头疼！谁来帮我解决这个问题~~issue154

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谁能告诉我，为什么我每段都写不长呢？


TOPIC: ISSUE154 - "Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."
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Outline:
开头：作者观点——个人观点（认同）
第二段：家长在孩子成长中扮演重要角色：1.父母是孩子的“第一老师”影响着孩子的一举一动；2.父母是真心替孩子着想，关心，监督，鼓励
第三段：社会在教育中的作用：1.社会上的资助，使得教育更有质量和保障
2.孩子必须了解、接触社会
第四段：举例证明家长和社会的作用
第五段：最后，谁也不能代替教育者在教育上的作用，他们有经验和知识。
第六段：然而，三者也存在着隐患：家长不能溺爱，社会不能让学生了解太多黑暗面，老师不能不负责
结尾：教育在任何时代任何国家都是重中之重，需要所有人都参与其中
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According to the speaker's claim, education is so important that it's necessary to get parents and communities involved in, together with group of professional educators to help the society cultivating more outstanding persons. I agree with it as long as managing proper.
Firstly, parent, also can be called the "first teacher" acts as a key role in child's growth. At the time a baby was born, parents were the first people he saw, child didn't know anything until his parents told him, and gradually the baby learns to imitate every single words, movements or expressions of his parents. Therefore, he is likely to become a little copy of his parents. Moreover, child is the apple of his parents, so it's impossible for any parent to teach his child something wrong for purpose. In short, parents are the persons who teach you when you face a new question, correct you when you do something improper, supervise you when you are lazy and encourage you when you are upset.
At the same time, society factors also can not be ignored which are ultimately contributing to education. Firstly, society could help improving our quality of learning for the reason that schools could often get inconsistent assistance from it. Thus, with more advanced instruments and more comfortable circumstances of studying, students could learn better. Secondly, no students can be outstanding without exist of society effects. Students have to know, contract with and finally be in the complicated society and their mission is to apply the knowledge they learned from school to the society, so society factors are as important as parents mentioned before.
Furthermore, to fully prove the significance of parents and society, we may look down to an example relating to an organization in the United States. The organization, Parent-Teacher Association (PTA) is aiming to support and speak on behalf of children and youths in schools and in the community, and before governmental agencies and other organizations whose decisions affect children; to assist parents in developing skills they need to raise children, and to encourage parental and public involvement in public school. The organization is made up of branches in every state and a statistic has shown that in 1993 its national membership totaled about 7 million in some 27000 local units and the number is increased year by year. This evidence lends the supports to the claim that parents and communities ought to be involved as the speaker contends.
Last, there is no substitute for a group of professional educators when coming into the importance of education. Educators are so experienced that they can easily tell which way is the most effective in learning that students would not go to the wrong way. Also, educators have abundant knowledge which could impart to their students, equipped them with more information. In addition, not only the knowledge but also some virtues like diligence, persistence, humility, politeness and so forth can students required from their teachers.
However，at the time parents, communities and educators exploit their advantages, they also bring about certain disadvantages which are sometimes hidden and overlooked. When care eventually becomes dotage, it's dangerous for students to form a bad habit of over depending on others. When so much darkness of society presented to the students, it will influences their judgments gradually. And if teachers at school are not that responsible, it will severely impede students' future.
In sum, education is something which can not be despised in any period of time. And raise a new generation is the biggest project in any countries. Therefore all members of society should be involved in the local schools as the speaker claims.（608 words）