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7-27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertizing is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits?
Many mainly blame unhealthy eating habits on advertisements, especially those of fast food. The familiar scene that people are digging into hamburgers heavily or children are smiling with a mouth of chocolate attracts us a lot. However, I think it exaggerated to say advertizing is the real culprit.
I must admit that advertisements influence a lot on the choice of food. We are attracted by the visual deliciousness presented in the advertisement. But we should recognize that we have the initiative to decide whether buy them or not. In fact, people are capable to distinguish from objective information, knowing that ads aim to persuade us buying something. From newspaper, internet, we read a lot of articles in which indicate the bad effect of absorbing too much saturated fancy acids in chips or the carcinogen produced by the chemical reaction between meat and hot oil. Take myself for example, I like Mcdonald’s but I eat at most only once a week as I know it makes me fat and its product is not nutrient. Thus, with self-control, we can resist the temptation of ads.

On the contrary, I find out others causes more responsible, for example, the fast pace of society, the social standard of beauty etc. It’s quite common that people order take-away as too busy, not having a regular meal timetable. As a result, they don’t have a balanced food system and suffer from stomach. What’s more, nowadays, being thin is a fashion. In order to loose weight, many young ladies keep a diet too strict, no meat, no bread, no sugar, which threaten their bodies. What’s worse, some of them may have anorexia which even damages their lives!

To sum up, ads is only one of the factors which cause unhealthy eating habits. Besides, we should be aware of other possibility more dangerous, like fast pace society and social standard of beauty.

serena-blueUID: 2811284

7-29
多谢各位组员的指导！
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

My uncle always complains that Ming, my cousin changes his job too fast and he is proud of being a worker in a state-owned enterprise for his whole life. It’s true that people of my parents’ age prefer a stable job, with disapproval of job-hopping. However, as a teenager, I firmly hold the opposite opinion that we young men ought to experience different jobs before taking a long term career.

On one hand, we can find out what we really like by having different jobs. Before leaving our campus, most of us have no clear and reasonable plan of our career. The job we want to do may be entirely different from our imagination. What’s more, we may even don’t know a lot of unconventional jobs. How can we guarantee that we can find a suitable and promising job all life long with only one try? Take my friend John for example. Graduated from the management course, he firstly did as an assistant manager in a commercial trading company. But he detested having to talk to people at parties and soon quitted. After staying in several places like hotel, factory, etc, he finally chose a travel agency. He told me that he enjoys making travel plans for others and really appreciates the beauty of different places all over the world. To tell the truth, he is grateful of his experience of job-hopping and is happy to take his current job as his career.

On the other hand, we can learn a lot out of books by changing jobs. Staying in unchangeable working conditions, we have a steady system like how to deal with our professional relationship, how to solve analogous problems met in work. If a new one arise, we may feel upset. On the contrary, we will be more diplomatic by having different experiences. I admire a lot the story of Mengfei, a local anchorman in my city. He once did jobs like redcap, printer, casual worker in broadcasting station. After several years of struggle, he succeeded as a great anchorman with his unique perspective for daily life and sharp sense of events. All this should be attributed to his abundant working experience.

To sum up, it’s meaningful for us young people to try different jobs in order to identify professional target and accumulate working experience. Based on all this, we can finally do a satisfying long-term career.

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serena-blueUID: 2811284

7-31
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign

From my point of view, newspapers and magazines are not the best ways to learn about a foreign country.

Obviously, newspapers and magazines offer us information abroad of all kinds , from the beautiful sceneries to the local delicious food, from the characters of native people to the traditional festivals. However, every author has his/her own unique perspective and subjective emotion, in a similar way, he/she may also give us some personal prejudice. What’s more, by reading a lot of articles of a same country, we can easily find some typical stereotypes. Take myself for example. Before I went to Italy, I thought it was a country crazy for football and Italian pizza. During one year study in Naples, I found something different from my previous impression. My partner, Valentina, a girl student felt surprised that I know so much about Juventus or Lazio, even better than her. She told me that she seldom watches football games, neither her friends. And it’s true that a lot of people like pizza, but the most popular one is from Turkey, called Kebab. From my experience, I realized it difficult for us to distinguish what is true or false only by reading. Newspapers and magazines can easily mislead us.

As far as I am concerned, the best way to know a country is going there in person. With our own eyes, own tongue and own ears, we can get the fresh and true impression of a country thousand miles far from our hometown. I can’t forget my Christmas trip to Venice, a city in my dream. The Piazza of S.Mark is far more magnificent beyond my imagination, and it was really interesting to take Gondola tracing the Great Channel while admiring the different types of architecture, like those of Byzantium, of Gothic, of Baroque. The feast for eyes was so strong that I will remember for the rest of my life. Whoever asks me how do I feel about Italy, about Venice, I always answer, smiling:“Go there, you will know everything!”

In a word, what we read from newspapers or magazines is only secondary data, we can easily make an elementary impression with the risk of containing prejudice and misunderstanding. Only by going a foreign country in person, will it be impressive and living.

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7-27   by 流年

不好意思，才给回

5 a9 O% a4 s2 D/ sDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertizing is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits?
3 J) V- q# Z  j( Q! j% x6 A! q# pMany (people) mainly blame unhealthy eating habits on advertisements, especially those of (是不是要删去)fast food. The familiar scene that people are digging into hamburgers heavily （感觉有点奇怪）or children are smiling with a mouth (full)of chocolate attracts us a lot. However, I think it exaggerated to say advertizing is the real culprit.
% Q: j  t8 b7 b* j  i% s* rI must admit that advertisements influence a lot on the choice of food. We are attracted by the visual deliciousness presented in the advertisement. But we should recognize that we have the initiative to decide whether buy them or not. In fact, people are capable to distinguish from objective information(s), knowing that ads aim to persuad(persuading) us buying something. From newspaper, internet, we read a lot of articles in which indicate the bad(disastrous) effect of absorbing too much saturated fancy acids in chips or the carcinogen produced by the chemical reaction between meat and hot oil. Take myself for example, I like Mcdonald’s but I eat at most only once a week as I know it makes me fat and its product is not nutrient. Thus, with self-control, we can resist the temptation of ads.
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, L9 }9 {; v4 [& b8 HOn the contrary, (on the other aspects ，两者不是相反关系)I find out (that) others causes more responsible, for example, the fast pace of society, the social standard of beauty etc. It’s quite common that people order take-away as too busy, not having a regular meal timetable（schedual）. As a result, they don’t have a balanced food system and are suffering from stomach(stomach-ache). What’s more, nowadays, being thin is a fashion. In order to loose weight, many young ladies keep a diet too strict, no meat, no bread, no sugar, which threaten their bodies. What’s worse, some of them may have anorexia which even damages their lives!( W/ Q+ |5 R& ^

1 D& q8 ?  `# {To sum up, ads is only one of the factors which cause unhealthy eating habits. Besides, we should be aware of other possibility more dangerous, like fast pace society and social standard of beauty

1:中间两段论述大体都挺好，第二段论述有点乱，你先说了ads会吸引我们，又说我们自己能control ,中间没有过渡，而且这两者感觉不应该放在一段里。
2：第三段论述other causes 还不够充分
3：结尾有点平淡，

littlekuoUID: 2860535

个人观点，切记仅供参考


My uncle always complains that Ming, my cousin changes his job too fast and he is proud of being a worker in a state-owned enterprise for his whole life. It’s true that people of my parents’ age prefer a stable job, with a disapproving attitude toward job-hopping. However, as a teenager, I firmly hold the opposite opinion that we young men ought to experience different jobs before taking a long term career.

On one hand, we can find out what we really like by having different jobs. Before leaving our campus, most of us have no clear and reasonable plan of our career. The job we want to do may be entirely different from our imagination. What’s more, we may even don’t know a lot of unconventional jobs. How can we guarantee that we can find a suitable and promising job all life long with only one try? Take my friend John for example. Graduated from the management course, he firstly did as an assistant manager in a commercial trading company. But he detested having to talk to people at parties and soon quitted. After staying in several places like hotel, factory, etc, he finally chose a travel agency. He told me that he enjoys making travel plans for others and really appreciates the beauty of different places all over the world. To tell the truth, he is grateful of his experience of job-hopping and is happy to take his current job as his career.

On the other hand, we can learn a lot of things that are out of books by changing jobs. Staying in unchangeable working conditions, we have a steady system likes how to deal with our professional relationship,  or how to solve analogous problems met in work. If a new one arises, we may feel upset. On the contrary, we will be more diplomatic by having different experiences. I admire a lot the story of Mengfei, a local anchorman in my city. He once did jobs like redcap, printer,and casual worker in broadcasting station. After several years of struggle, he succeeded as a great anchorman with his unique perspective for daily life and sharp sense of events. All this should be attributed to his abundant working experience.

To sum up, it’s meaningful for us young people to try different jobs in order to identify professional target and accumulate working experience. Based on all this, we can finally do a satisfying long-term career.

整体感觉很好了，两个观点都不错，我个人观点觉得那个第三段的例子服务于本段的观点稍微有点牵强，例子本身很生动，也许就需要那么一点自圆其说就好了。我觉得你的语言功底不错，有一些句子写的很好，例如第二段那个how⋯⋯的疑问句。

callie28UID: 2656640

31号作业批改~

From my point of view, newspapers and magazines are not the best ways to learn about a foreign country.
Obviously, newspapers and magazines offer us information abroad of all kinds , from the beautiful sceneries to the local delicious food, from the characters of native people to the traditional festivals. However, every author has his/her own unique perspective and subjective emotion, in a similar way, he/she may also give us some personal prejudice. What’s more, by reading a lot of articles of a（the)same country, we can easily find some typical stereotypes. Take myself for example. Before I went to Italy, I thought it was a country (which is )crazy for football and Italian pizza. During one year study in Naples, I found something different from my previous impression. My partner, Valentina, a girl student felt surprised that I know so much about Juventus or Lazio, even better than her. She told me that she seldom watches (whtched)football games, neither her friends. And it’s true that a lot of people like pizza, but the most popular one is from Turkey, called Kebab. From my experience, I realized it (is) difficult for us to distinguish what is true or false only by reading. Newspapers and magazines can easily mislead us.
As far as I am concerned, the best way to know a country is going there in person. With our own eyes, own tongue and own ears, we can get the fresh and true impression of a country thousand(thousands) miles far from our hometown. I can’t forget my Christmas trip to Venice, a city in my dream. The Piazza of S.Mark is far more magnificent beyond my imagination, and it was (is)really interesting to take Gondola tracing the Great Channel while admiring the different types of architecture, like those of Byzantium, of Gothic, of Baroque. The feast for eyes was so strong that I will remember for the rest of my life. Whoever asks me how do I feel about Italy, about Venice, I always answer, smiling:“Go there, you will know everything!”
In a word, what we read from newspapers or magazines is only secondary data, （.We）we can easily make an elementary impression with the risk of containing prejudice and misunderstanding. Only by going a foreign country in person, will it be impressive and living.

个人意见:1、结构把握很好，逻辑清晰
         2、开头可以稍微再多谢几句。有点太简洁了
         3、句子结构有待加强。语法问题

serena-blueUID: 2811284

09.02.27NA4 n* [6 K/ i8 @8 Z! {* G
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.
From my point of view,a job with a high salary but less vacation time is worse than one with more vacation time but a low salary.
Admittedly,there is a tendency to chase as more pay as possible. It is seemly a consensus that money equals high life quality. However,we have seen so many examples of so-called successmen who earns a lot but feel tired with their work.Without enough time to stay with their family and friends,they are stuck in the office and at last only icy computers or noisy phones accompany them.Immagine how sad if a father can only kiss her sleeping little girl and buy dolls for her while refuse to take her to the zoo at weekends?Money can not buy the precious time with people you love and the sweety their smile.
Besides staying with family and friends,we can relax ourselves in vacantion time,for instance by reading ,travelling around ,cooking,etc.It helps us recover from hard work and get ready to the following challenge.If not,it will be quite hard for us to remain good.Simultaneous interpretors are well-known for highly paid.But it also comes at a costly price.Many people are forced to retire at a young age,around 35, for the simple reason that their bodies can not  sustain high strength of their job.In the long term,it's impossible to stay always in the position with less vacation time which may bring about native impact on our health.
In a word,a job with less pay but more vacation time is preferable for me.I value a lot the happiness of family union and really hope  that I can always be energetic to face the continuous of challenge in my work

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8-5
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.& U( V" O$ Q; k6 J

I am firmly in favor that kids from five to ten years old,should be taught art and music in addition to math,science,history and language at school.I can still remember the happiness to draw little animals or beautiful flowers and dance with my little partners when i was at kingdergarden.Just from that time,I developed my habit of singing and drawing and benefited a lot from it.

On one hand,learning music and art will make kids' childhood much more colorful.I can not imagine a child at the age under only 10 has to deal with numbers,alphabet or stories long long ago, but has not the ability to draw the familiar things around them,like his/her parents, his/her little dog,the birthday cake,etc.It would be exetremely sad.My little nephew once told me that he really enjoys singing his own-made songs when having the bath.I heard once.His voice was sweet and the lyrics were about the memory of a trip with his friends and teacher.I bet every aldut would be deeply moved by the pure songs and the happiness contained.With art and music,children's lives will be more relaxing and interesting.
On the other hand,kids wil be more creative by learning art and music.To tell the truth,i admire a lot the pictures of my little nephew.Under his pens,the sun could be blue,the grass could be red and there could be colorful fish on the trees!He also like to make small things like paper airplanes or little shining stars.Sometimes he even comes up with new ideas that i can never do.I am afraid that his great imagination will be destroyed if he is taught only math,science,history or language.

In a word,by learning art and music,kids will live in a world much more colorful and interesting and be more creative.We should give them a complete and happy childhood.

serena-blueUID: 2811284

8-7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities.
As a college student,I think it positive to take part-time jobs.From the year of freshman untill now,i have several different part-time jobs and benefited from them both in study and in life.

Foremost, the time that students should be occupied by courses has been long past.We can learn a lot from part-time jobs.Take myself own for example.My major is italian.Once i did as a chinese teacher for three italian architect.We gathered together once a week.In my work,i improved my pronounciation and the ability to express properly in italian.It was a precious experience.When i studied in Naples later,my italian friends were all amazed by my flunt speaking.What's more,by communicating with those architect,I learnt more about italians and their culture,which may not be mentioned in the books.

Secondly,i can depend partly on myself by doing part-time job.To some degree,i feel a bit embarrassed and shameful to ask money from my parents as i am already an adlut.I don't want to be the so-called parastic in my family.From my working experience,i realize the hardship of making a living and get used to spend each coin in the right place.I will feel more happier and a bit proud when I buy new-year gifts for my parents with my own money.What's more,i learn to deal with various relationships from working experience and feel myself more mature,not a silly and thoughtless girl any more.

In a word,by taking part-time jobs,i get a deeper understanding of my area and it helps me form the foundation fo my career.In addition,I can relieve some burden of my parents and be more mature in the daily life.I think we college students should step out of the campus and do some part-time job.

serena-blueUID: 2811284

8-10

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries.

I am a big fan of movies and TV programs,especially the amusing ones.But to tell the truth,sometimes I feel bored when seeing Dustin Hoffman's film as I don't find anything funny on a false woman.In addition, my italian friend,Valentina keeps serious but I burst into laughters while we watch a Chinese Soap Opera.As far as I am concerned,the cultural gap and the distinct ways to express jokes lead our different reactions to the same scene in a movie or a TV program.

On one hand,movies and TV programs made in one's own country are more close to his daily life and thus are much easier to understand.As we know,the directors often collect materials of the films or tv programs from our familiar small things and present them in the means of artistic expression.It's quite common that we suddenly realize some scene which we may have experienced somewhere before and then smile in a grin of understanding.On the contrary,if we don't get acquaint with customs of other countries,we may feel confused and even disgusting.I remembered once i saw a scene in a japanese movie in which a lot of people were having bath together,both men and women,totally naked.I was shocked and could not comprehend why they seemd at ease.After reading some books,i knew it is a Japanese tradition,nobody will feel embarrassed.But I still can not accept it.The culture gap between countries makes the movies and tv programs abroad unintelligible.

On the other hand, the ways to express comic effects in different countries are distinct.Some like to use funny words,some prefer strange props and customers and others make jokes by body language.Chaplin's film  gained great popularity in America but my parents are perfectly unmoved by  the tinny,terrible-dressed tramp.They admire more a traditional Chinese artistic form named Cross Talk in which two men just stand there and make fun of trifling matters in daily life .My friend,Mei who comes from another province,even can not catch the jokse when seeing Cross Talk as sometimes the actors speak in dialect,let alone with those foreigners.What's more,it's impossible to have subtitle in English at the risk of losing fascination of linguistics when the actors play.

To sum up,I firmly agree with the statement that movies and TV programs made in one's own country are more interesting than those made in other countries.We are much familiar with their content and way of expression are more acceptable.Compared with Jim Carrey's exaggerated facial expression,I'd like to enjoy a Cross Talk.