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据备考到现在写了一个月了……14篇，感觉成长不大啊跟最开始的比一点进步都没有T^T
而且最近老想着掐时间反倒语句变得极其没水平并且时间还是没有缩短……总是卡在一小时才能写完……
希望大家能给点建议啊啊~实在是对作文没辙了T^T觉得写不出东西来啊……

2010.3.20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there's no need for the government to help them.
(Government)
Undoubtedly,the main purpose of government is to regulate it's citizens.However,we still expect
it to acquire some benefits from it:protection when war occured,economic assistance,etc.Even though some people will insist that individuals can solve any problem by themselves,in my personal perspective,sometimes the interfere from government is necessary to some tough issue.For instance,in the fields of complex relationships,environment,economic,and large-scale disaster.
First of all,the gap between the poor and the wealth is one of the most significant issues all over the world,regardless of the developed or developing countries.As a result,some disharmony violence event occuerd increasingly ,the individuals at the botton of the economy ladder continue to suffer from it.Only the government which is in charge of the right of majority can control the equivalence,and make effort to bridge this gap.adjasting the tax rate according to different stratum is an example,which is beneficial to the distribute of wealth.
Moreover,as a matter of fact,when we are encounter some serious natural disease,the power of one individual is very little.The WenChuan earthquake which was occued in China,is a good instance.It is the Chinese government that leading a lot of militaries and stabilizing the difficult situation immediatly.Based on the analysis above,we can acknowledge that for some important problems such as environment issue,government is the most effective and efficient way to make a dicition.By contrast,if it is ourselves to make such a significant dicision,it's not hard to imagine how much divergent opinions would emerge and how fuss it would be.
Finally,even in some individual's dispute,government is playing prominent role in it.When some great incidents take place,the court is a ideal place to solve it.The law if of great importance to pretest our citizens in daily lifes.Considering that it prevents us from attack by gansters and villain,keep this society in a great order,the government does afford numerous convinient for us.
In the final analysis,we can safely make a conclusion that,even though some people think the government shouldn't
take part in individual's life,given that the government always enable some problems to be settled more correcly,we should recognize the value of it.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there's no need for the government to help them.! L, Z& `: G: q# B! j) C1 Y- z
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Undoubtedly,the main purpose of (instituting a?不然我觉得意思不太完整，而且有歧义，政府的目的不是管理居民，建立政府的目的是)government is to regulate it's（its） citizens.However,we still expect it（指代不明？） to acquire some benefits from it （指代不明？）rotection（这是什么？） when war occured,economic assistance,etc.Even though some people will insist that individuals can solve any problem by themselves,in my personal perspective,sometimes the interfere（我查了一下，interfere只能做动词） from government is necessary to some tough issue.For instance,in the fields of complex relationships,environment,economic,and large-scale disaster.


First of all,the gap between the poor and the wealth is one of the most significant issues all over the world,regardless of (whether the country is developed or developing)the developed or developing countries.As a result,some disharmony(名词一般不能作定语) violence （同左）event occuerd increasingly ,the individuals at the botton（bottom） of the economy ladder continue to suffer from it.Only the government which is in charge of the right of majority can control the equivalence,and make effort to bridge this gap.adjasting the tax rate according to different stratum is an example,which is beneficial to the distribute of wealth.


Moreover,as a matter of fact,when we are encounter some serious natural disease,the power of one individual is very little.The WenChuan earthquake which was occued in China,is a good instance.It is the Chinese government that leading a lot of militaries and stabilizing the difficult situation immediatly.Based on the analysis above,we can acknowledge that for some important problems such as environment issue,government is the most effective and efficient way to make a dicition.By contrast,if it is ourselves to make such a significant dicision,it's not hard to imagine how much divergent opinions would emerge and how fuss it would be.7 |%
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Finally,even in some individual's dispute,government is playing prominent role in it.When some great incidents take place,the court is a ideal place to solve it.The law if of great importance to pretest our citizens in daily lifes.Considering that it prevents us from attack by gansters and villain,keep this society in a great order,the government does afford numerous convinient for us.) q0 l! O' a: {  d* M6 _2 ],
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In the final analysis,we can safely make a conclusion that,even though some people think the government shouldn't!take part in individual's life,given that the government always enable some problems to be settled more correcly,we should recognize the value of it.


我觉得写完之后用word改一下可能会更好一些~
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