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Topic:　　
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
　　It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the lose of old friends?

Essay:

When it comes to whether it is beneficial to move to a new places such as a new city or country ,quite a few people assert it is not good for the reasons that the long distances and reduces connections would reslt in the lost of old friends .However, others regard it as a good thing because the long distances not only do not hamper the contact,but increase more topics to discuss during the chat.There is probably a little bit of truth in both arguments, but I would prefer the latter one .

The distance is not the obstacle for two friends.It is undeniable that moving to new cities or countries would not only increase the difficulty to meet each other,but also the reduction of contact,but it never leads to the lost of old friens.Take my personal experiences for instance.I had to move to Shanghai where I continued my college education,while James,a friend of mine since the high school,had to stay in Hangzhou to meet his parents' anticipation.Though we could not see one another often,we kept in touch with each other through monthly telephone communication and MSN on the Internet which helped us maintain our friendship.When I go back to Hangzhou to see him,he is always on top of the world and puts down anything else to give me a huge welcome.

What's more,the friendship can even be enhenced.When living in two different cities or countries,we can provide things the other lacks in.John,a friend I nearly forgot,delivered me a message to ask me for a favor to show him and his family around Shanghai.At the time I received the short message I immediately replied to him OK.When we met each other at the airport,we had a huge hug and had a longtime talk until my girlfriend interrupted our discussion and recalled me the visit.Then I led them to Nanjing Road and Xu Jiahui Districts to see the buildings full of historic feelings combined with contemporary flavor and the terrific landscapes around them.When we departed with one another,we promised to keep in touch as often as possible and viewed the other as an eternal friend.

So from my point of view,I disagree the statement that it is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the lost of old friends.

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每天一篇，坚持到考试为止

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没人有来帮忙提下意见嘛。。。。

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没人提下意见嘛。。。。

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Topic:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished

Essay:

Wathcing TV and going to cinema are still good ways to relax and communicate with friends.After a movie or television,my friends and I often discuss whether good men should receive awards and bad men deserve punishment,and I would always definitely say yes for the following reasons.

First and foremost,the major means that movies and televisions influence the public is by creating topics of discussion in the society and the justice should be publicized.Take Conception as an example:after its play I could hear many people around me even silent Jack,who hardly participates in our discussions usually,are willing to have a chat with the movie.So can you imagine the condition that good people deserve an unfair outcome while bad people survive without punishment?Of course it would lead to very bad effects on the audiences and a number of criticisms about the editor and the whole movie or television makers would consequently follow.

In addition to topics,movies and televisions also play an important role in people's behavior.We often view the hero in the movie as a good example and try our best to be the hero likewise.For instance:after Spiderman was on show,I see my little nephew Tony always wears the clothes like what the spiderman wears.When he saw his cat Tom are doing something bad to his little chicken,he would pretend as spiderman to protect the chicken and keep the cat away from them.What a cute boy and whhat a great influence the movie has!  

Last but not least,were men who are in favor of the justice killed or punished by men who behave as evil in a movie or television,just imagine what would happen to our youth?From my point of view,it would result in severely negative influences on the youth and they maybe would imitate the behaviors of bad men and develop bad habits gradually.The consequence of this is obvious that our youth generation would be greatly harmed,which is contrary to movie's or television's original idea and is a disaster to our society.

In brief,movies and televisions,by creating topics of discussion and affecting the behaviors,have strong influences on our daily life,so under no circumstances should the good people are being awarded and bad people are being penalized always be demonstrated to audience in movies and televisions.

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continue to write a passage a day

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ding shan qu

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额，我正好写了这篇，我觉得你的例子是不是太细太具体，没有理论的证据？

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8# zyqwjay
恩，理论上不会说啊~~只会这样死用例子去说。。