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Topic1: Rather than help their children do homework, the parents should encourage their children to do it independently, do you agree or not? Explain why with details and examples.

Nowadays, as education is regarded as the key factor that promotes the children’s competitive power in their future, increasing number of parents are willing to invest more time and money on children’s education, sometimes, they even choose to help their children do homework. As far as I am concerned, it is not necessary for parents to help their children to do homework, even worse, it may cause something negative to the children.

To begin with, doing homework is the basic obligation of every students, no one can be exception. As the old saying indicates, “practice make perfect”. The target of homework is to help students understand what has been taught and explained in class by the teacher, and create a chance for them to solve problems by themselves, with which to test whether they have learned thoroughly. For example, when I was a primary school student, my teacher will leave homework after class everyday. Comparing with those who refused to finish the home work or just copy it from fellows, those who finish exercise carefully would get higher score in every examination.

Moreover, children should be given an opportunity to learn how to be independent and be responsible for what they have chosen. No matter they want it to be or not, anyway, the children will be grown up one day, and they have no choice but to leave their home and of course, their parents. Obviously, parents can not be responsible for their kids for all their lifetime, maybe they can help their children to finish homework today, but they can not help to solve any problems that is to happen in the future. In the ancient Greek, there is an old tradition, which required that the most promising young people in a community leave away and live on their own when they ware 16 years old, and ten years later, they would be asked back to their community as next leader. Seemingly cruel and unnecessary, but the experience where they got when they ware facing the difficulties and seeking for the solution help them to be outstanding and also help the community to be successful.


Admittedly, loving their kids with no spare effort is the instinct shared by every parent.
If possible, they can be asked to do anything that is helpful to their son or daughter. However, sometimes, it can be harmful, even lethal to education. For example, one of my friends, Tony, whose families would do everything possible for him even before he was aware of what happened, can hardly take care of himself and make choice on his own when he graduated from high school. Then, he was refused by higher education institutions, because they did not want a student who can not take responsibility for himself.


To conclude, I think the children should be given a chance to experience the world by themselves and try to make mistakes and learn from it. Every ship will leave off harbor to seek its own storm, do not let their future be stored in peace, waiting to fade.
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