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昨天忙了没写，今天写两篇。
修改的同学，给我改一篇就行了。谢谢！

12.14
Only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth watching.

Conceiving and making a movie is an art, and any sort of art reflects the real life. Basing on this assumption, I don’t know if there are some movies or other artistic expressions having nothing with our real life. I suppose the speaker’s genuine view is a movie based on what has really happened or what is greatest possible to happen should be watched by us. I can’t agree with the idea like that, for we are supposed to understand the world and life both by way of direct or indirect experiences of real life, and through other methods, such as imagination or fantasy and so on, to expand our conceptive space and amplify our understanding to the world. On the other hand, I believe that an excessive expression of real life in a movie, especially focusing on brutal reality or bad human natures, maybe proves not good to the audiences.

In the first place, the world we are living is a substantive world, and most of us are confined in our daily life. I think that is why fictional novels and fantastic movies are so popular among audiences. We want to experience another different life. In those movies or novels, we immerse ourselves in the episodes like, mingling with the persons we will not belong, experiencing an adventure we will not be involved in, or facing an outside-universe creature we can hardly image. Those imaginations make us jump out of the confinement of a boring life, wonder at the creation of humans, and feel the freedom of our existence. For this reasons, how could we reject those attractive contents in movies, but limit our field of vision just in reality.

In the second place, as Neitzsche said, if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Many realism movies portrayed the brutality, confusion and unreason of the reality. They expose the rude and deep natures of humans, such as selfish, chilly, cruel and so on. They describe tragedies and ominous future of humans. Admittedly, this genre of movies makes audiences keep consciousness about reality, gives us profound implications of life, and makes us contemplate. However an excessive exposure of those contents may conduce to a distort ideology and a hazard to people’ mental health. So my advice is not to pay too much attention to realism movies specifically, diversifying the film genres you watch.

In sum, I disapproval the idea that only those movies can teach us something about real life are worth watching. Our life not only requires a teaching of reality, but also a share of creations and imaginations beyond reality.

12.15
It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concern halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds.

This quote means the government ought to slope the fiscal expenses down to art and culture facilities rather than recreational facilities. I can not agree more with that, and the reasons are as follows.

First, with china’s economic development, people’s living level has been boosted. The requirements in art and culture have increased sharply. But the problem is we still lack enough high-quality hardware and software to satisfy those needs. In many cities of china, there are gyms and swimming pools but it is hard to find a museum. Furthermore, in some small cities or towns, there is not even a cinema, let along a concern hall. So expanding money input to culture and art facilities is a wise option.

Second, most of culture and art facilities, such as libraries and museums, are unprofitable. It is difficult to attract individual investments to put in. It is no one but the government should commit the responsibility to construct an abundant and sufficient culture supporting system in a country. On the contrary, most of recreational facilities can be established and operated by private capitals. For the profits from operating recreational and sport facilities, the needs in the market will determine what kinds of facilities and how many of them should be built. The market can reach its balance between the requirements and supplies without the government’s intervention. Therefore, it is better for the government to spent money on the place that really needs it than a market has adequate funds.

Third, the construction of museums and theatres is not only for the culture needs of people, it is the requirement of culture itself. The culture needs to be inherited and enhanced along with the development of a society. We need more specific institutes and places to study, summarize and exhibit our culture and art achievement. But sports or other entertainments have not such a characteristic. Thereby, with the spontaneous development of culture, there are more culture facilities emerging, and the government plays a main role of culture’s construction. China, as one of the longest history countries in the world, should pay more attention to built museums to protect traditional cultures, especially those at the edge of extinction.

Accordingly, I strongly believe that it is more important for government to spend money on museums, libraries, theatres and concern halls than recreational facilities.

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昨天忙了没写，今天写两篇。
修改的同学，给我改一篇就行了。谢谢！

12.14
Only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth watching.

Conceiving and making a movie is an art, and an ...
EEEE456258 发表于 2010-12-15 14:46

恩 改的1215， 1214也看了的。没什么大问题啦~ 不错！

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改好了 有空请来该下我的作文

发错了不好意思啊~~~

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12.16
Observing and studying animals’ behavior are useful for knowing more about humans.

It is an important science to study animals. There are numerous research institutions and colleges having specific projects and running various experiments in respect of almost every found animal in the world. In addition, many animal scientists, nature scholars and animal amateurs put up with the burning sun of the big African grassland or a chilly storm above an Arctic ice-sheet, to chase animals’ trails, observe their behaviors, and record every stage of their growth. I believe that what they are devoted to is not just the extent of our knowledge of nature and creatures, it also enhance our understanding about ourselves, the humans. I base my view on two reasons as follow.

The first reason for my belief is, studying some similar points between animals’ and humans’ behaviors, may help to reveal the biologic and physiologic basis behind our daily activities. Human conducts have evolved for millions of years, but still maintain some rude and unchangeable natures. And those natures covered by our rational daily activities effect our actions at every moment. So significant those natures are that many humans behavioral custom can be explained. The famous condition-reflection experiment illustrated that very well. The experiment is training a dog with bell-rings, and observing the connection between the bell-rings and dog’s reflection. Every time, after hearing a series of bell-rings, the dog will receive some foods. Through trainings again and again, as soon as the dog is hearing a bell-ring, some secretions will emerge in the dog’s mouth, which means the dog directly reflect to the sound of bell by connecting the foods with bell-rings. Human being also has similar experiences in life like that. And by these kinds of experiments, scientists discovered the fundamental function of human’s nerve system.

The second reason for my belief is the research on the distinctions between humans and animals’ behaviors can improve our comprehension about human behavior’s transformation. As the example of lesbians, scientists want to figure out the origination of sex behaviors by the same sex. They wish to find if another creature have this type of actions in nature. But so far, there are indeed some cases that this kind of things happened between the same-sex animals, whereas the purpose of those actions is nothing about sex or production, and virtually different from human beings. However, it is a good evidence that maybe the same sex to sex behavior is a unique product by the human civilization.

In the final analysis, I believe study on animals, especially their behaviors, improve our knowledge of ourselves. Because we were one of them in the past, and we will perfect our evolution by know them.

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已经给你换了 不好意思啊~~~

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这里加个让步会不会更好呢？或者再来个正面论述也行

In the final analysis, I believe thatstudy on animals, especially their behaviors, can improveour knowledge of ourselves. Because we were one of them in the past, and wewill perfect our evolution by know them.
楼主文章写的不错，有些句子也学习了

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12.17.
The car has a greater influence on our society than the airplane has.

The car and the airplane are two of people’s main transportations nowadays, and both of them provide great conveniences to our travel. Each of them is one of the most amazing invents in history, that makes it difficult to assess which has a greater influence on our society than the other. If I have to make a choice between them, I prefer airplanes to cars for the following reasons.

First of all, flying is an eternal dream of human beings from ancient epochs. Being different from driving any kind of vehicles, people can ride horses or use wheels to accelerate their travelling speed from early time of human civilization, but constantly failed of the tries to fly in the sky. People want to fly likes the dream people want to be immortal, which indicates the admirable ambitions of human beings to break the confinement of nature, and achieve the thorough freedom of our own. That is why so many inventors in history were devoted to use every means to push themselves merely several meters away from the ground or stay aloft just for minutes, even at the risk of their lives, nevertheless enjoyed and persisted in that. As far as I know, da Vinci, the greatest painter, also created some designs of flying machines. Of course, none of them attained the goal until bro. Wright accomplished such a shocking-world performance of human beings’ first flying. Therefore, flying has implications far beyond a method of travel but a profound symbol which demonstrates humans’ ambition, courage and ego surmounting.

In addition, after people can fly by airplanes, the following advance in technique made the field of aviation expand from the earth to the out space. Nobody can deny that the Apollo 11 landing on the moon is one of the most important events in the last century. As the astronaut Neil Armstrong said as the first man on the moon: “That’s one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind”, at this moment, mankind virtually had access to the cosmic secrets and probe into universe in person. From this perspective, I believe that no other invents of vehicle in history can open such a wonderful field to humans.

To sum up, as far as I am concerned, the impact of the emerging of the first air craft weigh the invent of cars, because the former not only changed our life style more deeply than the latter, but also push a big leap of our mind and take us into more extensive space.

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12.17.
The car has a greater influence on our society than the airplane has.

The car and the airplane are two of people’s main transportations nowadays, and both of them provide great convenience ...
EEEE456258 发表于 2010-12-17 18:12

虽然不一组，但是我汗颜了，你说的深刻，我too superficial了。。。
学习学习ing...

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12.14
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Conceiving and making a movie is an art, and any sort of art reflects the real life. Basing on this assumption, I don’t know if there are some movies or other artistic expressions having nothing with our real life. I suppose the speaker’s genuine view is a movie based on what has really happened or what is greatest possible to happen should be watched by us. I can’t(听说最好不要用缩写) agree with the idea like that, for we are supposed to understand the world and life both by way of direct or indirect experiences of real life, and through other methods, such as imagination or fantasy and so on, to expand our conceptive space and amplify our understanding to（of）  the world. On the other hand, I believe that an excessive expression of real life in a movie, especially focusing on brutal reality or bad human natures, maybe proves not good to the audiences.& n+ Q, \4 C0 a
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In the first place, the world we are living (in) is a substantive world, and most of us are confined in our daily life. I think that is why fictional novels and fantastic movies are so popular among audiences. We want to experience another different life. In those movies or novels, we immerse ourselves in the episodes like, mingling with the persons we will not belong, experiencing an adventure we will not be involved in, or facing an outside-universe creature we can hardly image. (in those movies or novels, we can immerse ourselves, mingle with the person we will never meet, experience an adventure we will not be involved in, or face an outside-universe creature we will probably never encounter.换了几个词，不知道有没有曲解了你的本意••) Those imaginations make us jump out of the confinement（fence）of a boring life, wonder at the creation of humans, and feel the freedom of our existence. For this reasons, how could we reject those attractive contents in movies, but(and)  limit our field of vision just in reality.?7 i3 g  n6 D( q& G0 e  u7 Z6 O2 v?

In the second place, as Neitzsche said, if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Many realism movies portrayed the brutality, confusion and unreason of the reality. They expose the rude and deep natures of humans, such as selfish, chilly, cruel这些是不是要改成名词呢？ and so on. They describe tragedies and ominous future of humans. Admittedly, this genre of movies makes audiences keep consciousness about reality, gives us profound implications of life, and makes us contemplate. However， an excessive exposure of those contents may conduce to a distorted ideology and a hazard to people’ mental health. So my advice is not to pay too much attention to realism movies specifically, diversifying the film genres you watch.

In sum, I disapproval the idea that only those movies can teach us something about real life are worth watching. Our life not only requires a teaching of reality, but also a share of creations and imaginations beyond reality.! P* F: d( F# S% k
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The car and the airplane are two of people’s main transportations nowadays, and both of them provide great conveniences to our travel. Each of them is one of the most amazing invents(inventions) in history, that makes it difficult to assess which has a greater influence on our society than the other. If I have to make a choice between them, I prefer airplanes to cars for the following reasons. ( car and airplane, as two main transpotations in our lives nowadays, providing unimaginable benefits to our travel. For each one occupies a unbeatable position in our life, we may find it difficult to determine which one has a greater influence in our society. )
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First of all, flying is an eternal dream of human beings from ancient epochs. Being different from driving any kind of vehicles, people can ride horses or use wheels to accelerate their travelling speed from early time of human civilization, but constantly failed of the tries(好像可以删掉••) to fly in the sky. People want to fly likes the dream people want to be immortal, which indicates the admirable ambitions of human beings to break the confinement of nature, and achieve the thorough freedom of our own. （people’s wish for flying similars to their dream of being immortal,  That is why so many inventors in history were devoted to use every means to push themselves merely several meters away from the ground or stay aloft just for minutes, even at the risk of their lives, nevertheless enjoyed and persisted in that.(that’s why so many inventors in the history made every effort to this task, even though the outcomes, say several meters up from the ground or minutes’ staying aloft, were not so evident, they enjoyed and persisted in it. ) As far as I know, da Vinci, the greatest painter, also created some designs of flying machines. Of course, none of them attained the goal until bro. Wright accomplished such a shocking-world performance of human beings’ first flying. Therefore, flying has implications far beyond a method of travel but a profound symbol which demonstrates humans’ ambition, courage and ego surmounting.

In addition, after people can fly by airplanes, the following advance in technique made the field of aviation expand from the earth to the out space. Nobody can deny that the Apollo 11 landing on the moon is one of the most important events in the last century. As the astronaut Neil Armstrong said as the first man on the moon: “That’s one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind”, at this moment, mankind virtually had access to the cosmic secrets and probe into universe in person. From this perspective, I believe that no other invents of vehicle in history can open such a wonderful field to humans.# W  }( W( d8 m1 L
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To sum up, as far as I am concerned, the impact of the emerging of the first air craft outweigh the invent of cars, because the former not only changed our life style more deeply than the latter, but also push a big leap of our mind and take us into more extensive space.

(你有一个好大的优点，论据好充分！！好羡慕••••)

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1.5
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should pay more attention to health care issues than environment issues.

Health care issues and environment issues are two kinds of actual problems every government should consider carefully. The former is the fundamental component of social welfare and is related to natives’ physical quality. Comparatively, the latter will affect the basic living conditions, and then will influence every part of our life. As environment issues are definitely elemental and profound, and the solutions to them are quite complicated and hard to attain, nevertheless, the consequence by ignoring them is all human beings can not bear, thus I think environment issues should take precedence over health care issues.

In the first place, I believe that environment problems are more essential than the health care problems. Actually, nowadays a great number of diseases result from our aggravating circumstance. With the industrialization and economic development, pollution has taken its toll on our health more. Along with water, air and soil are increasingly contaminated by detrimental materials, lung and stomach cancer have gone up to top two high rates of cancers. As a result, if we pay more attention to amend environment condition, we will improve our health from the original aspect. That will save substantial health care cost in individuals as well as government. On balance, dealing with environment issues first will be proved profound and beneficial to improve many related problems involving health care issues.

In the second place, environment issues are extensive and complicated, which cover a range of problems including pollution, shortage of energy and resource, global warming, etc. Every problem listed is difficult to get a thorough solution for long. In history, with the evolution of human, how to harmonize the relationship between human and nature has been sought endlessly, but the present situation seems worse than ever. It means that the issues are more serious and difficult than we consider. On the other hand, environment issues are not of any single government along. They are the troubles faced by all nations. Many problems of them, such as global warming, must be solved by international cooperation. Without the coordination among all countries, any virtual measure is impossible to take. But from the difficult process of global climate issues negotiation we can see that it is indeed hard to achieve a common agreement and walk as a same pace between them. For the reasons above, I believe government should invest more energy in environment issues.

In the third place, no matter how great the difficult is, we are supposed to overcome them, for the consequence we fail is no one can bear. The worst result of bad health care is a great many people will die, but the worst of bad environment is no one will be survival. Therefore, ignoring environment issues nowadays maybe prove a fatal mistake in future.

In sum, I approve of the idea that government should pay more attention to environment issues than health care issues.

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1.6
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

In modern society, it is a fact that life becomes complex, which consists in increasing social diversification and people’s growing independent ideology. As a result, any enterprising young people who want to establish an admirable career will face the challenge of dealing with complicated projects or organizing a group of different persons. Thus without the caution of thought, accurate judgment and executive power, it is hard to gain a success in career, which especially requires the ability to plan and organize.

First of all, social diversification embodies two aspects. The first is, with the development of society, the regulations and demands on details have increased. The process of any project is complicated than ever. As the construction for example, in the past, building private house just needs a group of friends and a draft of design. At present, there are many necessary processes, from getting a license from government, employing a certificated construction team, depending on a permitted blueprint, to conforming to the urban planning. The increasing regulations and demands make the things more order and controllable, and at the same time, need more energy to plan and administrate.

The other aspect of social diversification is that division of labor has become elaborate and specialized. Similarly in the case of construction, in past years, an architect is supposed to accomplish a whole design on architecture, construction, water supply and decoration, etc. On the contrary, those kinds of jobs are separated to different persons nowadays who specialize in different fields. The growth of division means the complication of management has been raised. Therefore, how to centralize those different design works and integrate them perfect is a competence of organizing.

The discussions above focus on things, while the challenges from people are more considerable. Nowadays people have more independent idea, and need more careful understanding. Also this is the case in spite of respecting people’s distinction that an organization dominate its members by strict rules in past time, but that is nonsense in modern time. The core of modern management pays attention to motivating and inspiriting. For instance, 90s generation is so different from its predecessor. They have an extensive vision of life and conceive extraordinary dreams, but face a fierce competition nowadays than ever. The gap between dream and reality may generate many abnormal behaviors and expressions of them. How to comprehend their mind and inspirit them is essential to youth to lead and organize his contemporaries.

In sum, actually, I believe that ability of planning and organizing is required at any days. In view of modern social increasing changes and complications, I definitely agree that we should cultivate those types of ability.

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1.7
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best way of learning about foreign country.

We want to learn from the outside world, and we want to know other people’s life, maybe simply because we want to testify it is possible to live in a different way. Other countries’ history, custom, language, architecture, attire, lifestyle, and so on, always are intriguing. In principle, we gain news of other countries mainly through newspapers and magazines, but I don’t appreciate they are the best way to learn about foreign countries, for the following reasons.

First of all, generally, the content which we have access to see is published in newspapers and magazines of our own countries. As you know, for the reasons of ideology and politics, there is obviously tendentiousness on the reports of foreign countries. For the allies, the government is apt to portray their positive aspect. In terms of unfriendly countries, the media orientated by government will give more critiques on their negative aspect. Thus, it is hardly probable to receive impartial information from these types of resource. On the other hand, no matter whether there is influence from government or not, those articles in local newspapers and magazines are second-hand materials, most of them more or less deviate from the truth for the limited views or backgrounds of authors. Some of them are bias. Therefore, if one really commences looking into other countries, my advice is not too much depending on those newspapers or magazines.

I think the best way to learn about a country is travelling and looking by your eyes. You want to understand Paris. There is no better way than going to Louvre museum, tasting French food, drinking native red wines, and having a romantic encounter, which make your experiences more exciting and real. Any word and description are colorless, and any imagination is pale. So if it will be existed any opportunity, I believe I would not waste it to go anywhere I crave. However, these kinds of opportunities are not always easy to get. If it is impossible to go there in person, I recommend hunting some first-hand information, such as foreign public books and videos. Another definitely useful method is collecting information by internet, of course at those foreign native websites. Through the first-hand materials, we are possible to form our own accurate comprehension about a country.

To sum up, I would take any chance to travel around the country I like to know. Feel and experience everything strange. But if it is unreachable, I suggest obtaining foreign first-hand knowledge than learning from local newspapers and magazines.

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1.11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advice given by older people is more valuable than from people at your age?

In principle, people think advice from older maybe more valuable than from younger, for there are more life experiences with the growth of age, and which gives more contemplation increasing people’s wisdom. But I don’t quite agree with the quote and consider this point of view is perhaps too absolute and should take into account nowadays concrete situations. I give my further explanation as follow:

Admittedly, in the past, fathers were the patriarchs who dominate the development of a family. Sons are educated by their fathers’ lifestyles. They needed to listen to their parents’ didactic words, observe their actions, learn from their method of life, and especially appeal to their advices if getting into troubles or confusions. Those advices were useful and essential, because the troubles and confusions were always similar in person’s life time. And by this way, youth could save much excessive time and devious ways to grow up, and as their parents expected, take over the mantle to become the new patriarch. That was the time of older.

However, at the contemporary era, life changes day by day. Our mode of life and thinking is significant different from our parents. Some troubles yesterday are no more problems today, yet some beliefs in past are considered ridiculous now. The brilliancy of old experiences and lessons is faded in front of the flight of time. The young generations face a strange new world with infinite possibilities and opportunities. There are no old patterns can be depended on and no certain consequences can be predicted. Furthermore, the society has become more and more diversified. There are great distinct between any two individuals, let alone younger and older. The increasing expansion of generation gap indicates that it is hard to make youth appreciate their parents’ ideas and show obedience to their parents’ advice. This is the time of youth.

From the discussion above, we can find out the influence of older has been weaken, but which does not mean we should abandon all the experience and advice from older. In my point of view, the extent in which whether an advice is valuable, should be just assessed by advice itself, but not by who give the advice. As a young man embodying multifactor ideas and taking delight in learning from different people, will consult various advices but make a decision by he own discretion. The advices may come from older, contemporary or younger.