没几天就要考了，第一篇issue。 65 。想请大家帮忙看下我写偏题了没有？？

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题目：Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.

我写的：
Everyone should be responsible to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.  In order to keep the society stable and ordered, the just laws should be legislated and every individual should obey them.  However, we cannot be sure that all of the laws are just, therefore, when we are facing the unjust laws, we should disobey and resist them.  Nowadays disobeying and resist unjust laws should be as important as obeying just laws that obeying and disobeying are together to assure the society peaceful and stable.
Undoubtedly, every citizen should obey just laws, which is the precondition of a stable and order society.  Many years ago, the Monarches already have legislated laws to ask the citizens to obey them. The just laws keep the society from disordered and protect the citizens from injury.  
If there are not just laws in our lives, i can hardly believe what the society will be like.  For example, the convicts can do everything what he wan to do.  No laws will  restrict them that the society will be replete with sorrow, fear and calamities.  If everyone do not obey the just laws, the situation will be as same as the situation which has no law.  Thus, in order to keep the society's stability, order and peace, every individual should obey just laws.
Yet it should be more important for individuals to resist unjust laws.  Disobeying the unjust laws can help improve the legal system of the nation.  To protect the right of the citizens and make the world more beautiful and peaceful, the unjust laws should be doubted and resisted.  In the Shang dynasty, considering the unjust laws, Shang Yang who was a officer provided several new laws to inform the Monarch to replace the unjust laws.  After exchanging the unjust laws instead of obeying them, the society became more peaceful and the citizens were quite happy about the change, what's more, it are also impulse the development of the economy and the harmony of that society.  Disobeying the unjust laws is really important and advantageous for every individual, society and the legal system of the nation.
Furthermore, every citizens should have the right of resisting the unjust laws in a democratic society.  Whether every individual is allowed to challenge unjust laws  reflect whether the citizens have the right and freedom.  A nation which is glad to accept the different voice about the laws will develop and become more and more booming.  Even though I was a Chinese who wan to doubt some laws' fairness, I cannot speak out not to metion the fact that I have the right to resist the unjust laws.  Therefore, it is the obstacle that prevent our country developing and becoming better.

我看了下老G的范文，完全是反驳它的。。。好有思维逻辑性....我写的感觉。。怎么说，很白，而且还不知道这种一味同意对不对，但是我确实没觉得有什么错的。。。。另外哈，最后总结的一段我还没写。。。不知道怎么写。。。大家可以给点建议不？
谢谢了~鞠躬~

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为什么没有人甩我。。。