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每周安排:
项目周六周日周一周二周三周四周五
A写作   A写作   
I写作 I写作   I根据第一次批改自改
 
A互改



A互改

I互改

I互改第一次


I互改第二次
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精辟例子 每个组员每周上传1个(周六晚上9点半之前交到群论坛)
互改安排  

   
1,2,3,4分别代表第1轮,第2轮,第3轮,第4轮。
绿色字母代表批改作文的人蓝色代表被批改的人
比如,某次作文的批改方式为第二轮,即A批改D,E的文章,B批改E,F的文章,等等
大家认真批改作文 珍惜别人的劳动成果 批改着重逻辑与论证 是否具有说服力 语言能读得懂就不要太纠结了
小组成员:(本排序是按照组员加入小组顺序安排)

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A-贾柚子(组长) B-南南北北 C-JoeyLeD-im.castor
Jasperbox 6楼 moonandwind604 8楼 joeyle 7楼 gmc 4楼(地板)
E-iris F-Mr. Denial G-Wesley H-宇倩要长高.o
iris_orange 3楼(板凳) chandlerzz 9楼 lws343343 2楼(沙发) psystephanie 5楼
I-intermilan
J-飛翔K-小笨瓜

predemon 10楼albert199010 11楼迟到的男生 12楼

小组作业更新信息
项目 Issue作文 Argu作文
第15周 (1月9-1月15)
周日 Issue235
周二 Argument150
作文题目更新信息

第16周
Issue235:"Most people are taught that loyalty is a virtue. But loyalty—whether to one's friends, to one's school or place of employment, or to any institution—is all too often a destructive rather than a positive force."
Argu150:The following is a letter to the editor of an environmental magazine. “The decline in the numbers of amphibians worldwide clearly indicates the global pollution of water and air. Two studies of amphibians in YosemiteNational Park in California confirm my conclusion. In 1915 there were seven species of amphibians in the park, and there were abundant numbers of each species. However, in 1992 there were only four species of amphibians observed in the park, and the numbers of each species were drastically reduced. The decline in Yosemite has been blamed on the introduction of trout into the park's waters, which began in 1920 (trout are known to eat amphibian eggs). But the introduction of trout cannot be the real reason for the Yosemite decline because it does not explain the worldwide decline."
第15周
Issue28:"Students should memorize facts only after they have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts. Students who have learned only facts have learned very little."
Argu147:The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine. “Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey asked video-game players what features they thought were most important in a video game. According to the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers. Whirlwind has just introduced several such games with an extensive advertising campaign directed at people 10 to 25 years old, the age-group most likely to play video games. It follows, then, that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically in the next few months."
第14周
Issue170:"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."
Argu162: A recent study shows that people living on the continent of North America suffer 9 times more chronic fatigue and 31 times more chronic depression than do people living on the continent of Asia. Interestingly, Asians, on average, eat 20 grams of soy per day, whereas North Americans eat virtually none. It turns out that soy contains phytochemicals called isoflavones, which have been found to possess disease–preventing properties. Thus, North Americans should consider eating soy on a regular basis as a way of preventing fatigue and depression.
第13周
Issue99:"In any realm of life—whether academic, social, business, or political—the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."
Argu207:It is known that in recent years, industrial pollution has caused the Earth's ozone layer to thin, allowing an increase in the amount of ultraviolet radiation that reaches the Earth's surface. At the same time, scientists have discovered, the population of a species of salamander that lays its eggs in mountain lakes has declined. Since ultraviolet radiation is known to be damaging to delicate tissues and since salamander eggs have no protective shells, it must be the case that the increase in ultraviolet radiation has damaged many salamander eggs and prevented them from hatching. This process will no doubt cause population declines in other species, just as it has in the salamander species.
第12周
Issue11:"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
Argu76:The following appeared as part of an article in a health and beauty magazine. “A group of volunteers participated in a study of consumer responses to the new Luxess face cream. Every morning for a month, they washed their faces with mild soap and then applied Luxess. At the end of that month, most volunteers reported a marked improvement in the way their skin looked and felt. Thus it appears that Luxess is truly effective in improving the condition of facial skin."
第9周
Issue25
"Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction—in other words, to make things as simple as possible."

Argument14
The following appeared in a memo from the owner of Green Thumb Gardening Center, a small business serving a suburban town. “There is evidence that consumers are becoming more and more interested in growing their own vegetables. A national survey conducted last month indicated that many consumers were dissatisfied with the quality of fresh vegetables available in supermarkets. And locally, the gardening magazine GreatGardens has sold out at the Village News stand three months in a row. Thus, we at Green Thumb Gardening Center can increase our profits by greatly expanding the variety of vegetable seeds we stock for gardeners this coming spring."

第8周 Come On!
Issue103:"The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
or
Issue112:"Some educational systems emphasize the development of students' capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, but students would benefit more from an education that also taught them to explore their own emotions."

Argu37:Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been unique to the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a 'Palean' basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the BrimRiver from Palea. The BrimRiver is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could only have crossed it by boat, but there is no evidence that the Paleans had boats. And boats capable of carrying groups of people and cargo were not developed until thousands of years after the Palean people disappeared. Moreover, Paleans would have had no need to cross the river — the woods around Palea are full of nuts, berries, and small game. It follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not unique to Palea.
Issue208:"The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
or
Issue28:"Students should memorize facts only after they have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts. Students who have learned only facts have learned very little."

第7周
Issue144 "It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
or
Issue136  "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."

Argument209:The following recommendation was made by the Human Resources Manager to the board of directors of the Fancy Toy Company. “In the last three quarters of this year, under the leadership of our president, Pat Salvo, our profits have fallen considerably. Thus, we should ask for her resignation in return for a generous severance package. In Pat's place, we should appoint Rosa Winnings. Rosa is currently president of Starlight Jewelry, a company whose profits have increased dramatically over the past several years. Although we will have to pay Rosa twice the salary that Pat has been receiving, it will be well worth it because we can soon expect our profits to increase considerably."
Issue69"Government should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development"
or
Issue203 "The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines."
第6周
Issue131 "The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
or
Issue94 (教育类)"Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study because acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated."

Argument 237 The following appeared as part of an article in a local Beauville newspaper. “According to a government report, last year the city of Dillton reduced its corporate tax rate by 15 percent; at the same time, it began offering relocation grants and favorable rates on city utilities to any company that would relocate to Dillton. Within 18 months, two manufacturing companies moved to Dillton, where they employ a total of 300 people. Therefore, the fastest way for Beauville to stimulate economic development and hence reduce unemployment is to provide tax incentives and other financial inducements that encourage private companies to relocate here."
Issue88 "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."
or
Issue235(行为类) "Most people are taught that loyalty is a virtue. But loyalty—whether to one's friends, to one's school or place of employment, or to any institution—is all too often a destructive rather than a positive force."

第5周
Issue40: "Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."
Issue43: "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."
Argument35: The following appeared in the summary of a study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia. “Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates, for the past several decades food-processing companies have also been adding salicylates to foods as preservatives. This rise in the commercial use of salicylates has been found to correlate with a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by participants in our twenty-year study. Recently, food-processing companies have found that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for foods. With this new use for salicylates, we can expect a continued steady decline in the number of headaches suffered by the average citizen of Mentia."
第4周
Issue17:"There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
Issue51:"Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."
Argument233:The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a company that builds shopping malls throughout the country. “The surface of a section of Route 101, paved two years ago by McAdam Road Builders, is now badly cracked and marred by dangerous potholes. In another part of the state, a section of Route 66, paved by Appian Roadways more than four years ago, is still in good condition. Appian Roadways has recently purchased state-of-the-art paving machinery, and it has hired a new quality-control manager. Because of its superior work and commitment to quality, we should contract with Appian Roadways rather than McAdam Road Builders to construct the access roads for all our new shopping malls."
第三周
Issue147:"Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
Issue56:"Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."
Argu10:The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a Batavia newspaper. “The department of agriculture in Batavia reports that the number of dairy farms throughout the country is now 25 percent greater than it was 10 years ago. During this same time period, however, the price of milk at the local Excello Food Market has increased from $1.50 to over $3.00 per gallon. To prevent farmers from continuing to receive excessive profits on an apparently increased supply of milk, the Batavia government should begin to regulate retail milk prices. Such regulation is necessary to ensure both lower prices and an adequate supply of milk for consumers."
第一周
Issue120:"So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."
Issue70:"In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership."
Argu 15:The following appeared in a newsletter offering advice to investors. “Over 80 percent of the respondents to a recent survey indicated a desire to reduce their intake of foods containing fats and cholesterol, and today low-fat products abound in many food stores. Since many of the food products currently marketed by Old Dairy Industries are high in fat and cholesterol, the company's sales are likely to diminish greatly and their profits will no doubt decrease. We therefore advise Old Dairy stockholders to sell their shares and other investors not to purchase stock in this company."
第二周
Issue207:"Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies or groups of people have a diminished sense of who they are."
Issue184    "It is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data."
Argu 9:The following appeared in a memorandum from a dean at Omega University. “Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by thirty percent. Potential employers apparently believe the grades at Omega are inflated; this would explain why Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should now terminate student evaluation of professors."



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组长及副组义务
组长和副组负责管理作业帖和队内工作,目前任命的组长是临时性的,表现好的组长可以连任,表现不好的自动让贤,其他人可以推荐或自荐。
组员义务
按时完成作业,认真修改小组成员的文章,你不但会换得他人对你文章的认真态度,而且可以在互改中获得巨大的进步。大家建组就是为了改掉惰性相互监督相互鼓励,所以希望组员能够以诚相待    联系方式: Q群
小组计划

阶段一:持续时间:五周(每周写2篇issue,5篇提纲,1篇Argu,4篇提纲)

注意:
1.未经特殊说明的,当天任务都是在当天晚上9点半上传到相应页面。
2.提纲是强制的,请根据自己情况挑选题目(鼓励多写)提纲应按高频100到高频20的顺序写,原则是写没有思路的题目的提纲。有余力者也可以写低频提纲。
3.每次互改之后习作作者都应将文章自改后上传(自改后的文章上传期限为当周周日晚9点半前) 。
4.每周一和周五布置Issue题目。每周三布置Argu题目。(题目会在小组大贴更新)
5.每周两次组会,地点Q群,内容为讨论作文,提纲以及布置小组活动。时间均为9:30到11:00,不接受无故请假,若有考试之类的事情,请提前1天向组长提出申请。
6.没有组会的晚上9:30到11:00讨论提纲分析题目,地点Q群。此为非强制讨论。讨论内容为写作中遇到的疑问。
7.请大家按时完成自己的作业并且按时改对方的作业
积累3次不交作业者自动退出~~特别是不交不改的人,会秧及队友没人改,使别人花半天时间写的人没人改~~整得小组无法运行,如果不能保证完成写作和改作文的同学请退出
[留学之路何其艰辛,如果连这种障碍都不能克服的话,出国留学也就成了白日梦了]
作业没按时完成不需要补,因为补了也没人改,等于白交
以后实在写不完作文的,也一定要吧别人的改了----请尊重别人的劳动成果!
8.比较早考作文的成员有义务在考完之后仍然承担作文互改以及分享ECO.摘录(标出好句子,结构,以及文章亮点以供学习)的任务。至于为什么就不用说了。
[
作业要求及格式]

A.作文互改:

1.改作文本着认真负责的态度,一定不要敷衍了事,毕竟这是别人辛辛苦苦写出来的文章。(如果的确时间紧张可以等稍微空闲的时候认真细读再修改,但最迟要在当周周日晚9点半前提交!),组长会不定时检查。
2.每人每次改两个人的文章。会有详细的配对安排,按照配对的安排互改,当然在完成自己的互改任务后可以该其他人的,从改别人作文的过程中我们也会发现别人的长处,从而学习加以提高自己的水平。组员作文互改的轮回方式见
附表
3.每个队友在
GTER独立开帖发布其习作,标题后说明属于哪个小组,并将地址链到小组大帖前几楼自己的题目链接帖中,便于组员查找。队员先自行修改拼写和基本语法错误后再上传。
全文作业内容包括:  
Issue题号,题目;
文章字数,用时(请如实汇报) [ 对于以前没写过Issue的成员,前面几篇可不限时(须注明),待积累了一定写作经验后,再经行限时 ];
中文提纲(请写在文章开头,方便大家讨论修改);
正文(各段之间空一行);
4.怎样修改别人的文章https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=161267


每个人都有他的路,每条路都是正确的,我想,现在有50亿人就有50亿条正确的路.人的不幸在与他们不想走自己的那条路,总想走别人的路

----托马斯·伯恩哈德

现在开始,就让我们不畏困难,互相鼓励,互相帮组,勇敢地去走属于我们自己的GRE之路,留学之路。因为我们不愿安于现状,不愿人云亦云,我们要走出属于我们自己的奇迹,创造别人无法取代的价值!
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本帖最后由 lws343343 于 2010-11-14 21:08 编辑

issue:
第一周
Issue120-1106柚子作文小组-0926-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1160864-1-1.html
Issue70-1106柚子作文小组-0930-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1162966-1-1.html
第二周
Issue207-1106柚子作文小组-1003-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1164159-1-1.html
Issue184-1106柚子作文小组-1007-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1165677-1-1.html
第三周
Issue147-1106柚子作文小组-1010-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1167197-1-1.html
Issue56 -1106柚子作文小组-1014-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168965-1-1.html
第四周
Issue17-1106柚子作文小组-1017-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1170381-1-1.html
Issue51-1106柚子作文小组-1021-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1172436-1-1.html
第五周
Issue40-1106柚子作文小组-1024-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1174156-1-1.html
Issue43-1106柚子作文小组-1028-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1176695-1-1.html
第六周
Issue94-1106柚子作文小组-1031-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1178897-1-1.html
Issue88-1106柚子作文小组-1102-G-Wesley(科技影响传统)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1179858-1-1.html
Issue235-1106柚子作文小组-1102-G-Wesley(毁灭式的忠诚)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1179861-1-1.html
Issue131-1106柚子作文小组-1105-G-Wesley(艺术展示思想和冲动)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1181324-1-1.html
第八周
Issue103-1106柚子作文小组-1114-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1185889-1-1.html


Argument:
第一周
Argument15-1106柚子作文小组-0928-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1161989-1-1.html
第二周
Argument09-1106柚子作文小组-1005-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1164913-1-1.html
06/10/2010:Argument227-1106柚子作文小组-欢迎拍砖-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1165290-1-1.html
第三周
Argument10-1106柚子作文小组-1012-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168179-1-1.html
第四周
Argument223 -1106柚子作文小组-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1171431-1-1.html
第五周
Argument35 -1106柚子作文小组-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1174748-1-1.html
第六周
Argument237 -1106柚子作文小组-1102-G-Wesley
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1179774-1-1.html


11月杀G
Issue136-1106柚子作文小组-xxxx-G-Wesley (Absence of choice)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1171164-1-1.html
Issue138-1106柚子作文小组-xxxx-G-Wesley (错误是成功的妈妈)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1172418-1-1.html
Issue159-1106柚子作文小组-xxxx-G-Wesley (人脑与机器)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1173702-1-1.html
Issue170-1106柚子作文小组-1025-G-Wesley(判断国家greatness的标准)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1174844-1-1.html
10.26.Issue8-1106柚子作文小组-1026-G-Wesley(political leader withhold information)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1175425-1-1.html
10.27.Issue7-1106柚子作文小组-1026-G-Wesley(Video Camera)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1176186-1-1.html
10.29.Issue28-1106柚子作文小组-1029-G-Wesley(记住事实还是背后的趋势想法)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1177752-1-1.html
11.02.Issue130-1106柚子作文小组-1102-G-Wesley(孩子的社会化)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1179834-1-1.html
11.03.Issue11-1106柚子作文小组-1103-G-Wesley(世界大学)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1180659-1-1.html
11.04.Issue11-1106柚子作文小组-1104-G-Wesley(着装=社会价值?)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1180798-1-1.html
11.5.Issue176-1106柚子作文小组-1104-G-Wesley(科学为了消除艺术为了挑衅)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1181321-1-1.html


Issue提纲(171,210)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1160921-1-1.html
第二周Issue提纲:(43,69,144,212,235)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1164171-1-1.html
argument 提纲(200,201,202)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1160907-1-1.html
第二周Argument提纲:(207,208,209,210,217,218,227,232,233,237)
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1164172-1-1.html

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Issue作文
第一周 120
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1160975-1-1.html
第一周 70
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1162933&extra=
第二周 207
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1164216&extra=
第二周 184
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1165704&extra=
第三周 147
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1167268&extra=
第三周 56
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1169061&extra=
第四周 17
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1170413&extra=
第四周 51
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1173096&extra=
第五周 40
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1173887&extra=
第五周 43
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1177391&extra=
第六周 94
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179029&extra=
第六周 235
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1181511&extra=
第八周 112
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1185810&extra=
第八周 28
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1188237&extra=
第九周 25
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1190035-1-1.html
第十周 212
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1196046&extra=

Argument作文
第一周 15
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1161985-1-1.html
第二周 09
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1165014&extra=
第三周 10
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1774426357
第四周233
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1774446172
第五周 35
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1176204&extra=
第六周 237
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179952&extra=
第八周 37
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1187655&extra=
第九周 14
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1191811&extra=

issue提纲
65 107 130
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1163365&extra=

Argument提纲
第一周 2   31   34   45    99
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1163370&extra=
第二周 127  133  156  178
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1774418790

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issue:
第一周Issue120-1106柚子作文小组-0926-D-Castor

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1161199&extra=
第一周Issue70-1106柚子作文小组-0930-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1162956&extra=
第二周 Issue207-1106柚子作文小组-1003-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1164308&extra=
第二周 Issue184-1106柚子作文小组-1007-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1165972&extra=
第三周 Issue147-1106柚子作文小组-1010-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1167411-1-1.html
第三周 Issue56 -1106柚子作文小组-1014-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1169117&extra=
第四周 Issue17 -1106柚子作文小组-1017-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1170480&extra=
第四周 Issue51 -1106柚子作文小组-1021-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1172681&extra=
第五周 Issue40 -1106柚子作文小组-1024-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1174468&extra=
第六周 Issue235 -1106柚子作文小组-1105-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1181556&extra=
第七周 Issue136 -1106柚子作文小组-1108-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1182979&extra=
第七周 Issue69 -1106柚子作文小组-1111-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1184407&extra=
第八周 Issue208 -1106柚子作文小组-1118-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1188345&extra=
第九周 Issue25 -1106柚子作文小组-1122-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1190964&extra=
第十周 Issue212 -1106柚子作文小组-1129-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1196032&extra=


argument:
Argu15-1106柚子作文小组-0928-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1161994&extra=
Argu09-1106柚子作文小组-1005-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1165045&extra=
第三周 Argu10-1106柚子作文小组-1010-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168184-1-1.html
第四周 Argu233-1106柚子作文小组-1019-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1171501&extra=
第六周 Argu237-1106柚子作文小组-1103-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1180503&extra=
第七周 Argu209-1106柚子作文小组-1109-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1183465&extra=
第八周 Argu37-1106柚子作文小组-1116-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1187102-1-1.html
第九周 Argu14-1106柚子作文小组-1116-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1193008&extra=
第十周 Argu238-1106柚子作文小组-1201-D-Castor
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1197206&extra=

issue & argument提綱:
第一周-提纲-1106柚子作文小组-D-Castor
ISSUE:130 50 48 153 208     ARGUMENT: 127
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1161202&extra=

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issue:
第一周Issue120-1106柚子作文小组-0926-H
  
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1160783-1-1.html
第一周Issue70-1106柚子作文小組-0930-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1162919-1-1.html
第二周Issue207-1106-柚子作文小組-1002-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1164078-1-1.html
第二周 Issue184-1106柚子作文小組-1007-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1165686-1-1.html
第三周 Issue147-1106柚子作文小組-1010-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1167104-1-1.html
第三周 Issue56-1106柚子作文小組-1014-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168597-1-1.html
第四周 Issue17-1106柚子作文小组-1017-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1169916-1-1.html
第四周 Issue51-1106柚子作文小组-1021-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1171830-1-1.html
第五周 Issue40-1106柚子作文小组-1024-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1174238-1-1.html
第五周 Issue43-1106柚子作文小组-1028-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1177002-1-1.html
第八周 Issue112-1106柚子作文小組-1115-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1186483-1-1.html
第八周 Issue28-1106柚子作文小組-1118-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1188229-1-1.html
第九周 Issue25-1106柚子作文小組-1121-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1189631-1-1.html
argument:
第一周argu15-1106柚子作文小組-0928-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1161936-1-1.html
第二周argu9-1106柚子作文小組-1005-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1164538-1-1.html
第三周argu10-1106柚子作文小組-1012-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168029-1-1.html
第四周 argu233-1106柚子作文小组-1019-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1171381-1-1.html
第五周 argu35-1106柚子作文小组-1026-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1175501-1-1.html
第八周 argu37-1106柚子作文小組-1116-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1187035-1-1.html
第九周 argu14-1106柚子作文小組-1123-H
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1191867-1-1.html

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Jasper的作业贴

本帖最后由 Jasperbox 于 2010-11-21 23:24 编辑

Issue
第一周 Issue120:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1160789-1-1.html
第一周 Issue70:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1162879-1-1.html
第二周 Issue207:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1164193-1-1.html
第二周 Issue184:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1165715-1-1.html
第三周 Issue147:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1167230-1-1.html
第三周 Issue56:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168969-1-1.html
第四周 Issue17:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1170348-1-1.html
第四周 Issue51:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1172529-1-1.html

第五周 Issue40:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1174261-1-1.html
第五周 Issue43:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1176950-1-1.html
第六周 Issue94:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1178868-1-1.html
第六周 Issue235:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1180918-1-1.html
第七周 Issue136:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1182442-1-1.html
第七周 Issue203:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1184285-1-1.html
第八周 Issue112:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1185885-1-1.html
第八周 Issue28:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1188277-1-1.html
第九周 Issue25:  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1190013-1-1.html




Argu:
第一周 Argu015: https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1161884-1-1.html
第二周 Argu009: https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1164972-1-1.html
第三周 Argu010: https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168124-1-1.html
第四周 Argu233: https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1171417-1-1.html
第五周 Argu35:   https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1175371-1-1.html
第六周 Argu237: https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1179928-1-1.html
第七周 Argu209: https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1183308-1-1.html
第八周 Argu37:   https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1187048-1-1.html




Issue提纲:
第一周: 221  54  139  125  81
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1161493-1-1.html


Argu提纲:

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C-JOEYLE

本帖最后由 joeyle 于 2010-11-15 20:36 编辑

ISSUE
第一周 Issue120https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1160998-1-1.html
第一周 Issue70 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1162883&extra=
第二周 Issue https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1164191&extra=
第二周 Issue184 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1165841-1-1.html
第三周 Issue147 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1167328&extra=
第三周 Issue56 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168998-1-1.html
第四周 Issue17 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1169892&extra=
第四周 Issue51 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1172505&extra=
第五周 Issue40 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1173747&extra=
第五周 Issue43 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1176837&extra=
第六周 Issue131 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1178958&extra=
第六周 Issue88 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1181827&extra=
第七周 Issue136 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1182326&extra=
第七周 Issue203 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1184302&extra=
第八周 Issue103 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1185843&extra=
第八周 Issue208 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1186439&extra=
ARGU
第一周 Argu015https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1161952-1-1.html
第二周 Auge9 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1165004&extra=
第三周 Argu10 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1168181&extra=
第四周 Argu233 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1171379&extra=
第五周 Argu35 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1175480&extra=
第六周 Argu237 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179781&extra=
第七周 Argu209 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1183650&extra=
第八周 Argu37 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1186440&extra=
ISSUE&ARGU提纲
第一周Issue(130 50 48 153 208)&Argument(51 53 203 7 45)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1162505&extra=

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B-南南北北

本帖最后由 moonandwind604 于 2010-11-23 21:41 编辑

ISSUE:
第一周I1(120)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1160993&page=1&extra=
第一周I2(70)
https://bbs.gter.net/redirect.php?tid=1162979&goto=lastpost#lastpost
第二周I1(207)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1164096&extra=
第二周I2(184)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1165646&extra=
第三周I1(147)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1160980&page=1&extra=
第三周I2(56) https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1169008&extra=
第四周I1(17) https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1170248&extra=
第四周I2(51)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1172691&extra=
第五周I1(40) https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1174374&extra=
第五周I2(43)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1176105&extra=
第六周I1(94) https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179038&extra=
第六周I2(88)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1180911&extra=
第七周I1(144)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1182481&extra=
第七周I2(69)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1184111&extra=
第八周I1(112)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1186452&extra=
第八周I2(208)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1188364&extra=
第九周I(25)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1190029&extra=



ARGU:
第一周(15)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1162290&extra=
第二周(9)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1164962&extra=
第三周(10)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1167891&extra=
第四周(233)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1171334&extra=
第五周(35)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1175601&extra=
第六周(237)https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1179881-1-1.html
第七周(209)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1183829&extra=
第八周(37)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1187468&extra=
第九周(14)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1191802&extra=



ISSUE提纲:
第一周(41,61,76,185)171重复https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1162295&extra=
第二周(173,93,165)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1163264&extra=

ARGU提纲:
第一周(127,133,156,178)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1162299&extra=
第二周(222)https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1163266&extra=

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本帖最后由 predemon 于 2010-11-16 21:37 编辑

卯足了劲 占个座
Issue
第一周 Issue120:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1160988-1-1.html
第一周 Issue70:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1162912-1-1.html
第二周 Issue207:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1164139-1-2.html
第二周 Issue184:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1165906-1-1.html
第三周 Issue147:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1167282-1-1.html
第三周 Issue56:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168964-1-1.html
第四周 Issue17:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1170394-1-1.html
第四周 Issue51:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1172634-1-1.html
第五周 issue40:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1174303-1-1.html
第五周 issue43:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1174860-1-1.html
第六周 issue131:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1179088-1-1.html
第七周 issue144:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1182730-1-1.html
第八周 issue103:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1186147-1-1.html
Argu:
第一周 argument15: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1161996&extra=
第二周 argument9: https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1165268-1-1.html
第三周 argument10:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1168473-1-1.html
第四周 argument233:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1171337-1-1.html
第五周 argument35:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1175500-1-1.html
第六周 argument237:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1180102-1-1.html
第八周 argument37:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1187011-1-1.html
issue杀鸡
第五周 issue73:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1176233-1-1.html(想象力与知识重要性比较)
第五周 issue112:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1178476-1-1.html (逻辑思维与自我情感的比较)

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本帖最后由 albert199010 于 2010-11-16 23:06 编辑


J-飞翔

吾来也…………大家好:handshake 顺便找几个GF,呵呵,好邪恶~~

Issue
第一周 Issue120:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1161007&extra=
第一周 Issue70:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1162914&extra=
第二周 Issue207:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1164198&extra=
第二周 Issue184:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1165617&extra=
第三周 Issue147:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1167125&extra=
第三周 Issue56:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1168825&extra=
第四周 Issue17:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1170367&extra=
第四周 Issue51:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1172387&extra=
第五周 Issue40:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1174367&extra=
第五周 Issue43:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1176959&extra=
第六周 Issue131:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1178728&extra=
第六周 Issue88:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179026&extra=
第六周 Issue94: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179944&extra=
第六周 Issue235: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179951&extra=
第七周 Issue136:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1181019&extra=
第七周 Issue144: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1182490&extra=
第七周 Issue69:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1183440&extra=
第七周 Issue203:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1183441&extra=
第八周 Issue103:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1185846&extra=

Argu:
第一周 Argument15: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1161414&;extra=
第二周 Argument9: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1164894&extra=
第三周 Argument10: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1168121&extra=
第四周 Argument233:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1171340&extra=
第五周 Argument35:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1175477&extra=
第六周 argument 237: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1178733&extra=
第七周 Argument209:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179967&extra=
第八周 Argument37: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1187054&extra=


11月蛋疼/乳酸:
Issue 8: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1175511&;extra=
Issue 11: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1178360&extra=

Argument209: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179967&extra=
Argument51: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1179966&extra=
Issue 212: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1181017&extra=
Issue 136: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1181019&extra=
Issue 99:  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1182491&extra=



Issue提纲
第一周 I:89、143、195、196:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1161876-1-1.html

Argu提纲
第一周 A:169、76、34、9: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1161864&extra=

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