求支援！！！ 还有一些天就考了

jackongpoorUID: 2826172

I51.Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designedto meet the individual needs and interests of each student.
提纲：
    1.同意兴趣对学习有帮助。
    2.但是教育资源有限，受限很多，无法做到满足每个人的兴趣。
    3.让步，其实教育资源足够，也不行。
    4.补充，选修课可以解决一部分问题。




我的困惑：为什么写完了，才376字，有什么方法提高啊？ 感觉水平很差，句子和用词都不够，怎么提高啊！！！还有20天就考了，急啊！！！哪位大虾帮帮忙！！！不胜感激。。。。




When it comes to a question" Whetherthe education will be effective or not, if it is specifically designed to meetthe individual needs and interests of each student ", different peoplehave their own idea. It is not reasonable, as my concerned, to do as the authorsaid, although the interest and individual needs do well to students' study.
Firstly, as the says going, interest is thebest teacher. It is no doubt that the interest can let student study moreactively and efficiently, because students prefer to their interesting realm ofknowledge and would concentrate
theirwhole energy
on what the like ,whichothers think boring.
For example, Faraday,the best physicist in the 20th century, deeply loving electricity and doing experimentvery often, achieve his best reputation-found the principle of electromagneticinduction at last. Einstein, who had a similar story and is the best physicist,devoted his whole life in the theory physics and makes the Principle ofRelativity, it fully says the importance of interest for study or research ofpeople.
However, we cannot neglect a fact that the resourceof education is very limited and the number of population is too large, so itis impossible to fulfill the interest and individual needs of every student. Aswe know, there is short of material resource in Africa ,then let alone thesituation of the education, even it not all the people have the chance toachieve the education.
Admittedly, we can make imagine this situationthat if the resource of education is enough, it is also not wisdom view, like thatof author’s , to overdue pay attention on the interest. Because the fundamentalknowledge, which is more hard and opposite the students' interest, is morenecessary for student, we cannot lane the balance to a side.

Nevertheless, in order to make full use ofstudents’ gift and potential, the educator should open the selected course.Maybe the students will fine their oriental of their interest.

Insum, although the interest is important, it is not the only means to make the educationeffective. The fundamental education also cannot be neglected. Only do westrive the balance between them, the education would be effective.

honeydate_qUID: 2864273

还有二十天，还是充裕的
建议自己归纳一套自己的模板，背熟了，多练几篇，自然就会好的
我也是从这个瓶颈走出来了~~

jackongpoorUID: 2826172

2# honeydate_q

谢谢，归纳自己的模板？ 能详细点吗？ 谢谢   Issue 有模板？？

honeydate_qUID: 2864273

写A是有套路的，其实你写多了写出来的东西都差不多
比如开头，结尾，攻击方式等等
I我不好说，有点麻烦，模板仅限于开头结尾的什么的，我准备I主要是思路