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kroseUID: 3046161

Agree or disagree: when relaxing, some people like to spend time alone


Nowadays, people usually busy in their work or study. After that, when they relaxing, some people would like spend their time alone. One the contrary, other people would like to spend with their friends or family. As far as I am concern, I’m prefer to spend time alone than with other people when I relaxing. Thus, I’m quite agree the statement.

On the one hand, after a tired working day, spending time alone is a good way for people to relax themselves. Take my mother for example, everyday she needs to work at least ten hours, managing the factory almost make her fagged, and she needs cook dinner to me after go home. When she can have a rest, she invariably spend time alone, listening some music or watching TV, which can make she feel comfortable and serene. Therefore, the high-demanding work never affects my mother’s health.

On the other hand, when you are relaxing, if you spend time with others like your friend, it would waste your rest-time. For instance, after a hard-working day, you go out with your friends all night, this absolutely effect your sleeping time, which may make you late to work next day, and effect the rhythm of your life. However, if you stay at home after working, taking a warm bath and then have a good sleeping night, it would not only benefit for your health but also take advantage your time. Furthermore, you can go working with energy tomorrow, which can bring you power to work more efficient.

Nevertheless, spending time with others when you are relaxing also has its advantages. Chatting and joking with them can bring you happiness, and this will improve you friendship and ability of communicate.

To sum up, spending time alone when we relaxing is a useful way to arrange our life. We do need a tranquil environment to think our whole day life, or make ourselves do something meaningful. Thereby, if you feel weary after working, you should relax yourself alone, which is diametrically wholesome for you. Though spending time with others is also a good choice, but if I have to choose, I would like to spend time alone when relaxing.

coco3263UID: 16360

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Agree or disagree: when relaxing, some people like to spend time alone Nowadays, people usually busy in their work or study. After that, when they relaxing, some people would like spend their time alone. One the contrary, other people would like to spend with their friends or family. As far as I am concerned, I’m prefer to spend time alone than with other people when I relaxing. Thus, I’m quite agree the statement." _+ r3 v# ~% p8 C( Y6 F - z% z% b4 c/ ~" i8 s7 X On the one hand, after a tired working day, spending time alone is a good way for people to relax themselves (relax vi).. Take my mother for example, everyday she needs to work at least ten hours, managing the factory almost make her fagged, and she needs ---have to cook dinner to--for me after go home. When she can have a rest, she invariably spend time alone, listening some music or watching TV, which can make she feel comfortable and serene. Therefore, the high-demanding work never affects my mother’s health. ' G$ ] On the other hand, when you are relaxing, if you spend time with others like your friend, it would waste your rest-time. For instance, after a hard-working day, you go out with your friends all night, this absolutely effect --->affect) your sleeping time, which may make you late to work next day, and effect the rhythm of your life. However, if you stay at home after working, taking a warm bath and then have a good sleeping night, it would not only benefit for your health but also take advantage your time. Furthermore, you can go working with energy tomorrow, which can bring you power to work more efficient. ! H) y# b0 L/ @* a ; _2 |* D: m7 `8 Q" J' O) U Nevertheless, spending time with others when you are relaxing also has its advantages. Chatting and joking with them can bring you happiness, and this will improve you friendship and ability of communicate.( H$ b4 @7 C0 P! x1 g+ s( J To sum up, spending time alone when we relaxing is a useful way to arrange our life. We do need a tranquil environment to think our whole day life, or make ourselves do something meaningful. Thereby, if you feel weary after working, you should relax yourself alone, which is diametrically wholesome for you. Though spending time with others is also a good choice, but if I have to choose, I would like to spend time alone when relaxing.3 a& t9 {# j( ?" \ 结构上是比较完整的，论点正反都说了，清晰地表示了逻辑思维。但是T是语言考察，段落中如上的不太合适的词汇还有一些，而且是比较明显的Chiglish。建议多读，或者背一些外国人写的正宗原文。 加油~~还是很好的总之~~

kroseUID: 3046161

2# coco3263
非常谢谢你，我基础比较差，还在仔细琢磨怎么写，开始写时候写一篇要花2个小时。。。呵呵
总之非常感谢:loveliness:

mpromanusUID: 2565872

1# krose

Agree or disagree: when relaxing, some people like to spend time alone.

Nowadays, people are usually busy in their work or studies. After that, when they are relaxing, some people would like to spend their time alone. One the contrary, other people would like to spend time with their friends or families. As far as I am concerned, I’m prefer to spend time alone than with other people when I am relaxing. Thus, I’m quite agreeing with the statement.

On the one hand, after a tiring working day (People are 'tired'. Things are 'tiring' i.e. they tend to make people tired.), spending time alone is a good way for people to relax themselves. Take my mother for example, everyday she needs to work for at least ten hours, managing a factory almost makes her fagged, and she needs to cook dinner for me after going home. When she can have a rest, she invariably spends time alone, listening to some music or watching TV, which can make her feel comfortable and serene. Therefore, the highly-demanding work never affects my mother’s health.

On the other hand, when you are relaxing, if you spend time with others like your friends, it would waste your rest-time. For instance, after a hard-working day, you go out with your friends all night. This absolutely effects your sleeping time, which may make you late for work the next day, and affect the rhythm of your life. However, if you stay at home after working, take a warm bath and then have a good sleeping at night, it would not only benefit for your health but also take advantage of your time (People 'take advantage' of things or other people. Things don't usually 'take advantage'.). Furthermore, you can go to working with energy tomorrow (You mean, 'the next day'..), which can bring you power to work more efficiently.

Nevertheless, spending time with others when you are relaxing also has its advantages. Chatting and joking with them can bring you happiness, and this will improve your friendship and ability of communicate.

To sum up, spending time alone when we relaxing is a useful way to arrange our lives. We do need a tranquil environment to think our whole day life?, or make ourselves do something meaningful. Therefore, if you feel weary after working, you should relax yourself alone, which is diametrically wholesome??? for you. Though spending time with others is also a good choice, but if I have to choose, I would like to spend time alone when relaxing.

总结：

首先请把用词法理清，尤其是句法中动词的使用，还有各种介词词组的搭配。。

论述方面虽然如果我要很严格地来批你的逻辑也还是有很多细节的表达可以谈，不过总体上表意还算清楚，以托福的要求来说是可以的，所以还是请以提升词法、语言使用的正确度为主。

一木菩提UID: 2390164

有点偏题 这题不是让你谈 spend time alone的 pros & cons
再想想