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Education, if simply stated, means the process of gaining imparting (我觉得传授知识比较合理)the knowledge, instilling the forms of proper conduct (什么意思?)and cultivating the personal competency. Views asserted as the issue, argue that when it is specifically designed to cater for the needs and interests of individual, education will be truly effective. However, in my opinion, the real purpose of education has been ignored in the statement, and the speaker just paid the attention on the personal demand is inadequate.(我觉得这句话不如直接把教育的真正目的说出来)
In the first place, I concede that the individual needs and interests of each student are vital in the process of teaching which has always been discussed between the teachers and institutes. "Interest is the best teacher", said Einstein Albert, and we believe that, the theory of relativity which has been the fundamental of modern science, can never be brought about if Einstein do not have the eager interest in the physics. People tend to be passionate, open-minded, and diligent when studying something meets their needs and interests.
However, the individual goal is just one part of the purpose of education whose initial function is to make us know the world around us. The effective education, I suggest that, is to educate the students through effective ways which serve its purpose.(什么意思?) As a result, students will miss the whole picture of the real world if teachers only pay their attention on to the students' needs and interests, and will not gain structured knowledge which has significant meanings for their whole life. The result has a bad effect especially for the pupils who begin to learn and still have innocent minds. For example, some basic principles youngsters feel them are hard and boring such as math, logic and physic, will be very helpful in future. Another fact is that, interests can be cultivated through some vivid, interesting and thought-provoking methods; even the most abstruse quantum mechanics can be explained through the simple expression by Feynman and his lectures on physics.不认识这个人,因此不晓得说的啥~
Education is also responsible for the cultivation of a civilized society. In modern society,
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personal competency which is one of the educational goals has a broader content embracing structured knowledge, occupational skill and social ability. With the process of globalization, the society at large has lay more emphasis on some social capacity - cooperation, teamwork, leadership, interpersonal and so forth - which cannot be obtained through such education as the statement that not realize the individual needs and interests of each student are just one factor of effective education. (主语是谁??)We know that some students who are introversive and lack of the courage to communicate are prone to only focus on their own interests and do not want to stay with others. If the teachers do not notice that education only meeting their needs and interests are far from an effective one, they maybe will may tend to be diffident and lack of a sense of belonging or even responsibility. Education have an obligation to cultivate students with social competency no matter they are interested or not.
Education Without making sure the purpose of education first and only specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student cannot guarantee an effective education. Nowadays, education should be well-structured, comprehensive and responsible when prepare the students for the society. 总体结构不错,每一个部分的例子还可以再多找一些 |