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2012/2/21独立写作
100312NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To make children to well at school, parents should limit the hour that a child spends on watching TV.Use specific reasons to support your answer.


When asked about whether to limit the hour that a child spends on watching TV, opinions are divided.Some may insist that watching TV is a kind of rest for children which can not be limited as TV programs provide plenty of information for children.Such information are believed beneficial to children.In my opinion,however,i do in favor of the claim that we should limit the hour to watch TV as watching TV does harm to our time,body,mind and life.


Firstly, watching TV is a waste of time which means we can easily get the things done without television.I bet no one could deny that television is mean for children to get information outside the world. Take me for example,I used to watch tv programs to get contemporary news or watch cartoon,however,with the help of Internet,I am able to access flooded information all over the world and use the software to play the cartoon i like.That is very cool as I can get whatever I want rather than waiting for certain program, not to mention the long advertisement time!


What's more,long time of watching tv significantly damages children both mentally and physically.As we all know,the longer  children watch television,the more damage their eyes will receive.It's very rare to find out one that still have a good eyesight after a long time of watching tv.As long as you walk into the streets of Nanjing, you can easily find that more and more small children are wearing glasses which is unusual when I were a child due to watching TV.In addition, as many critics imply,the thoughts most TV programs convey are for adults such as programs filled with romance or violence.Influenced by these programs,no wonder that lots of children are premature and shift their focus to maintain a romantic relationship rather than studying.


Another reason that i am eager to strees is that too much tv watching usually gives children dull life experiense.Apart from television programs,there are many other meaningful activities for children which will make our life colorful.For instance,playing football,observing the ants carrying their food under a tree in spring, catch the butterflies for fun and so on.Nowaday,however,children spend too much time watching tv which prevents them from various meaning activities.Also,by playing with friends,observing the nature.These activities are known to broaden their eyesight and improve the ability to communicate which enable them to do well at school.


After ruminating the three disadvantages above,we can easily come into the inclusion that parents should limit the time of their children watching TV for the sake of their time,body,mind and life.

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2月22日 101030NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easier to become educated than in the past.

Education seems to play a more and more indispensable role in our contemporary society. When asked about the issue that whether modern people are easily to become educated than in the past.Opinions varies,however,I firmly hold the viewpoint that it's easier to educate people now.

First and foremost,more approches are available for us to get education such as online schools,specialized websites and so on.As a student who wants further study in American,taking Toefl tests is essential.This demand results in lots of English education schools like New Oriental which offers help to them while we might depend on ourselves in the past.What's more,take my little brother for example.One day,i walked into his room surprised to find out that he was talking to his teacher online.By watching media,handing in homework through Internet,education is easily realized by the Internet!Thus,with the assistance of Internet,education is at hand for children.

Moreover,teaching,as a profession,has become more and more scientific.Including the experience of teaching in the past,useful formulas of teaching are found by researchers.There is no denying that these formulas are practical as they are proved successful for a long time.Therefore,people are educated efficiently and systematically by such formulas.Not only does former experience work,but also other scientific subjects like psychology take effect.Psychology are aimed to study the behavior and mind,as we all know,which could explore the mind of a student.I do believe that such studies are a probabaly way to show the teacher what the student's mind is.With a deep understanding of student,teachers are believed to develop more efficient methods to educate people.This will definitely make people more easiler to be educated.

In addition,cultrue fusion are of great importance.The main characteristic of our era is the large numbers of information.Plenty of information is at hand for us,and thereby most of people get to know more about the world.Imagine a chinese person who is dedicated in watching american tv series such as the big bang,heroes.Influenced by the american culture, people who are fostered by a eastern country are sure to have a broadened eyesight.Therefore, no wonder knowledge is quickly received.

After ruminating the reasons above,beacuse more approches are accessible for us,modern people are educated scientifically and the culture fusion causes people to receive knowlege easily,people are now easier to get education indeed.

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When asked about whether to limit the hour that a child spends on watching TV, opinions are divided.Some may insist that watching TV is a kind of rest for children which can not be limited as TV programs provide plenty of information for children.Such information are believed beneficial to children.In my opinion,however,i do in favor of the claim that we should limit the hour to watch TV as watching TV does harm to our time,body,mind and life.) h8 s5 I! ~9 O  i
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Firstly, watching TV is a waste of time which means we can easily get the things done without television.I bet no one could deny that television is mean for children to get information outside the world. （一二两句感觉很突兀，好像在讲不同的观点，也没什么衔接捏）Take me for example,I used to watch tv programs to get contemporary news or watch cartoon,however,with the help of Internet,I am able to access flooded information all over the world and use the software to play the cartoon i like.That is very cool as I can get whatever I want rather than waiting for certain program, not to mention the long advertisement time!
   What's more,long time of watching tv significantly damages children both mentally and physically.As we all know,the longer  children watch television,the more damage their eyes will receive.It's very rare to find out one that still have a good eyesight after a long time of watching tv.As long as you walk into the streets of Nanjing, you can easily find that more and more small children are wearing glasses which is unusual when I were a child due to watching TV.In addition, as many critics imply,the thoughts most TV programs convey are for adults such as programs filled with romance or violence.Influenced by these programs,no wonder that lots of children are premature and shift their focus to maintain a romantic relationship rather than studying.

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     Another reason that i am eager to strees（去s) is that too much tv watching usually gives children dull life experiense.Apart from television programs,there are many other meaningful activities for children which will make our life colorful.For instance,playing football,observing the ants carrying their food under a tree in spring, catching the butterflies for fun and so on.Nowadays,however,children spend too much time watching tv which prevents them from various meaningful activities.Also,by playing with friends,observing the nature.（没有主语）These activities are known to broaden their eyesight and improve the ability to communicate which enable them to do well at school.(如果两句要合起来，主语也应该是children.)
    After ruminating the three disadvantages above,we can easily come into the inclusion that parents should limit the time of their children watching TV for the sake of their time,body,mind and life.

yagushou26UID: 3141058

4# xiesisiminerva 多谢哈~我那句的意思是说电视能够做的是：获取信息。但这个电脑也能做，而且更加的快捷，方便。所以论证了 TV is a waste of time.

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