Issue 38

闻风而动UID: 2659321

TOPIC: ISSUE38 - "In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books."
WORDS: 442
TIME: 00:42:15
DATE: 2010/8/22 17:44:00


Nowdays, televisions are taking a increasing important role by which we get
our information. More and more people choose watching televisions instead og reading books to learn much, as the author has argued. Admittedly, in my opinion, the innovation technology -----televisions have brought convinience and progress to our life. However, reading still has its own attractive character whose lastiong value is always drawing people's attention, even in the morden age.

Admittedly, the invention of television has brought mang different senses of sight and sound. TV shows are almost made by many people from many areas from actors to directors, who all apply their best subject information into the whole show. Therefore, watching television has become a nice entertaimence for us, by appreciating the collecting of all the workers' good ideas. Meanwhile, by watching television, we will exeperience what will never happen around us. Such as the Discovery Chanel, by television, it shows us the beautiful senery almost every corner in the world. We watch the vivid and realitic television to entertainment ourselves at home, without any more time and money.


Moreover, by watching television, we can trace with every event and relevant news anytime. Television makes it easy to get enough information everywhere in the world for us, leaving much time to get together all the news and make distinguishment for us. What is happening now? Open a television, and you can get it. In addition, there are almost all kinds of progremes at the same time in television, what can fulfill all different needs of individauls. So in a television, you can get everything that you want.

Whereas, reading is still a attrctive way to get information for us, because reading books can leave us time and places for imagination. Our imagination and creativity are fully expriced by reading a book. So someone has said what is discribed in a book is more beatiful than what we have watch in television. To be added, in my view, we can read a book anywhen and anywhere, such as when you are in a travel, waiting for somebody, taking bus, and even in the bathroom, while you cannot watch a television in many occasions. Taking the following into consideration, you can bring a book on the bed or in your bad to kill with the unintersting time, but not a television.

All in all, we can both watch television to entertaiment ouselves with the vivid picture and the moving carton, and read books to make deeper thinking anywhen and anywhere. None is more important than the other. It is just different ways that we can take to get useful information and learn more.
  
  

tdzb36UID: 2636681

我觉得LZ这篇文章基本平衡了issue提出的2种观点即“看电视与读书各有各的益处，但对2种观点列出的论据和论点有点不平衡，例如2-3一直在描述电视的好处，当人们读第四段读书的好处时，发现内容有些单薄了，我的建议是将2.3段整合一下，因为2段有重复的地方，不如将3段作为2段的例子来加以证明电视机的好处，还有就是关于读书的益处，LZ还要再动动脑筋，其他的不错.........