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Under such a material society, people often judge others by their money. In their opinion, money are the symbol of one’s life and represent how much they have got. There are always phenomenons that people will look down upon the poor citizens living in poverity. But from my perspective, people can succeed in numerous fields not only in economic, but also in friends, interests. We can judge a person success because they have many close friends, or they achieve a dream which will not provide money, but will provide the enthusiatism.

First of all, people’s success can not be limited in money these superfacial aspects. Most people are successful but having no money and even living without enough food. For instance, Max, the famous man who developed our society system and tell humanity the future goals of our society. However, he was so poor and can not afford enough food, and relied himself on his best friend, Engles. Almost all the humen claim that he succeed, but he was the poorest in that time. He proved that people can make a judgement if the man was successful by his fortune. The success which influenced all the humen often by the scientists, politicians who can made contributions to a country’s path, a world’ improvement.

Additionally, people who have a considerable wealth are usually not successful. I have heard a research that the rich men status have a twice number of people who get mental illnesses which means that they are always not happy and comfortable. Obviously, individuals who become rich must be industrious and deligent at their work and under remarkable pressure. The bosses of corperations will be afraid of the competetion from other strong companies. Comparing the bosses the workers, people we think are not successful, just work in a comfortable evironment, live in a easy life, and achieve a human’s life goal-being happy and have a blissful family. I am convinced that those workers succeed in their life.

Furthermore, the wealth also indicates people’s perseverance in their life resulting in the situation that people can not earn a plenty of money without efforts. The people who in charge of enormous companies almost have a hard experience fighting for their purpose. However, this is a minor determination of success comparing to other fields which make a progress of humanity and their interests in a life long process.

Summarizing the points above, people are more successful due to their contributions to societies, their dreams, their recoginition of happiness. Individuals can not determine which one succeed just by that simple idea, the rich men are more successful.

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Under such a heavy pressure, people will always hear the news which talks about the dangers of humanity because of the depleted energy. Governments all over the world are worrying about the issue that the energy will be used up and thinking of a approach to rescuing human beings. If I have the ability to invent one thing or technology, I will choose the renewable and clean energy and power to alleviate the crisis of oil.

First of all, almost all the people around the world have gained the sign that the petroleum will be depleted in 30 years and the governments which are competing with each other will not stop their path of developing the economic and science. As a result, the world have to come up with the remedy for danger of energy. If we have the clean and renewable energy, which means we will not develop our world science and technology under the considerable pressure and damage other countries interests in order to get the precious energy. The world will reach a harmonious atmosphere and generate a mutual developments. The rich nations like America, England, can pay more efforts to the poor nations. The renewable energy can bring the world more understanding and lead to a situation that individuals will help others without pressure.

Additionally, the evironments in our earth are becoming worse and worse. The press always write about the severe global warming. The journalists always report the enormous pollutant. The governments always speak that they will attach more importance without acts and results. With the renewable energy, industries will never pollute the eviroment to enhance their efficiency and the people will see the blue sky again instead of getting rid of the grey sky. For instance, if the evironments in the world continue to emiss the gas, the cars continue to run on the roads by oil, people can not imagine the consequence will be brought.

Furthermore, oil and petroleum are so expensive that more and more people are sufferring the anxiety that they can not afford the high price and they can not enjoy the convinience which the cutting-edge technology generate and must live in a earth saturated with emissions and pollutant. If I can invent the renewable energy, the energy will never be used up and the price will never continue to enhance. Therefore, citizens in this earth will almost be equal to enjoy the comfortable technology.

Summaring the points above, with the new energy, people will benefit due to the cheap price and the fresh eviroment which will not be polluted any more for the economical and science improvement. If the global warming is be stopped, I can not imagine the beautiful and comfortable world we will have.