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发表于 2010-2-23 12:58:05 |显示全部楼层

本帖最后由 superxucong 于 2010-2-24 07:51 编辑

Hi GTers! I'm a Chinese student at Yale Graduate School. An American friend of mine is interested in helping students with their essays (personal statements) applying US universities. He's a published writer, graduate of Yale, professor, has degrees in physics and medicine, and has a lot of experience doing there essays. His charge would be nominal (actually he hasn't figured out how much to charge yet :); he's more interested in starting the service to see if there's a market, so it's a golden opportunity to take advantage of this trial period). He would also consider editing scientific papers, which he has done many times (this is more extensive work).
He helped several of my friends modifying their essays and they told me it was of great help. I wrote and modified my own essays when I was applying and I clearly understand the difficulty and complexity to write a precise and attractive PS: you wanna include elements in your life and knit them together to make the admission committee excited to see your experience and aptitude. I think this is exactly the reason why a native speaker in the academic field can be more insightful in PS writing.
If you are interested please email your essay at: cong.xu@yale.edu
p.s.: 代友发帖，绝非中介，版主误删，GTers轻拍。

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发表于 2010-2-23 13:04:29 |显示全部楼层

I think this is exactly the reason why an native American in the academic field can be more insightful in PS writing.

你英文水平有待提高啊，native american专指美洲土著印第安人。

to make the admission committee exited to see your experience and aptitude.

这句里面的错词我就不说了，，留给gter当英文改错习题

老印真是畜生都不如的东西啊！

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发表于 2010-2-23 13:14:02 |显示全部楼层

haha, thanks for letting me know. I noticed those errors soon after I posted the message although I don't quite see what's wrong with the second sentences you mentioned. These are mistakes easy to identify by anyone while some subtle ones are hard to, including what to and not to include in ur essay, how to organize them, etc.

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发表于 2010-2-24 02:17:23 |显示全部楼层

haha, thanks for letting me know. I noticed those errors soon after I posted the message although I don't quite see what's wrong with the second sentences you mentioned. These are mistakes easy to ide ...
superxucong 发表于 2010-2-23 13:14