thanks to YX， 让我有新的灵感 可以说成是顿悟吧

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TOPIC: ISSUE131 - "The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
自己看自己改 根据雨馨的评价来改

Art, a vivid reflection of daily life, is everywhere and at anytime at all times. It is a mirror to reflect reality, including unconsciously revealing the concealed ideas, and in the meantime, expose exposing impulses of the society unconsciously. Yet the major role lies in abstraction of explicit emotions and attitudes of folks.the society we live in.

Arts always serve as a tool to outlet
an outlet for one's inner feelings, usually outrageous and critical snarls, and it unconsciously represent the social hidden hidden social ideas and impulses. Many people suffer great pressure in a ever-smothering world, the speedy information high super-high way, the overwhelming all pervading news and media, the endless conferences and etc, making them suffocated and gutless to confront. Suffocating them under the weight of modern technology and a 24/7 lifestyle. By For various reasons, they cannot publicize their remonstrance aboveboard but psychologically need an approach to ventilate and catharsis, therefore, they choose art. We can come across many poses and cartoons embodied
embodying personal critiques and satirize
satire on blogs, as a popular way to speak out one's deep voice make one’s deep voice heard. In some degree, arts free people living in the "closed wall" which is limited and refrained by laws and morality. Sometimes, when people want to live an abandoned life but they know they cannot as it conflicts with legal system, and ultimately, they resort to arts. Many masterworks are a tacit resist to the laws and regulations of that time like the Volga Boatmen, the three musketeers, destiny.

However, sometimes arts are not true voice of artists, so it can hardly mirror hidden social thoughts. As we know, scads of myriads of epics, annals, paintings are tasks performed by artists but imposed and created by authorities. They may come into being just out of someone's ostentation or self-abortion, instead a spontaneous reflection of the world. Like the Great Wall, a stupendous art, people gaped at its grand and spectacular outlook, and give compliments to Emperor Qin consequently, envisioning Qin dynasty was prosperous and blooming. But the hard and needy life of pariahs may overshadowed by Great Wall.

But arts do have its potential use in logging and abstracting explicit social ideas, which consists of civilization. And its
and is conducive for human beings having a better master of themselves. From stone to bronze, followed by emerald, iron and steel and steam , it's an appreciable progress of human society, especially witnessing all these tools evacuated and showcased in a museum one by one. What's more, people begin to comment on the era by the arts belong to it. Experts draw conclusions of progress or stalemate of one time by analyzing its literature, music, paintings and etc. For instance, during the time of Renaissance, with the burst of idealisms and masterpieces, it stars in the galaxy of history as one of the fastest developing eras, in terms of art.

Art is a kind of tool, which can not only let off out one's voice and emotion, but also keep down the vicissitudes of one's era. Whether it nurtures the ability to reveal the hidden ideas and impulses cannot be answered absolutely. It lies in the attitudes, status, and capacity of the artist, and sometimes, other elements should be taken into consideration, like authorities, power, social status. But as a whole, art is a dispensable an indispensable force to promote human civilization marching forward.
p1 艺术可以反应社会暗含的冲动和想法，更主要用是对明显的想法的抽 。
p2 艺术可以让人们抒发情感hidden ideas，表现出对社会的不满
p3有时艺术不是真正的声音。能不能真实的反应还有待查证
p4 但是艺术可以记录生活和时代，通过一些直白的社会声音。（但不是只有艺术可以表示这些。还可以通过暴动。游行。交流来达到宣泄的效果）
p5它既可以宣泄也可以记录时代。能不能反映社会冲动是由多种因素决定。包括艺术家的能力，所处的地位，有没有人逼迫等等。

忘记了issue5.5中很重要的一点，就是后面的都想好了，在写前面的论点。上面每段几乎都是独立存在，没有任何关系。
更切合题意但不需要大改的提纲
P1 艺术对社会宣泄的重要性不可忽视，但不是所有的艺术都有此功能，而且除了艺术还有其他的手段。
P2 艺术确实是社会outlet inner feeling的一种途径
P3 但不是所有的艺术都可以反映出这种social ideas & impulses
P4 除了艺术还有其他的途径来showcase one’s feeling towards our society
P5 我们应该重视艺术，同时也要分辨艺术，更不能忽视其他的手段，从而更好的了解自己所处的社会。




ps其实自己一直都很懒 这几天更是不怎么想写 每天都是有人回帖 或是 老外回email 成为我写下去的动力。可能越是做不来的事情 就越是不想做吧 这估计就是人类的顽疾。

今天下午 看到yx的短消息。很感动，快要考试了，难得会有这么透彻的评价和改正。
我一直都知道自己作文怪怪的 所以131也放在这放了好久好久，不想改，确切的说是不会改。给了个小外看，人家说a little wierd, definitely.虽然后面加了个笑脸。我能说什么呢？不想背，不想看范文，心理还抱着无夏的“人要跟着自己的内心走”（as I paraphrase)

时间确实不多了，从反感 头疼 到渴望 捧着economist 看， 但看了却难得形成映射，哎，不费话了。写文去。。。

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https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1137110-1-1.html

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我刚才和组长聊了下，我感觉在作文的展开上做的很不好。比如说兴趣有助于研究，我就说：

兴趣有助于研究（把这句话尽量写得长些。。。），例如说爱迪生（例子再写长些），所以研究很大程度上取决于兴趣。

组长跟我聊了下，我最后做了个总结如下（还是兴趣有助于研究的例子）：

兴趣有助于研究：
1，从思想角度上，促进新的灵感产生。
2，从心态角度上，遇到困难时能更有勇气和信心解决它。
3，从执行力角度上，能给人动力以持之以恒。
然后举例，比如说：爱迪生就是一个很好的例子，XXX。
因此，兴趣促进了研究。

我一下子觉得好很多，但不知道对于这种问题你是怎么看的？想听听你的建议啊！