issue130 高频第一题，第一次写，求猛拍。

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TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
WORDS:720   TIME:3H    DATE: 2010-3-15  13:19:00
ps:第一次写issues，没限定时间，请猛拍~~~~
outline:
pos:不完全同意以上看法。社会化并不是最重要的，同时，并不是所有家长与社会不知道如何教育孩子建立好社会。
1承认孩子是社会的未来。但是社会的命运不仅仅是由儿童的社会化决定的。教育的作用。
2首先澄清better 社会的定义。better社会是道德并且多样的。社会的性质促使其发展。成人要做的是合理教导孩子遵循社会发展规律，遵守社会化的伦理道德和保证个性多样性。
3大部分成人做到了，少部分人扼杀多样性，不对。
总结,社会命运由多方面影响。我们可以做好教育孩子，使其成才。

When human beings put their sights on the future, it is unexceptionable that the children become the focus attended by general public. However，socialization of children is at best a important factor determining the future of society. And the claim that we have not yet learned how to raise children who can create a better society is partially compellent.
In despite of my views against the issue topic, the importance of raising children should be admitted in the sake of that they will be the real host of world in future when all was said and done. "Youth is rich, nation is rich; youth is strong, nation is strong", noted Qichao Liang, a leading ideologist of Qing period and a pioneer in the reformation of China's society。
The destiny of society is not merely determined by the socialization. Many factors contribute a lot to the destiny of society and the social relationship between people is not only one among them. For example, the development of technology and the spirit of human being play a vital role in the developing of society. And education is the way to achieve. After the World War 2, the Japan government puts the education first and wants to utilize the education to let it out of the shadow of failure of war. Now the Japan becomes one of the most developed countries in the word. The education, without doubt, played a substantial role form failure to greatness. Its counterpart China awake from the Confucius education which pays little attention on the science developed all-round education and achieved a great success which made China one of most influential countries in the world today.
When it comes to the problem of raising children, we must clarify what is the real ‘better’ society. A better society should be defined as one characterized by greater tolerance of diversity, greater recognition of creativity and greater loyalty of morality. We see individual plays an extremely important role in human society, particularly some elites. We know Caesar’s exertion to the Roma Empire, the Aristotle of ancient science. All these people put the society forward.         
But we must say that it's the principle of society itself who make this development. It is the instinct of the people who have a genius curiosity to work out those questions and doubts and want to live a happy lazy life and so on that made the society go forward. People wanders why does the sun just appear in daytime and the moon in night, can we remain young forever and no die. Just the curiosity to this question made we know more and more about of the cosmic and pharmacy, the society develops relevantly. The summer is so hot and the winter so cold, can we live in spring for all four seasons. The air-conditioning came into being.
The adults’ responsibility is to educate the children to keep to the morality of society and to inspire their diversity, in according with the principle of social development. One competent education should contain both two sides resulted by the attributes belonged to human beings that person in society is either one molecule of the special combination of society or one individual who are different with others and independent with others.
Fortunately, most of the adults actually know the way to bring up children to contribute to a better society. Merits such as honesty, persistence, probity, kindness and so on are the core lessons inculcated by parents and school systems. However, some parents are not satiated by the existing way of bringing up society and are dedicated to explore a more specific pattern ignoring the diversity to determine the final vocation of children. The ideas of these people are perilous. If utilize this specific pattern, there will not have plumbers, electricians, drivers, and cleaners, but solely the scientists, politicians, millionaires, businessmen. In such case, our society will definitely result in an irretrievable chaos and stagnancy.
On all accounts, one nation’s development is more complex than what the issue topic thinks about. The problem is related with all sides of the society, although the side of raising children is special significant one. However, any single factor or even several factors cannot be recognized to determinate the destiny of the whole society. With the effort of whole society to create wholesome environment to the children, especially well awareness of morality and diversity of family and school education, the children will become our society’s backbone.