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题目：How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society.Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help  bring about a better society.
  The vast majority of people convinced that social's destiny depends on how children are socialized. And there are some people have consciousness that we have not yet learned how to raise children who can bring about a better society. I tend to agree that we have not to make sure to socialized well.
  There is no denying that children is the hope of the nation and many countries especially the developed countries like America, Sweden and Japan etc, pay much attention on education. But there are still a large number of teachers emphasize the basic job-related skills to adapt to this competitive society. This situation exists in many countries,such as China, South Korea and Indian. Consequently, there are many children can't do anything but study and exam,even some children have no idea to negotiate with other people and to face the difficulty in social life with proper ways.
  Moreover, the number of juvenile crimes has increased dramatically.Today our media bring some adverse effects on our children. Large number of TVs and movies are filled with violence and crime. Children don't have enough self-discipline to mass of information. They would imitate the violence they see on TV. Many parents suffer depression in modern society, they don't haver much time to teach their children to distinguish the information transmitted by the media.
  Fortunately, many interviewers stress the responsibility, teamwork,and cooperation to the students who are looking job. This kind of situation promote students to emphasize their ability,including interpersonal skills, cooperate and responsibility to others,not only focused on their exam results. As famous Indian movie"three idiots" said"pursuit the brilliant, the success would follow you." It remind the teachers,parents and educators not merely regard children as their expectation. Every child has his own style and merit. The adults should seek attentively children's characteristics and  teach them how to develop their advantage.
  In sum from what had been discussed above we may find out that the socialization of children determines the destiny of society and adults pay much attention to learn how to raise our children who can make contribution to the development of this society.