shadowran的作文本

luolnUID：2689004

0914修改好了

lynn27UID：2774627

daily作文的。

改好了哈。

shadowranUID：2864083

9.15 独立+综合

makeithappenUID：2585223

qingqingcao09UID：2620358

改好了，麻烦给我改一下
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1155390-1-1.html

shadowranUID：2864083

2.8独立

hdchangieUID：2402936

改好了

sun3mayUID：2574771

改好了。

shadowranUID：2864083

2.9 独立

WoYaoChiJiTuiUID：2850295

2.9 独立已改，请查收

shadowranUID：2864083

2.10独立

sun3mayUID：2574771

2.9独立
已改

静音UID：2893385

大风吹。UID：2992582

Coincident with the development of the society is the growing awareness of the discussion that is the environmental issue too complex for the individual to handle. From my perspective, I am firmly convinced that it is impossible for the individual to solve the environmental problem.

Basci to handling the problem is enough time. A recent investigation conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science demonstrates that in  China three-quarter environment problem must be handled consistently for at least a couple of years even more than ten years. This statistic may manifest the phenomenon that the majority of the environment issue could not be handled in the short time on account of the slow changing process of the environment. Thus it is impossible for the individual to keep on doing the same thing consistently without any rest. For example, the water issue should be work during the day and the night for the situation changing every day, and the peopl and the department who are dealing with this issue should send enough people to record the condition of the water so that they could have the way to handle the problem in the right way.来个段总结？？？

Not merely the amounts of time, does the environment issue also requires huge sums of money. 倒装很出彩。Obviously, the environmental issue 加个can?　only be handled by the professional person and this will cost a lot of money to hire them. In addition, certain equipment is necessary such as the track and the boat to carry the material. Consequently, the individual could not afford so much money, only the government or the company could deal with the problem financially.
我感觉主体段1和2分配有点不均匀。在第一个里面给了例子论证和数据论证。在第二个里面只是思辨。。。 第二个相对之下说服力不是那么足，

Striking although the individual could not pay enough time and money on the environmental issue, they could pay more attention to the daily behavior.这个让步做的很好。学习了。 For instance, when living near the river, it is 加个an???obligation for the individual to avoid throwing the rubbish into the river which could cause the serious problem such as affecting the food chain in the river and worsen the quality of the water.

In conclusion, although he individual could contribute to the subtle things in the daily life, it is hard for them to deal with the environment issue for they could not pay enough time and money on the environment issue.

shadowranUID：2864083

2.11 独立