darkathrun(法律文氓)的进军美利坚作文帖

如是_ivyUID: 2704554

酱油路过，帮你改了下作文。

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darkatrun同学

作文批改完毕
也木要忘了给我看看呀

yezi2010UID: 2722638

8.3号作文的修改，不好意思改晚了~

bruce520UID: 2634940

你好，这么晚才看的文章不好意思
文笔不错哈
还有，多谢你对我的作文的意见

darkathrunUID: 2813505

Date 07/08/10
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TOPIC: 7 r' l! q8 g! A3 y1 m" gDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities.

Although some, holding the belief that students ought to concentrate on study due to its significance in job hunting and future development, claim that students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities, taking what concerns me into consideration, I firmly hold the idea that students should take part-time jobs. In my opinion, undoubtedly taking part-time job is beneficial to students from the aspects of enrichment of working experience, the cultivation of independence and improvement of communication skills.
Foremost and foremost, nobody can deny that taking part-time job is of great importance due to its benefit for working experience enrichment. Nowadays has witnessed an unprecedentedly amount of graduates having difficulty in finding an access to handling problems imminently due to their lack of working experience, which should be cultivated via part-time job. Taking one of my professors as an example, the experience as a part-time teaching assistant in his adolescence, which makes him familiar with the teaching process, earns him a sufficient position. Treated as a key factor to enrichment of working experience, how comes part-time job being neglected?
Apart from this, it’s part-time job that cultivate students’ independence, ensuring their transference from kids to grow-ups. There’s no secret hiding in this that taking part-time job and earn one’s own living plays as initial phrase to cultivate their independence. A student who has just stepped out of their parents’ shelter may need to get himself prepared for the tough life, and a part-time job provide a spectacular opportunity to understand the hardship in making money and ensure them gradually become financially independent, which, I firmly believe, is of great significance.
Moreover, part-time jobs contribute to the improvement of communication skills. As a matter of fact, part-time jobs are the most basic jobs which require a lot to communication various kinds of people, compelling students to learn how to communicate with each other and promote the sales. Taking a shop assistant as an instance, when you stand there and speak highly of the products for the sake of selling, you have to learn how to organize your language and ensure your products sounds excellent via your instruction for the customers, which will be a strong impulse for your improvement of communication skills.
Thus, it can conclude that, students should take part-time jobs while they are still at school. Study is really a key to our success and we cannot ignore it, however, beneficial as part-time jobs are what we can never abandon.

darkathrunUID: 2813505

雷死，第一点打成了两个foremost。。。。。同组同学希望不要介意，这里指的是first and foremost~

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dandan17 发表于 2010-8-8 20:24

多谢你的修改了~

节俭的D同学UID: 2625249

写的还行啊
有前途，赞

darkathrunUID: 2813505

写的还行啊
有前途，赞
节俭的D同学 发表于 2010-8-8 21:43

呜呜呜呜呜呜呜，D姐我要崩溃了啊，刚刚做阅读错了4道又回到根本还没开始复习的阶段，作文一开始限时就写得暴乱暴差最后半小时才写了半篇，一个半小时才写完，口语可以一卡壳就是大半天时间根本没法好好分配，考不好怎么办啊啊啊啊啊

节俭的D同学UID: 2625249

平常心，，，要淡定，，，D姐英文那么烂的托福也能爆发个100+

darkathrunUID: 2813505

平常心，，，要淡定，，，D姐英文那么烂的托福也能爆发个100+
节俭的D同学 发表于 2010-8-8 21:56

D姐你对英语烂的定义和我的明显是天和地的差距。。。

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改好了

darkathrunUID: 2813505

多谢LS~

darkathrunUID: 2813505

August 10, 2010
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries?

Nowadays has witnessed an unprecedentedly explosion of information in every corner of this globe, the rapid transporting of which ensures the residents all around the world keep in touch with the latest news. As a matter of fact, programs such as movies and TV series flow from country to country, ethnic and fascinating, and receive relatively high attention compared with these ones made domestically. Although some, holding the belief that domestic movies and TV programs are much more acceptable to the residents due to its closeness to domestic life, claim that much more interesting are these movies and programs made in one’s own country than those made in other countries, I firmly opposed that statement due to following reasons which are accounting.
First and foremost, we should never underestimate the curiosity of people to an unknown and mysterious country. As a matter of fact, so curious people are for foreign things that they tend to ignore what surrounds them for years. Mystery, or I would rather to put, the lust to uncover mystery, is what contributes to this phenomenon. The theory applies to TV and movies as well. For instance, we are so familiar with oriental faces that nearly not any Asian face seems to be outstanding to us any longer; as soon as Michael Scofield appears in the screen, it proves that we can never resist such a charming Occidental face. When coming to Lost, the preference seems much more obvious: while Asian women express more preference, Europe and America are much more likely to go crazy for Jin, the Korean guy.
Apart from this, nobody can deny that exotica usually seems more aesthetically attractive to people. We people are always seeking for something unfamiliar to ourselves, and from this process we find what we call “interesting”. Still Prison Break, the hot of Prison Break in China is quite unexpected, while casting a second thought will we find that it’s reasonable: we are so tired of the fussy and narcissistic dramas which are mostly set in palace, gossiping about emperors and queens, which seems so dull to us after so many years filling the screen, so that when Prison Break came out from nowhere, immediately people get crazy about it due to its exotic and appealing.
Hence, taking what concerns me into consideration, I firmly hold the idea that Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are less interesting than those made in other countries. There’s no doubt that exotica seems more fascinating and appealing to us than domestic movies and TV series while we get unobvious tired about domestic ones. If the characters of domestic ones can never switch to a new point, sooner or later the exotica will occupy our heart forever.