上帝般待遇的消费者的同时,更沦为弱智的阿斗。
  但我们要说这只是图书市场“市场化”后的一个方面,大量优秀图书的出版,也确实给我们这个时代的读书人们,提供了更为丰富多彩的阅读选择,我们几乎可以与世界同步,看到很多优秀图书,比如诺贝尔文学奖的获奖作品,我们几乎可以在第一时间看到中文译本,这就不能不说是拜“市场化”所赐,“市场化”的大潮裹挟而来的,除了泥沙,也有很多的金子,关键在于我们建立起来的是什么样的“书香文化”,我们以什么样的价值观念进行选择和判断。
  所以我们无须为“古人”担忧,如今的图书消费以自费购书为主,读者有自己的判断。要让他们掏钱,至少要先给个理由。上当一次有可能,第二次也许还有可能,“犯傻”的读者终究会越来越少。而且我们也无须担心图书出版界浮躁不堪、急功近利。我们相信大浪淘沙智者胜,通过“胡搞乱搞”赚得第一桶金的出版社,最终也将意识到,出好书才是命脉所系。
  李敬泽接受《新周刊》采访时不就说了吗?2002年中国的长篇小说,“我估计1000部是有的,其中900部是垃圾的说法绝不冒险”。那么,不也还有100部不是“垃圾”的作品吗?
  弱水三千,只取一瓢饮。一年里头有幸邂逅几本可能成为传世佳作的新书,足够了。至于那些垃圾,只会使读者的消费变得更加理性。再退而求其次,直到退无可退。对读者来说,即便所有新的出版物都让人不可信任,也还有大量久经考验的经典可供选择。(编辑:湄)


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imong注:这篇文章就是一个典型的给论点不论证,issue要是写成这样绝对打pp. 观点可以看看,写作可别学它。

读图时代即漫画时代? 文化自虐狂细说读图忧虑   查看评论(0)

“读图”的忧虑
文/京盛
来源: 文学报  

    在日本和韩国访问,看到许多书店里在最显眼和方便的位置上,摆放的都是
大本的厚厚的漫画和卡通读物,街头的书报亭更是如此。甚至在一些卖服装百货
的商店里,也有大量漫画卡通书刊出售。日本的成人和青少年一样喜欢读漫画。
这些读物,价格低廉,读完随手就扔掉了。

    在中国,卡通漫画读物也有非常广泛的阅读群,过去主要是青少年,目前也
在渐渐向成人圈中蔓延。因此有人戏称当今是“读图时代”。

    漫画读物,直观、形象、轻松、有趣,这是它的特点和优势。再加上现代科
技手段制作的大量动画卡通片推波助澜,于是,“读图”几乎成了一股风行世界
的文化时尚。

    但读图的结果,却使不少青少年对文字阅读失去了兴趣和耐心。这种状况令
人堪忧。

    第一、图画再生动,它也只能表达人的浅层次的一些思想和感情。这类读物
充其量只能算是一种文化快餐,吃多了不但影响胃口,而且会造成人的文化营养
不均衡。这对于正处在获取知识阶段的青少年来说,尤其不宜。

    第二、满足于图画的直观性表达,会使人降低抽象思维的能力。而抽象思维
能力的高低,是一个人文化能力的重要体现。

    第三、如果对文字阅读失去兴趣、耐心,必定会造成一个人的思维懒惰,造
成一个人口头表达和书面表达能力的衰退。而这一切都会使人的创造性能力受到
干扰,甚至连日常的交际也会受到影响。

    第四、迄今为止,人类所创造的一切思想文化成果,大都是以文字为载体。
失去了对文字阅读的兴趣和能力,甚至会影响到一个民族在文化上的传承和发
展。

    汉字和汉语是世界上最古老,最丰富的语言文字之一。除了其它文字所共同
具有的实用、表意的功能之外,它还有优美的形象感,鲜明的节奏感和韵律感。
在这些特色的基础上,中国文字还衍生出一系列艺术形式,如书法、吟诵、诗词
曲赋等等。这是中国文字所独有的特点。汉字的丰富多彩,使它在文学和审美功
能上,都远远超过其他民族的语言文字。这些特点深深地融入了中华民族的文化
形态和文化品格之中。中国人的思维方式,人格属性,精神智慧,情感气质,都
是我们的语言文字所熏陶和培养出来的。如果失去了对语言的敏感,失去了把握
语言的能力,实际上就失去了民族母体的滋养,这不仅是能力的丧失,更是精神
的丧失。

    回到文字阅读的魅力之中,培养起健全的文化心态,这也是青少年教育的一
个重要内容。

互联网浮华背后的危机综述:互联网浮华背后的技术危机

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  冯明华

  技术一般来讲是属于比较高深的玩意,尤其是对于我们这些平时并不玩技术的人来说;危机则是一个有点耸人听闻的词。而一旦把技术和危机结合在一起的话,这个问题似乎非专家来谈不可。不过,互联网有点不一样。任何技术,倘若不能被使用,那就毫无存在的意义,所以,从某种程度上来说,说某项技术的危机,有时还不如让应用者来说比较好。对
于互联网,我就是一个应用者,而且是一个相对来说比较资深的应用者,所以虽然我对技术不内行,但危机却是能感觉到的。

  互联网从上个世纪60年代诞生到现在,其爆炸式的发展速度,远远超过了人类历史上任何一次技术革命。2003年,互联网简直可以用“繁荣发展”来形容了。但是,我们现在看到的能够引发革命意义的技术,是少之又少——解释这一点的理由有两个:一是互联网已经发展到高级阶段了,实在不需要什么新的技术革命;二是这个行业确实存在着某种力量,将技术革命扼杀了。显然,第一个理由是不成立的——看看今天互联网的应用程度就知道,互联网还有极其巨大的发展空间。那么,理由只能是第二个了。

  浏览危机

  浏览器的发明,绝对是互联网历史上具有划时代意义的发明。我想,当初浏览器的发明者,无论如何都想像不到,这玩意引发了互联网一场怎样的革命。在美国,第一个浏览器发明后仅仅7年时间里,年收入不足5000美元的家庭中,有超过15%的家庭已经连上了Internet,95%的公立学校也都可以上网(来源:《教育和数字鸿沟》一文作者:Alexander Tabarrok)。可以说,互联网的真正普及,是在浏览器发明之后;也只有在浏览器中,人们发明了“超链接”这种互联网独一无二的特性。

  但是浏览器的发明,直接导致了一个严重的后果,那就是浏览危机——也可以称之为信息爆炸危机。浏览器最主要的功能,是能简单方便地显示海量的信息。尽管互联网本身还有着巨大的发展空间,但是互联网信息爆炸已经提前到来——众所周知,互联网改变了人们传统的传播观念,它把图像、声音、文字以及其他传统意义上的各种传媒融合在了一起。正是基于互联网信息的海量且杂乱,聪明人发明了搜索引擎,以帮助人们从海量的互联网信息中,找到需要的信息。但是,现在搜索引擎同样也面临着信息爆炸问题的困扰——往往网民搜索出来的结果,仍然是大量却无用的信息。当人们总是面对海量的信息时,从心理上讲一定会感到无所适从。中国的古话“过犹不及”,在互联网身上得到了很好的体现。

  讲到信息爆炸,重点要讲一讲Google。Google这个被网民奉为必备工具的搜索引擎,目前已经在互联网信息爆炸面前显现疲态。甚至它的搜索引擎技术,已经遭到了挑战——目前,一家名为Vivisimo的公司,向外界透露了其“推归类搜索技术”,用该搜索引擎技术搜索出来的结果,和Google完全不一样。不管Google会不会遭遇真正的挑战,但毫无疑问,搜索引擎在互联网信息爆炸面前,确实有点难以招架。

  而我们相信,要解决互联网浏览危机,依靠的是技术。

  安全危机

  哪里都有安全问题,哪怕是在宽阔的马路上散步。互联网的安全危机是显而易见的——不怀好意的骇客入侵、个人隐私泄露、病毒攻击、网络瘫痪等,这些危险时刻存在。互联网的安全危机到底严重到什么程度,大家只需回忆一下发生在2003年年初的全球网络大瘫痪就知道了——那次互联网瘫痪给人的印象是多么深刻啊!一个小小的“蠕虫病毒”,就让全球的电脑几乎都联不上互联网,让人大跌眼镜。那场互联网瘫痪事故,让人们切切实实感到了互联网其实真的很脆弱。而其他大大小小的互联网安全事件,大概是数不胜数了。从某种意义上讲,当年中国“红客”与美国“黑客”之间的较量,与其说是网络技术的较量,还不如说是拿互联网安全问题的一次实战演练。

  互联网安全危机另一个让人担心的地方是:这会不会成为将来国家与国家之间的危机?互联网是没有国界的,当中国还在为争取加入WTO努力时,在互联上中国早已融入了“国际一体化”当中。可以相信,互联网普及程度越高,一个国家的人民对互联网的依赖越大,那么所潜在的安全问题就越值得担心。而一个可以预见的趋势是:互联网势必将在全世界普及,国家对互联网的依赖程度也将会越来越高。这样一来,将来国家与国家之间一旦发生争端,互联网很有可能是最先燃烧战火的地方。那个时候,互联网安全问题已经不再是互联网本身的安全问题,而是整个国家的安全问题了。

  理论上讲,任何一台连在互联网上的电脑,都有被入侵的可能——要么不想,只要想了你就会觉得可怕;除非你不要去想什么互联网安全问题,否则你只会觉得互联网真的是在“如履薄冰”般行走。也许哪天互联网会在突然之间彻底崩溃——所有服务器上的数据全都消失——希望这不是危言耸听。

  互联网为什么会有那样严重的安全问题呢?这恐怕是个过于技术性的问题。我们可以把“原罪”归于漏洞百出的微软操作系统。不过微软的操作系统(包括它的网络操作系统)虽然有诸多漏洞,但就算全世界的电脑都用了UNIX或LINUX,互联网的安全问题就能解决了吗?

  面对互联网安全问题,我们虽然寄希望于技术,但显然互联网安全问题已经不仅仅是技术问题了。随着互联网应用的进一步推广,政府必须重视互联网安全问题,立法机构必须要为互联网安全立法,否则光靠技术是解决不了问题的。

  软件危机

  上网需要用到的基本软件不多,其中操作系统是根本的,其他就是一些应用软件。讲到软件,就不能不提微软。微软的软件已经将我们的电脑占领了。尴尬的是,尽管你可以举出微软软件1000个不好,但是你还是要用微软——你不得不接受微软的软件霸权。国内的IT评论家当中,方兴东是最坚定的、始终如一的微软批评者,但是很遗憾,我们至今还没有看到方兴东的批评到底起了多大作用。但是毫无疑问,微软对操作系统的垄断,会带来软件危机——天才的发明浏览器,是网景公司开发的,但是网景公司的导航者浏览器(Netscape),几乎已经完全被微软的IE浏览器击败。微软很聪明,知道什么是最伟大的发明,所以它要全力以赴要击败网景。IE的成功,是建立在Windows操作系统处于垄断地位的基础之上,尽管我们也不能否认IE也是个不错的浏览器。但是微软的垄断以及它目前强大的实力,势必会将一些天才发明,扼杀在摇篮之中。

  操作系统如此,单机模式下的应用软件如此,基于互联网的应用软件呢?——微软大概也不会放过。

  创新思维危机

  其实创新思维危机算是软件危机的升级。回顾互联网发展的这几十年,人们可以深刻认识到创新是多么重要。互联网本身就是人类创新的产物。假如没有那些天才的创新想法,人类哪来的互联网?假如没有创新精神,又哪来浏览器这个天才发明?没有浏览器,又哪能有如今互联网的繁荣景象?

  前面已经说过了,互联网还有极其巨大的发展空间。这个空间还需要创新思维——有谁能否定,在不久的将来,会出现一个比浏览器更伟大的发明呢?但为什么说如今的互联网面临创新思维危机呢?这还得提到微软的垄断力量。理论上讲,既得利益者从来都是阻止创新的,除非这个创新对其有益。当某种垄断力量的产品统治互联网的时候,它是不希望出现能够取代它的创新发明。从另一个层面上讲,人的思维具有“惰性”,当人们长时间习惯使用某些东西了,创新的思维就会被慢慢扼杀。要命的是,我们都相信:人类没有创新就难以取得更大的发展,对互联网来说也是如此。所以说,垄断的最大危害,在于有意无意地抹杀了人们的创新思维。没有创新,就没有新技术;而纵观人类历史上的任何一次产业革命,无不都是由新技术直接推动的。互联网如果还有下一场革命的话,只能依靠创新。

  邮件危机

  为什么把电子邮件危机单独拉出来说呢?因为电子邮件不仅是互联网最重要的应用之一,而且是互联网最古老的应用之一。电子邮件毫无疑问开创了人类前所未有的快捷联络的方式,但是现在,这项“古老”的互联网应用,目前正被人们搞得疲惫不堪。

  说到电子邮件危机,其实既是技术危机,也是信任危机。技术危机体现在目前还没有什么技术,能够很好地解决垃圾邮件问题。尽管业界甚至个别国家的司法剖门都在反对垃圾邮件,要为垃圾邮件立法,但总是雷声大雨点小,难以取得实质成效。如果有什么技术可以很好地解决垃圾邮件问题的话,我想这项技术早就应该公布了,所以我的判断是还没有这样的技术——就算有,是不是就能逃得过“道高一尺魔高一丈”这个规律?垃圾邮件的危害可以说得到了“公认”,譬如影响网民心情、造成网络带宽资源的浪费及制造大量垃圾信息,而这些危害导致的后果是带来大量的经济损失——数据就不引用了,免得你说我滥用数据。

  带宽危机

  和安全危机不一样,在提出这个危机之前,我就问自己这是不是危言耸听了——而安全危机是在我写着写着才问自己是不是危言耸听。打个老比方:互联网是一条高速公路,而在这条高速公路上能开多少车、开车的速度能有多快,主要取决于路面有多宽。用一个“专业”一点的词来说,这叫做互联网的“带宽”。

  可以想像一下,如果人们迫不急待地挤上一条狭窄的道路,结果很有可能就是将路面挤垮——早期互联网像极了这一点。还好,这几年互联网的“带宽”越来越宽,互联网也终究没有被人们挤垮掉,这完全依赖了技术,比如说宽带技术。其实我不太明白宽带到底是一种怎样的技术,但对我来说,只需要用了宽带,能让我感觉到上网速度快就够了。这几年的宽带发展速度也确实还比较争气,多少撑住了互联网作为信息高速公路这个美名的面子。

  不过,还是有必要担心一下未来的互联网到底会有多宽。担心这个,就好比担心大庆油田的石油能再用50年,但50年后呢?要知道上网的人数肯定还会源源不断地增加,这是可以明确预见的;而宽带到底会怎样,却不是明确的。中国的网民数量短短几年就窜升到了7800万,但是中国的人口是13亿!倘若13亿人口都上网,中国的互联网将面临怎样的压力,你能想像出来吗?当然,这只是一个极端化的比方,但是宽带技术是否能够完全跟得上网民数量的增长,担心一下总归是无妨的。

  其他技术危机

  其他技术危机就是除了上面所讲的危机之外的危机,或者说我还没有想到的危机。我知道“札人忧天”不是一个好习惯,但是古人也教导我们了:生于忧患,死于安乐。我想关键是看你用怎样的心态去想问题。

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参考资料:“永动机”

firt/sencond kind of perpetual motion machine
第一/二类永动机
不消耗能量而能永远对外做功的机器,它违反了热力学第一定律,故称为“第一类永动机”。在没有温度差的情况下,从自然界中的海水或空气中不断吸取热量而使之连续地转变为机械能的机器,它违反了热力学第二定律,故称为“第二类永动机”。
conservation of energy 能量守恒 energy conservation 能量守恒 conservation of energy law 能量守恒定律 law of conservation of energy 能量守恒定律 law of energy conservation 能量守恒定律 energy conservation equation 能量守恒方程 principle of conservation of energy 能量守恒原理

The term perpetual motion, taken literally, refers to movement that goes on forever. However, the term more commonly refers to any device or system that perpetually (indefinitely) produces more energy than it consumes, resulting in a net output of energy for indefinite time. The law of conservation of energy, which states that energy cannot be created or destroyed, implies that such a perpetual motion machine cannot exist.
The most commonly contemplated type of perpetual motion machine is a mechanical system which (supposedly) sustains motion indefinitely, despite losing energy to friction and air resistance. A second type of impossible "perpetual motion machine" is one which does not violate conservation of energy, but produces work by spontaneously extracting heat from its surroundings, thereby cooling them down, and converting the heat energy into mechanical work. Such machines are forbidden by the second law of thermodynamics.
A perpetual motion machine of the first kind

A perpetual motion machine of the second kind

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[分享] Science & Truth!

Hi guys,
Because I've been too rushing to edit this passage transferrer from other unknown sources, so please excuse me for this rugged style.  

Introduction:
Descartes: 笛卡儿,法国哲学家及数学家。


1)
In contrast to the medieval world view, the scientific universe is impersonal, governed by natural laws and understandable in physical and mathematical terms. Many people trust the information science offers rather than religion because science seems to be more reliable. Science has replaced religion as the dominant intellectual authority because science offers the chance to understand the universe, whereas religion just assumes things. Many believe, as was said by Richard Dawkins, the truth means scientific truth? Along with the logical Positivists, they claimed the only meaningful statements were scientific. It is unfortunate that such a view is seen by so many as it takes more than one view to understand the universe fully. Non-religious philosopher, Bertrand Russell, once quoted another example of the narrow-minded view non-Christians seem to share, he once said, that science cannot discover, mankind cannot know? Although science explains much about life and the universe, some people choose to believe religion.

One major reason for the contrast in views is the difference of interpretations of the Bible. Extreme Christians take the story of Genesis purely literally and believe God created the world in six days, leaving no room for the arguments of science. Others still believe in the story of Genesis but that instead of six days, six periods of time. Others, however, completely reject Christianity.


2)
In the Meditations, Descartes笛卡尔 embarks upon what Bernard Williams has called the project of 'Pure Enquiry' to discover certain, indubitable foundations for knowledge. By subjecting everything to doubt Descartes hoped to discover whatever was immune to it. In order to best understand how and why Descartes builds his epistemological system up from his foundations in the way that he does, it is helpful to gain an understanding of the intellectual background of the 17th century that provided the motivation for his work.

We can discern分辨 three distinct influences on Descartes, three conflicting world-views that fought for prominence in his day. The first was what remained of the mediaeval scholastic philosophy, largely based on Aristotelian science and Christian theology. Descartes had been taught according to this outlook during his time at the Jesuit college La Flech, and it had an important influence on his work, as we shall see later. The second was the skepticism that had made a sudden impact on the intellectual world, mainly as a reaction to the scholastic outlook. This skepticism was strongly influenced by the work of the Pyrrhonians as handed down from antiquity by Sextus Empiricus, which claimed that, as there is never a reason to believe p that is better than a reason not to believe p, we should forget about trying to discover the nature of reality and live by appearance alone. This attitude was best exemplified in the work of Michel de Montaigne, who mockingly dismissed the attempts of theologians and scientists to understand the nature of God and the universe respectively. Descartes felt the force of skeptical arguments and, while not being skeptically disposed himself, came to believe that skepticism towards knowledge was the best way to discover what is certain: by applying skeptical doubt to all our beliefs, we can discover which of them are indubitable, and thus form an adequate foundation for knowledge. The third world-view resulted largely from the work of the new scientists; Galileo伽利略, Copernicus, Bacon et al. Science had finally begun to assert itself and shake off摆脱 its dated Aristotelian prejudices. Coherent theories about the world and its place in the universe were being constructed and many of those who were aware of this work became very optimistic about the influence it could have. Descartes was a child of the scientific revolution, but felt that until skeptical concerns were dealt with, science would always have to contend with Montaigne and his cronies, standing on the sidelines and laughing at science's pretenses to knowledge. Descartes' project, then, was to use the tools of the skeptic to disprove the skeptical thesis by discovering certain knowledge that could subsequently be used as the foundation of a new science, in which knowledge about the external world was as certain as knowledge about mathematics. It was also to hammer the last nail into the coffin of scholasticism, but also, arguably, to show that God still had a vital re to play in the discovery of knowledge.

Meditation One describes Descartes' method of doubt. By its conclusion, Descartes has seemingly subjected all of his beliefs to the strongest and most hyperbolic of doubts. He invokes the nightmarish notion of an all-powerful, malign demon who could be deceiving him in the realm of sensory experience, in his very understanding of matter and even in the simplest access of mathematical or logical truths. The doubts may be obscure, but this is the strength of the method - the weakness of criteria for what makes a doubt reasonable means that almost anything can count as a doubt, and therefore whatever withstands doubt must be something epistemologically.


3)"We are, then, faced with a quite simple alternative: Either we deny that there is here anything that can be called truth - a choice that would make us deny what we experience most profoundly as our own being; or we must look beyond the realm of our "natural" experience for a validation of our certainty."
A famous philosopher, Rene Descartes, once stated, "I am, [therefore] I exist." This statement holds the only truth found for certain in our "natural" experience that, as conscious beings, we exist. Whether we are our own creators, a creation, or the object of evolution, just as long as we believe that we think, we are proved to exist. Thinking about our thoughts is an automatic validation of our self-consciousness. Descartes claims, "But certainly I should exist, if I were to persuade my self of something." And so, I should conclude that our existence is a truth, and may be the only truth, that we should find its certainty.

From the "natural" experiences of our being, we hold beliefs that we find are our personal truths. From these experiences, we have learned to understand life with reason and logic; we have established our idea of reality; and we believe that true perceptions are what we sense and see. But it is our sense of reason and logic, our idea of reality, and our perceptions, that may likely to be very wrong. Subjectiveness, or personal belief, is almost always, liable for self-contradiction. Besides the established truth that we exist, there are no other truths that are certain, for the fact that subjective truth may be easily refuted. Every person possesses his or her own truth that may be contradicting to another person’s belief. A truth, or one that is true for all, cannot by achieved because of the constant motion of circumstances of who said it, to whom, when, where, why, and how it was said.

What one person may believe a dog is a man’s best friend, another may believe that a dog is a man’s worse enemy. What one may believe is a pencil, to another is not a pencil, but a hair pin. Where one may believe that a bottle is an instrument, one may believe is a toy, where another may believe is a beverage container. Where one will understand the moving vehicle "car," one might understand "car" as a tree. Our perception of what is true depends on our own experiences, and how something becomes true for us. Many circumstances are necessary to derive at one’s truth, whether it is an idea, object, or language. All perception, besides the perception of existence, is uncertain of being true for
all individuals. Every thought, besides the idea that we think, has the possibility that it may be proven wrong. The author of the article, Knowledge Regained, Norman Malcolm, states that, "any empirical proposition whatever could be refuted by future experience - that is, it could turn out to be false." An example could be the early idea of the earth being flat and not the
current perceivably round.”

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分类讨论:艺术题材 (by feier521)

前言:
angei 的分类讨论,没有进行下去啊!呵呵,偶替angei 分担一个部分,(做的不如老师好,大家凑合看吧!)

看见大家讨论时说没有艺术细胞:),偶就把艺术分出来,为了大家砍掉艺术类,献点微薄之力,要不然偶在gter 上500多贴,岂不是白贴了?岂不全是水贴?呵呵,可能这个也算一个!

有的思路看了前人的讨论总结的,不过还是属于原创啦!由于本身不是学艺术的,肯定有很多不足的地方,希望大家继续讨论,最终吃掉艺术类!



1、艺术和政府及艺术该不该资助:
82"Government should never censor the artistic works or historical displays that a museum wishes to exhibit."

85"Government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts."

101"Governments should provide funding for artists so that the arts can flourish and be available to all people."

190 "As long as people in a society are hungry or out of work or lack the basic skills needed to survive, the use of public resources to support the arts is inappropriate -- and, perhaps, even cruel -- when one considers all the potential uses of such money."

这一类题主要是说政府该不该资助或者干预艺术。同意:就说1政府的资助帮助艺术家解决经济问题,使他们全心全意投身艺术事业;2 为艺术家提供资金和空间,展示他们的作品,使之出名。如作品展示会
不同意:
1 政府资助影响了艺术创作的自由(和85说的类似)。难道会白资助你?肯定要你为他服务。要你按照政府的要求创作,艺术家的创作自由,想象力和灵感被奴役了,哪里还有经典的艺术作品出现?(说到这里来说说82该不该限制展览的自由呢?尽管博物馆有展示的自由,但是展示的materials 不能被个人所利用:展示个人作品,追求名利啦;不能harm to the society:反动的啦,暴力色情的啦);
2 政府资助?政府怎么评价艺术?该资助谁?谁来定准则(这里有点和critics 评价艺术相联系了)?政府官员肯定是不称职的,a 没有专业的criticism 和assess 知识;b 容易受外界影响(自身利益,钱,权啦等等)
3 政府资助艺术干吗?那么多的pressing problems need to be addressed。(190题粉墨登场了)a 国家的资金是有限的,资助艺术,别的就短缺了,温饱没解决,谁去欣赏艺术?b 那么多的政府事务要处理,艺术可以wait awhile。

2、艺术和评论家的:
96 "Although, critics who write about the arts tend to deny the existence of any objective standards for evaluating works of art, they have a responsibility to establish standards by which works of art can be judged."

143"Artists should pay little attention to their critics. *Criticism tends to undermine and constrain the artist's creativity."
*those who evaluate works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.

144 "It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value." *a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.

先说艺术评论家的作用吧:1 有专业知识可以帮助人们欣赏艺术作品 2 为评价艺术作品的价值提供参考 3 可以给artists 提供feedback,产生更好的works咯。等等
那么critics 要不要为艺术提供一个标准呢(96)?1 艺术是强调free mind,统一标准岂不是扼杀了freedom。2 那么多的艺术派别,不可能建立统一的标准 3 不同时代,艺术的鉴赏和评价标准不一样,如何统一标准?

3、艺术的真正价值:
218 "In order for any work of art -- whether film, literature, sculpture, or a song -- to have merit, it must be understandable to most people."

131 "The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."

艺术作品的真正价值是什么?是被大多数人所接受?显然不是(个人观点)!而是在于它反映的艺术家的高超的技艺,超凡的想象力和创造力;在于它的审美价值;在于它反映的社会丰富的文化底蕴,和社会的ideas和impulses(131题不大好写。),所以才可以它们的价值持久,而被大多数人所理解呢?只不过是为了popular,象当今的流行文学,歌曲,过个10年8年,谁还会记得他们;或是为了make profits,受欢迎,才可以是lucrative;但是profits≠value。

下面3个不分类别:
243."The true value of a civilization is reflected in its artistic creations rather than in its scientific accomplishments."

文明?可以先定义civilization!
1 分开说:物质的就说科技成就了;精神上的就说艺术创作咯;
2 结合说,要我就这么写。科技反映文明,大家都会说了吧,艺术呢?艺术可以transfer morality:peace,love,loyalty使人们的心灵,精神充实、纯洁,使思想高尚,从而带来civilization。当然艺术也可以和科学结合反映文明。电脑绘画、MTV音乐、Internet;
3 补充说:文明其实不止这俩,还有政治啦,人们的生活啦,文化啦,等等(总之自己定义就是了)

158 The arts (music, dance, visual arts, etc.) are vitally important to students' education and should therefore receive as much emphasis as mathematics, science, reading and other mainstream subjects."

这个比较好说,说艺术不重要,就说教育以科学知识为主,艺术会attract students’ attention; 说艺术重要就说,培养学生的imaginative ability ,creativity 和243所说的充实精神,纯化思想,等等

176 "The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each."

最难写的终于“千呼万唤使出来”了。
1 科技给人们生活带来便利,但是reassure了吗?核技术的使用,生化武器的出现,克隆技术的发展,环境污染等等给人类道德伦理带来疑虑。
2 艺术的目的是upset?许多艺术作品令人震撼,触动人的内心甚至upset人们。 命运交响乐,思考者“thinker”《最后的晚餐》等等,
也可以说:art不是upset的,而是给人们的生活增添pleasure的,如 euphonious music、elegant pictures and elaborate sculpture;


总共12题。开头几个政府和艺术的,也可以属于angei 的政府类。

总结得很快嘛
我今天刚好看到《燕山夜话》,想到1961年左右的中国以及文革时期都是政府控制艺术的经典范例,当然,已经沦为笑柄了
176那个题很变态,摆明了要给两个东西下定义,而且按照你这么一说,都要批,累啊

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