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楼主关于英语的背景：
四级裸考585，六级继续裸考577。
以娱乐为主考过一次雅思6分（因为同时在准备CPA，然后杯具滴都考了50几==）
GMAT 720 作文4.5
各种普通各种不靠谱==

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有托福作文楼为证

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7月29日


Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality continuously, students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on teachers. Others think the respect and discipline in the classroom will disappear. Which opinion do you prefer?


With the development of educational system, more and more attentions are paid to the feedback of students to their teachers. For instance, some schools encourage their students to criticize their teachers. To be opposed, many people hold the view that this kind of practice will destroy respect and discipline in the classroom. From my perspective, free criticism is a better choice. My point of view can be strengthened by the following discussions.


First and foremost, the power of teachers needs control. As we all know, there are many school violences every year. An obvious percentage of them are made by bad teachers. If students have more chances to claim their opinions on teachers, this kind of things will be less. What is more, increasingly more stress can make teachers to pay attention to their behaviors. What a teacher is like is what his\her students are like. Thus if teachers behave sublimely, his\or students will learn how to be a respectable citizen.


Some people may argue my opinion. It is said that respect and discipline will vanish in the classroom if criticism is allowed. On the contrary, I think they will remain as what they did in the past. Comments and even criticism are actually encouraged in many schools. However, it does not mean students can criticize their teachers freely. There can be regulations to manage students’ behaviors. For example, words that may hurt teachers’ feelings should be banned. In addition, the places students can criticize teachers should be limited as well. They can not disturb the class or normal teaching progress of school. As long as we can put limit on students’ comments efficiently, we will avoid the disappearance of respect and discipline in the classroom,


In a nutshell, comments from students should be encouraged, based on what are presented above, as long as educators can limit these comments to such an extent that will not hurt teachers or the normal school life.

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7月30日

Young people are important resources to their country, but governments may ignore some problems faced by young people in running the country. Please show those problems and give your ideal suggestions to solve them.


With the advance of the society, increasingly more attention is paid to young people, as they are precious fortune of their nation. However, this kind of attention is not enough. Governments may miss a lot of problems which play a dominant role in young adults’ lives. For instance, education, employment and crime are the top three problems.


The first is education. In many developing countries, such as China, young adults from ethnic minorities can not acquire high-qualified education. This kind of schooling leads to low-lever parenting. What is more, the inequality of education may cause discrimination between ethnic majorities and ethnic minorities. From my perspective, the government can cultivate young teachers with national fund and send them to areas where ethnic minorities live. In this way, the quality of ethnic minorities’ education will improve gradually and catch up with that of ethnic majorities’ finally.


Employment comes to be the second problem. Since Financial Crisis, the circumstance of global economy has kept changing. As a result, young people can not find a stable job. Without a stable job, young adults can not lead a peaceful life and have to look for jobs from time to time. As far as I see, the government is supposed to offer job training to young people without stable professions in time. Only by timely assist can government ease the anxious environment of young people’s employment.


The last but not least is crime. As we all know, the crime rate of young people is always high. Since young adults are not experienced enough, they may be lured by many stuff and never think about the consequences. From my point of view, government can organize some activities to let those young adults know that violating the law can lead to serious penalty.


All in all, young people play an dominant role in their countries’ future, the government will never pay too much attention on them.