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The author argue that people susceptible to the flu had better avoid prolonged exposure to the sun boilstering with medical records which show the worldwide flu epidemics during the past 300 years happened to occur when there were heavy sunspot activity.

In the first place, the author fails to inform us the severity of the disease in years when sunspot activities were less heavy.

In the second place, there is not a shrew of evidence which can confirm it was the heavy sunspot activities that are to blame for the epidemics. (coincidence, multiple factors.)

The last but not the least important, even if assuming that the epidemics result from the heavy sunspot, the arguer failed to demonstrate what will happen in the general case instead of under the situation of heavy sunspot. As we all know, the sunshine can benefit our health, preventing us from many kinds of diseases.

Recommendation: supply persuasive evidence that the epidemics are attributable to the sunspot activities and analyze and evaluate thoroughly and scrunizingly.