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不好意思2.16的现在才改完哈,前段时间word文档用不了
Coincident with the development of thesociety is the growing of the discussion that students are more influenced fromtheir teachers rather than their friends. From my perspective, I am convincedthat it is friends that show more impacts. (我觉得这里可以概括一下自己的理由,为后面的展开做铺垫,仅仅是建议)
Basic to the influence is the time. A recentinvestigation conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science demonstrates that in Chinathree-quarter students spend their weekend with their friends. This statisticmay manifest the phenomenon that majority of students spent most their timewith their friends on account of the time spend at school and at weekend. Thus,students have more chances to talk with each other the news, gossips and thethoughts. While, on the contrary, only being at school can students meet theirteachers, and teachers could not take care of everyone at one time. For me,when I was in high school, I had the communication with my friends in the classto talk about the study, and shared news and gossip in the lunch time. Inaddition, we went out to have fun such playing football or having a trip at theweekend. Consequently, friends have more chance to show me their ideas and that makes me change. (How did those ideas change you?Try to make a example to support your view and make the essay more logical, isa predominant factor when your essay being graded.)
Not merely the time, does similarity offriends also exerts greatly on the influence. It is widely acknowledged thatpeople share more things with their friends than their teachers on theconsequence of the relationship. Students could talk with their friends anything they want such as the funny story and the feelings about some girls (虽然不清楚ETS会不会管,但这个不和谐的险还是别冒了吧- -). While, with their teachers,they normally just have the conversation about the study, at the same time, students have to watch out their behavior so that theywill not be punished(最好别举这样的例子,外国人无法理解中国变态的师生关系) which could never be happened with their friends. For example, whenI fell in love with a girl in my high school, I shared this thought with myfriends and they gave me several ideas to create the chance to show my feelingto her. But I won't share this with my teacher for as fora teacher, students should put all the attention on the study, having arelationship with a girl would definitely be denied. That is one of the reasonswhy I think friends give me more influences than my teachers.
Striking although the influences my friendsgive me, the influences form teachers should never be ignored too if the studyis taken into deliberation. Obviously, as a students(??单数还是复数), we should putstudy as priority, thus teachers affect us greatly for they could teach us the(some) useful things suchas the English and the math which will play a important role in thefuture test. |
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