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发表于 2011-2-12 00:12:13 |只看该作者
Coincident with the development of the society is the growing awareness of the discussion that which is better for people to see the movie, in the cinema or at home. From my perspective, I strongly suggest that seeing movie in the cinema is the better one.

Basic to the place for the movie is the quality of the film. A recent investigation conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science demonstrates that in China three-quarter people consider the film itself is换成as会不会比较好 the most important factor for them to choose the movie. This statistic may manifest the phenomenon that the majority of people put the effects of the movie as the priority when making the decision of choosing the movie. It is clearly that the cinema could offer the觉得换成a... better effect for they have the high technical equipment for every parts of the movie such as the visual effects and the sound effects. For example, people are addicted by the wide screen of the cinema, which could amplify the visual effect of the movie so that it will make people feel exciting. Moreover, these effects could not be achieved in the home for the space issue and the high cost. Consequently, seeing movie at the cinema is definitely the better choice.

Not merely the movie itself, does the environment of the cinema also contribute greatly to the attracting people不懂语法是不是有点问题 to see the movie there. It is widely acknowledged that sharing the happiness with others especially with the stranger could enhance the happiness. It is amazing that the people直接people, 不懂干嘛要特指 who are strange around could laugh with you for the same plot of the movie. And this atmosphere could not be found at the home, even the movie is fantastic, there is no one to share the happiness. Also, we could make a lot of friends at the cinema for we could communicate with others about the film. Once, when I was waiting in the line for the ticket, I chat with the people in front of me, and he had a good sense of film and shared a couple of good movie which I never saw before. The experience like this could never happen at the home直接at home就行了
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Striking although the merit of seeing movie in the cinema, the advantage of home should never be ignored too if the price and freedom are taken into deliberation. Obviously, it will save a lot of money if people see the movie at home for the price of the DVD is much cheaper than the ticket of the cinema. Also, people could change do whatever they want, and do not worry about the accident such as the emergency call which could be regarded as inappropriate behavior.

In conclusion, although seeing movie at home could save money and have the freedom, the movie itself and the experience at the cinema are the things people really care about when they see the movie. The cinema is definitely the better choice.

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改好啦~
谢谢你给的意见哈,我写作文总是会啰嗦,也不知道为啥, 估计是文科生的通病吧。。。不止你一个人这样说了,一定注意改正~~
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发表于 2011-2-16 19:51:45 |只看该作者
今天放学很晚··不好意思···马上改完给你···你在群里面不?我好像不能上传文件的样子···能不能直接QQ传你?

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本帖最后由 shadowran 于 2011-2-16 20:29 编辑

没关系,给我看下大的结构和观点恰当不恰当就行,说说大概就好 71# sherry.l

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改完了··请见谅···麻烦留个QQ吧···我不能上传文件···

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