darkathrun(法律文氓)的进军美利坚作文帖

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17 August 2010 2008.5.16 NA independently writing: 是telephone 还是television对人类的有more effects No one can deny that the twentieth century is a magnificent era for scientific inventions, which has witnessed an unprecedented explosion of scientific breakthroughs. Prominent inventions such as television and telephone, which have never been even imaged, are nowadays being numerously manufactured around the whole world, for the benefit of us people. However, which invention is most beneficial to us, for example, TV or telephone, both being worldwide considered as historical inventions of significance? Taking what concerns me into consideration, I firmly hold the idea that TV has a further influence than telephone. First and foremost, the invention and development of TV has fostered lots forms of performance, such as TV series, cartoons and instant news, which greatly abundant and influent our dairy life. Friends will never fade away from our memory; the joy and sorrow of Growing Pains will be shared by us for another century till death takes us apart; Alan Shore and Danny Crane’s friendship in Boston Legal will be the forever preeminent when we are communicate with others. Who can deny the touching and movement we have when again and again we burst into song, into cries, and into laughter if we look back to dig what’s inside these characters? Simple and funny stories as they are, these plays convey further more than what they present. Only when we senselessly act just like Alan Shore in court, lie down on sofa and do the “couch potato” thing as Raymond or suddenly jump out a word such as “bazinga”, Sheldon’s famous line in The Big Bang Theory, will we realize their influence and significance to us. Apart from this, TV, as a channel connects the two poles of the world, enhances people be aware of what happens beyond their sight as soon as the people witness what’s going on, enabling people to communicate in a long distance. Taking the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai for example, faraway people can handle what celebrations are being held in the expo instantly it happens, such as National Day Ceremonies of the pavilions, dancing carnival and demonstrations via watching TV. In addition, people can give grievance to the victims of catastrophes such as 911 and Spanish Railway Explosion as soon as what is presented on TV draws our attention. By these ways the globe seems to become smaller and closer, leading people to communicate in a shortened time. Although some, holding the idea that telephone is prior to any other inventions due to its enhancement of long distance mutual communication, which is considered as an epoch-making breakthrough, claim that telephone is more effective to people than TV, I firmly hold the idea that considering TV’s broadcasting and instantaneousness, TV has made the major contribution to the society development. Thus, it can conclude that TV is more effective to people than telephone.

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8月24日交
（09.01.23 NA） Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

No one can deny that nowadays we have witnessed an unprecedented zeal for job hunting among people, who are so desperately seeking for a sufficient one that they would rather to ignore some not bad ones to pursue perfection. However, taking what concerns me into consideration, I firmly hold the idea that this is so wrong. Only by taking what job can be got at the moment can people find their advantages and locate themselves in a long term career with the gaining of life and work experience, which is quite crucial to one’s good.
First and foremost, the overflow people seeking for an employment result in the situation of recruitment difficulty, under which finding a sufficient long term job is really beyond a youth. Take a shot at the flourish of employment market and any one will realize that how difficult it is to find a sufficient job in the crowd of people, who are languishing for a finance related job, such as accountant, lawyer and stocker. No doubt administrative positions are also pursued by numerous people due to its steadiness, predictability and comfort. Besides, transnational corporations’ vocations are being both envied and dreamed by different kinds of people, who share the same pursuit of good salary and spectacular environment and long-term vacation. How can you beat these hunting guys with no working experience?
Apart from this, accumulation of working experience can broaden one’s horizon, which contributes to one’s career incredibly. On one hand, within broader commercial contact with people, more potential business partners and consumers and even more skills from practice and work, surely will one have more options and opportunities when a long term work is chosen.
Thus, in a nutshell, supposed we should try several jobs before we take a long term job. Not only should we regard the difficult recruitment situation seriously, but also one can benefit from one’s previous working experience in the long term vocation.

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August 19 2010
2008.12.5 NA
Do you agree or disagree: Playing sports give you more lessons about the life.

Throughout human history never has any other thing can have a same charm as playing sports. From golf to basketball, from soccer to baseball, from swimming to volleyball, not only do various kinds of sports enhance endurance, strength and swiftness, but also, in my opinion, contribute to people’s better understanding of life.
First and foremost, perseverance is what playing sports teach people as soon as people get in touch with sports. Taking myself as an instance, I once was a weak boy who was really tired of sports as well as study due to its boredom that I can never stick with. However, everything changed when I stepped into a table tennis training room. So harsh and tough it was that I had to exhaust all my energy to stick with my mates. When it was high time for home, I cannot even move a single toe. Day after day, generally I learnt how to stick with others and how to hang on and never give up. Coming to study, never would I stop forwarding no matter how harsh it is; coming to racing under no circumstance would I take a pause in my way to final line;coming to life, never would I give in to the blocks and difficulties as long as I can still go forward. Perseverance has ever been my motto since I take table tennis, so can anyone deny that playing sports’ effect on teaching perseverance?
Apart from this, playing sports can tell people how to take step on even confronted with failure. Always exist winners and losers in a game, which can teach people to learn and keep on going when being beaten down, which is quite priceless to people who are seeking for success. For instance, 1000 failures can’t stop Edison’s step to illuminate every corner of this world, which requires people to learn and regain confidence to overcome blocks which have once stopped people to pursue success. This quality can be fostered in sports, so that sports are of great significance to people who seek for success.
Thus, it can conclude that playing sports give you more lessons about the life. Strengthening people’s body as it is, playing sports also contributes to people’s mental progress, which, taking what concerns me into consideration, is quite precious to people.

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8月26日交
(09.02.21 NA) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country？

Nowadays we have witnessed an unprecedented booming of so called as “new media”, which is composed of TV, internet and other electronic based media. They illustrate the whole world to us with living visions and sounds, recreating and representing what the colorful world views like by means of massive electronic facilities. Though still can we find newspapers and magazines occupying an equivalent market share with new media due to its uniqueness and long descended tradition of critics and columns, no one can denying that new media is gradually taking place of newspapers and magazines, regarded as the best way to obtain information around the world.
First and foremost, new media can represent a more colorful world than newspapers and magazines as well as in more aspects. Especially to a foreign country, what can essays and critics generate is a general idea. An obscure scenery, an approximate outline and a indifferent map may be all it means to us. On the contrary, by presenting local spectacular scenes, different culture and tasty food, new media stretches exotica in as many aspects as we can imagine, conveys what paper can never convey and overcome what is insurmountable to elder bests. Only in this way can we find what a real foreign country is, how this nation works and where the difference between one’s motherland and new land hides.
Apart from this, timeliness is the main reason counting for the fact that new media superior to newspapers and magazines. With editing, publishing and printing, what newspapers and magazines present never is fresh and raw, and sometimes time lag may be so severe that the reporting is totally out of date, even making a horrible mistake. For instance, once I saw a report saying that a fashion of being bizarre was being pursued by most of Japanese youngs at that very moment, who are calling themselves are “smarter”. However, it turns out that this is what Japanese guys pursue in 1980s and the picture taken is Chinese, who dressed so weird that enhances people relating him with a character in Japanese cartoons. In contrast, with living broadcasting and on-the-spot investigation, errors resemble to this will never happen.
Hence, in a nutshell, I firmly hold the idea that the most brilliant and significant media to convey messages is new media, while newspapers and magazines, though still share a relatively wide influence among people, will slowly fade away from people’s memory. Not only due to newspapers and magazines’ insurmountable shortcoming of paper limits, but also because of their severe time lag.

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个人意见~兄弟你文章写得太好了 羡慕啊……

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8月28日交
（09.02.27NA）Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.


Nowadays we have witnessed an unprecedented tendency of people to exhaust their effort to pursue a vocation with a relatively high salary, while any other factors, such as vacation, circumferences and working pressure, are never taken a shot. However, no one can denying that the results led by this are devastating to some people. Some are suffering chronic diseases such as diabetes, spine diseases and heart diseases; some may be seen as an elder even though he or she is only 40 years old; some may even die of pressure far before he should be due to his occupying. Thus, taking what concerns me into consideration, I firmly hold the idea that a job with a higher salary but less vacation time is far inferior to a job with more leisure time.
First and foremost, though money speaks for us in a lot of aspects as a motto once puts it “without money one can never do anything”, supposedly money cannot take the place of several things that will never be regained, such as family. Such a common phenomenon that people ignore their family and going for flying bills it is that we have seen so many family tear apart due to indifference and unbearable attitude to each other. A job with high salary will never replace the happiness and closeness when we spend time with our family and enjoy our time, which can be fairly provided by a job with more vacation.
Apart from this, a job with more vacation ensures people a relatively low coincidence of getting chronic diseases. A survey in the last year shows that people with relatively high salary is more likely to suffer from diabetes, high blood pressure and heart diseases due to the insurmountable shortcomings such as extraordinary working pressure, fierce competition and unavoidable feeling of exhaustion, at the same time vacation promises physical healing, mental adjustment and relaxation, which contributes to a healthy body and mental goodness.
Hence, in a nutshell, I firmly hold the idea that a job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. Taking a job with more vacation, people will enhance a far better future. We will never have to suffer from endless torture of chronic diseases; we will never have to feel guilty for absence of family affairs and we will never have to complain this exhausting employment.

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餐具又传不上去了

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9月4日交
09.08.01    NA    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life
Nowadays we have witnessed an unprecedented flourish of innovations and progresses as well as explosion of information, which leads to the tendency that a person full of energy is easily ignored by the others. With people confused by the vast information of the people who are desperate for achievement, it is less likely to success without other’s acknowledgement. Only if you have yourself known as a strong and dependable one can you get successful in life.
First and foremost, without other’s awareness and acknowledgement it is impossible of one to stretch his/her relationship and social communication, which is firmly believed that is the key factor to success. Take Einstein for example, he was never considered a physicist but a stubborn nerd who was lost in anthology and astronomy, crazy about some unknown, sophisticated and ridiculous theory until his quantity theory was accepted by two of the most prominent and popular physicists, who happened to be interested in Einstein’s research field. Even Einstein, one of the most brilliant people in the last century, never got himself acknowledged as a preeminent discoverer until his theory was accepted by two of the brilliant scientists who generally introduced this theory to other scientists, how can we have us success coming without others’ introduction and awareness?
Apart from this, people who have admiration from others, especially famous people in their own fields, is more likely to success due to the building up of confidence to accomplish their goals. With an expert’s acknowledgement from his/her professional aspect to inspire them for a higher goal, one can have more faith in his/her researching, one can overcome the confronted difficulties with more strength and one can set for his/her goal with more thought and awareness.
Hence, it can conclude that if you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life. With others’ acknowledgement, you can easily get support from other people, you can more likely to achieve others’ admiration and you can easily pave your way to success!

darkathrunUID: 2813505

限时版。。。。写的不行啊

darkathrunUID: 2813505

好久没回来自己帖子都要找不到了

darkathrunUID: 2813505

传上来了哈~

darkathrunUID: 2813505

终于可以传上来了。。。

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72# darkathrun  
思路 一边倒哇？
语言之类的我还不如你
以前看到这题的时候想的是
首先什么算是成功？
有些成功（事业上的）需要被人知道你的努力 BLABLA。。。
有些成功（比如有些女人愿意做家庭妇女之类） ...
0513doudou 发表于 2010-9-5 20:49

这是G的思维啊~~我喜欢一开始就择定一个相较好写的方向，除非是两面都讲讲比其他两个方向好写很多。。。不过还是受你启发了哈~

DriverEntryUID: 143979

看了下68楼，还可以。有些细节还是不够好，比如

“, who happened to be interested in Einstein’s research field”， 可以吧逗号和WHO 去掉
“how can we have us success coming” －－》HOW CAN WE SUCCEED
"is more likely to success"-->TO SUCCEED. SUCCESS 是名词。