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看来LS也喜欢小艾啊 哈哈，，

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It is a burning issue that if one's working is more significant than being with one's family. Some people hold the view that they are supposed to spend more time on their work since it is the most effective approach to achieve their ambitions. So they scarify their family life without hesitation. But a coin has two sides. Others strongly disagree with this point and they are concurring that family has higher status in their minds so that they can stopping work at any time if their family members have a problem. It is seems that people have a lot of controversies toward this question. If you ask me, however, I will not make a choice as both of them cannot be taken out of my life forever.

First and foremost, no matter what occupations people have, they should devote to it thoroughly. On the one hand, only by applying themselves to work within tremendous enthusiasm, can people reach the peak of careers. For instance, Edison, one of the most distinguished inventors in the world, is a man of perseverance. He was crazy about inventing astonishing equipment and makes a big difference in many fields. What makes he so preeminent is that he fell in love with his job and contribute him on it. In order to found out the best material for electric lamps, he even tried more than one thousand stuff and took a plethora of experiments. Finally, as you can imagine, electric lamps came into being and he started a completely new age for human. Therefore, people’s working is not only critical to them but even to the whole society.
On the other hand, we are responsible to our family so we must make a large number of money which can lead a splendid life through becoming hard-working. Without working, there does not existing happiness in one's family life. Consequently, we can absolutely not give up our careers eerily.

In addition, a family is to us what a harbor to boats. Whenever we feel down or upset, families are never leaving us. They accompany us when loneliness falls; they protect us from attack by rivals. Those individuals who possess a harmonious family that provides them with supports in the career are more likely to make a remarkable achievement. Also, families need our love. We should do our best to shelter them, spend more time with them and bring them a wide variety of joy. When we are time-honored, what we need is just a quiet and peaceful family life instead of fame and wealth. If you lose it, you lose everything of your life.

One's working and family never separate away from each other since there are impartible connections between them. There is no doubt that both of them are the most indispensable to us.

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Sports are popularize accompany with the development of human society. The origin of sports could back to the ancient Greece or even earlier. People at that time view sports as part of life, which are indispensable just like learning for surviving better. In the modern society, the definition of sports is not just for survive but more richness. Those individuals who are accomplished in sports that provide them a plethora of profound sights of life are more likely to be esteemed. For the reason that sports can not only build our strength, but also teach us lessons about life. Then I will state several reasons and examples for that.( z) a; Q, `% @4 k+ C0 O; M


First and foremost, we have a chance to receive something beyond your expectation through sports. (On the one hand,此要用in addition) we could gain splendid characteristics such as perseverance. For example, I once joined a marathon in order to inspire myself in rough life. There was so many times that I wanted to quitted, but finally I finished. After such a long and arduous journey, I got a feeling that there was nothing can stopped me since I gained perseverance. On the other hand, sports enrich my social life, because I can have chances to make new friends and keep strong friendship with my teammates through the matches.


Sequentially, people who are addicted to sports undoubtedly have a role model who possesses a wide variety of advantages or positive attitudes toward life that encourage you to overcome different kinds of frustrations. Take myself for instance; I used to adore an NBA star, Iverson. He was born in a slum but became one of the most outstanding basketball players. When I wanted to give up, I always reminded his history of struggle which tells never give up easily. Actually, what I mean that as long as you know the spirits of the sports, even though you are not the most talented, you can also enjoy a meaningful life.( ?2 i- a& X  K# M" w' z% G


Ultimately, only by exercising, can we found beauties and happiness around us easily. When we exercise, our bodies would present magnificent sharps and our mood would be pleased by the joy of sports. It is known to us that sports facilitate our health and make us look younger magically so that no matter what situation we are in, we always have an optimistic attitude toward life and always love tithe most significant lesson that sports teach us, I suppose, is that we must enjoy our life, family, friends and other consequential elements we cherish and never give up them.' `( y- s+ P" f! D% w0 W0 U


Sports to us what water to fish. According to my understanding, sports teach people how to deal with life. All of us will receive a most unforgettable lesson from sports in our lifetime.
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