最后的战役 第一周 issue 208 by napoleon

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Thespeaker's claim is actually twofold : (1)appearance, clothing and behavior of aperson is a very significant reflection of a citizen's attitudes and interests ;(2)we could simply judge asociety just the look and dress of its people. While I concede that in certainoccasion the attitudes and interestscan truly be revealed
(through) dressing or looking, in mostcases it is judged by internal rather than external characteristics.（这个开头有创意啊，你一定是学工科的，呵呵）

I agree with the speaker insofar as revealing the appearance is areflection of the internal characteristics. After all, we can hardly imaginethat a person with
in rags is amillionaire. Based on the theory of Marx about matter and consciousness, weacquainted that external matter is adisplay of internal consciousness. Nevertheless, from a simple preview of aperson's behavior and performance we can hardly draw a conclusion about the condition(这个用词我个人觉得不好，但是也不知道要用什么) of his attitude orinterest.


While the judgment of interest of people,
is， to some extent, arbitrary.（兴趣的判断是武断的，怎么理解，这句话应该是没有说透） In the first place, oneperson's action and dressing can change with occasions and about thepeople he treats with.(with the change of occasions and people he need to treat with)

Like that we will dress on uniform in theoffice but casual clothes when go to the park; weface our love with enthusiastic but not that friendly with a person we dislike.
(我个人觉得这句话有问题，但有可能是我对一些表达不熟悉。若这是你较有把握的表达可以直接Q我，我学习一下)
And if werecognize the change is sometimes too rapid by the influences of outside,（我觉得这句话不对劲，但是说不出来,有可能是我不熟悉的表达，或者是把by换成under？）（we may not contribution
contribute it to the reasonof the interest or value estimation of society.

In the second place, in addition, people’sattitudes and interests are so complicated that even we can hardly ensure weknow attitudes and interests of ego very（very或许有这个用法，即便有，不推荐这样用）. Then the probability tojudge a person’s elusive attitudes and interests correctly simply from tangibleappearance and action must be obviously rare. Respecting, determination,vision, optimism and so on would not easily be observed from looking andaction. Instead they are accumulated since one’s nativity through education andinteractions with people. (这个句子是抄的)（呵呵，诚实的孩子a）

In sum, I concede that the quick judgment systemsometimes can indeed too sometime make life convenient. However, excessive superstition thesignificant of appearance and action
( superstition 后便应该是少了个介词或介词短语吧) may lead us to make a unfear judgment.
点评：
优点：
想法很清晰啊
缺点：注意语言啊