20101009独立作文修改 by lovelgb

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Movie isthe inter medium which expresses the hidden content or thought to the audience.Deep thinking and entertainment are the two continuums of the movie genres, theformer induces the删掉吧
people tocontemplate, the latter appeases the public. As to which one is preferable, Ithink highly of the former one（替换为serious movie）
because the serious movie（替换为it） can tell us right from wrong, alert thesecular to keep conscious and broaden our horizon.（首段表明立场的时候，清楚最为重要，所以做了一些替换。并且，我很少看见首段就把所有理由段都捎带提过的，这种做法我不能确定）
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To begin with, serious movies can tell us rightfrom wrong. These movies emphatically advocate the justice and castigate theevil so that they can help pass the ancestor’s lofty flag to his or heroffspring. Our generation has never suffered less than our forefathers, but wecan still touch the soul of Schindler’s list. The 6 million jury(jews,犹太人吧)were prosecuted in the holocaust. This catastrophe is well expressed by blackand white scene contrast （that？？）when a girl with a red flower come（came） into the camp, and then she is（was） shot, the corpse was carriedby the wagon and the red flower wasstill within her hands,（.） we can’t never tell whether this flower isred or the blood tints. (本句话的语法结构，我似乎没明白，改的只是代表我的一些想法，还望不吝赐教)Anyhow the justice exist forever, it istouching that the once greedy (似乎不太合理)merchant Schindler who had everbeen greedy are(were)willing to devote all his possession to save 2,000 jury. This movie got highestacclaim all over the world due to its honest depiction of the dark time andtelling us right from wrong.
（在讲述电影情节的时候是否应该使用过去式啊？）

Meanwhile, the serious movies can alert thesecular to keep conscious, and never to infringe the boundary of the humanity.Human beings should honor the environment and the otherspecies, and live harmoniously within the community. The Avatarreally makes us eye-opening, it（it指代什么呀，可以用被动时态Pandora’s Box was open） opens the Pandora’s Box and lead us totravel in an adventurous planet. While when the avarice rival the humanity toexploit the wealth, the earth set off machines to conquer the aborigines, thehistory repeats again when the colonist found the new world centuries ago, andkilled all the local people which were the last translator to the Mayacivilization. Fortunately, the Pandora’s creatures defeat the human to avoidplight again.


Last but not least, the serious movies can alsobroaden our horizon. These movies are exquisitely directed with systematicscope and encyclopedia content. The BBC documentary of planet earth can beranked into such movies. These movies impart the public the real living worldfrom the largest northern forest Taiga tundra to the most splendid volcanoeruption. People are stunned by such engaging pictures, some of them may neverrealize our planet so beautiful and miraculous until such movies come to us.1 \: U5 Z' ]. |# x$ Y*
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In sum, I totally agree that it is better toappreciate the meaningful movie than the entertainment movies. The good moviesare good friends and amiable teacher who can enlighten our wisdom,purify our soul, stimulate our imagination and impartthe knowledge.

作者的用词很厉害，但是，感觉作文模板不够抢眼。还有，如果理由段之间能够建立更加紧密的逻辑关系是最好了。
因为我本身水平有限，如有不妥之处，敬请原谅。